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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 9, 2017 9:37:26 GMT -5
Does not help that my ***** issues flared up this weeekend --oh I'd rather have my knee hurt more than have this happen.
Did they bleep out neck issues? LOL Unless I typoed . . .
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 9, 2017 15:14:56 GMT -5
Ouch, sounds like you didn't have a good weekend at all.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 9, 2017 19:29:00 GMT -5
Ouch, sounds like you didn't have a good weekend at all. |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 9, 2017 19:29:37 GMT -5
Hope the next one is better on you. <3
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 9, 2017 19:37:19 GMT -5
Hope the next one is better on you. <3 |
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Apr 11, 2017 23:25:35 GMT -5
You are still doing great! My gosh, your fics are so inspirational.
Anyways, writers like you have inspired me to start my own fic called 'A Lesson on Empathy'. Anyways, I was curious, would you mind if I promoted your work in my fix, adding a link to yours fic's with my personal reviews!
Anyways, I also wanted to greet an old friend, so how's life treating you?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 12, 2017 10:20:14 GMT -5
You are still doing great! My gosh, your fics are so inspirational. Anyways, writers like you have inspired me to start my own fic called 'A Lesson on Empathy'. Anyways, I was curious, would you mind if I promoted your work in my fix, adding a link to yours fic's with my personal reviews! Anyways, I also wanted to greet an old friend, so how's life treating you?
Hiya Lynx!
Sure you can link my fic. Glad you enjoyed it. I do plant to finish and have ideas now how to work that all out. Just got the next installment of Vision fo Sghadows which hopefully will give me just enough info timeline wise so i can finish NEW BLOOD proper. I have a whole slew of shorter tales planned. . .
Doing ok otherwise except for my knee and neck but hey not bad for an old geezer! |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 14, 2017 17:40:06 GMT -5
Chapter 12 has been edited, with new info from Vision Of Shadows. Spoiler alert to those who have not read the books yet! I will be reworking Chapter thirteen as well and now be able to finish 14 and write fifteen and NEW BLOOD will finally be finished! But oh my-do we have a ton of offshoot tales to weave from this.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 14, 2017 20:43:31 GMT -5
Cool!  |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 15, 2017 15:00:49 GMT -5
BIG Bump! Chapter 14 part one is UP! I don't have am illustration yet but will ad later on! I figure you all have waited long enough. Still writing Part Two. . .
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 15, 2017 19:30:30 GMT -5
SPOILER ALERT!!!
If anyne reads Chapt 12-14 part one, let me know if I forgot anyone from SkyClan who still lives.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 15, 2017 20:11:47 GMT -5
YESSSS! That's great!! |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 16, 2017 0:20:48 GMT -5
Chap 14 part one is not perfect as I could have added detail and I keep thinking of more, but I will later on and just add it in when I post part two.
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Post by Spottail on Apr 16, 2017 8:04:27 GMT -5
Ya did miss some SkyClan Warriors and Cherrytail shouldn't be there she's recovering in Barely's barn with her kit Cloudmist
Who ya missed is Finpaw, Reedpaw, Dewpaw, Blossomheart, Ballaleaf, Fallowfern and Macgyver
That's all ya missed
also wow! I can't wait for part two
plus happy Easter
ps. Lilyheart's kits are warriors now
hold on and I'll tell you the names
Larksong,
Leafshade,
Honeyfur
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 16, 2017 9:59:20 GMT -5
Ya did miss some SkyClan Warriors and Cherrytail shouldn't be there she's recovering in Barely's barn with her kit Cloudmist Who ya missed is Finpaw, Reedpaw, Dewpaw, Blossomheart, Ballaleaf, Fallowfern and Macgyver That's all ya missed also wow! I can't wait for part two plus happy Easter ps. Lilyheart's kits are warriors now hold on and I'll tell you the names Larksong, Leafshade, Honeyfur |
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Post by Spottail on Apr 16, 2017 17:18:43 GMT -5
You're welcome
And I didn't know he did
I'll go and look too
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Post by Spottail on Apr 16, 2017 17:43:51 GMT -5
There's nothing in book that said he did
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 16, 2017 19:29:59 GMT -5
There's nothing in book that said he did |
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Post by Spottail on Apr 16, 2017 20:05:14 GMT -5
I think that you're thinking of Echosong
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Post by Owlmoon on Apr 16, 2017 20:59:26 GMT -5
OOH UPDATE ON PHANTOMS FICTION OOOOOOH
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Post by Owlmoon on Apr 16, 2017 21:04:55 GMT -5
Typo on willowleaf
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Post by Owlmoon on Apr 16, 2017 21:17:28 GMT -5
Eaglepaw sentence has a lot of typos. In battle Squirrelflight part. Typos.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 16, 2017 22:23:06 GMT -5
I think that you're thinking of Echosong |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 16, 2017 22:24:28 GMT -5
Eaglepaw sentence has a lot of typos. In battle Squirrelflight part. Typos.
I am not shocked. Rushing things . . .I will fix them! |
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Post by Spottail on Apr 17, 2017 10:07:43 GMT -5
I looked at that already and the only death I saw was Echosong's
That's the only SkyClan death in the third book I saw too
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 17, 2017 10:50:02 GMT -5
I looked at that already and the only death I saw was Echosong's That's the only SkyClan death in the third book I saw too
Someone them died when Darktail killed them in the Gorge.. dang gonna have to re read that book and write down who dies along the journey to find the lake.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 17, 2017 14:58:10 GMT -5
Thanks Owl!
I found pleny more typos and one dumb autocorrect in there too.
Now going to sit and reread Hawkwing's Journey-and see if I missed anything! Want to have SkyClan's roster correct!
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Post by Spottail on Apr 17, 2017 16:31:41 GMT -5
No, from the sickness only two died Firefern and Bellaleaf's brother
Mac didn't and became a mentor
Finkit didn't and became an apprentice
Blossomheart didn't and became a mentor
The one's that died in the battle was Sharpclaw, Stormheart, Bouncefire, Patchfoot and Snipkit
The cats that stayed behind are Mintfur and Nettlesplash because of their kits
Cherrytail and Cloudmist are at Barley's barn
Curlypaw and Parselyseed are with two-legs
Waspwhisker, Birdwing Pebbleshine and Fidgetpaw were taken by taken by two-legs
And you also forgot Rabbitleap
And yeah I think that is everything
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 18, 2017 12:18:08 GMT -5
No, from the sickness only two died Firefern and Bellaleaf's brother Mac didn't and became a mentor Finkit didn't and became an apprentice Blossomheart didn't and became a mentor The one's that died in the battle was Sharpclaw, Stormheart, Bouncefire, Patchfoot and Snipkit The cats that stayed behind are Mintfur and Nettlesplash because of their kits Cherrytail and Cloudmist are at Barley's barn Curlypaw and Parselyseed are with two-legs Waspwhisker, Birdwing Pebbleshine and Fidgetpaw were taken by taken by two-legs And you also forgot Rabbitleap And yeah I think that is everything |
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Post by Spottail on Apr 18, 2017 14:47:10 GMT -5
Cool
and you're welcome
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