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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 26, 2017 14:05:33 GMT -5
Reading Hawkwing's Journey and have discovered who Twigkit and Violetkit's father is!!! And their mother! And I have an inkling of what will be in Vison of Shadows arc now. Ideas are spinning in my head for Chaps 14 and 15 but I have to know more about where the heck the shattered remans of SkyClan go!
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Mar 26, 2017 14:12:02 GMT -5
True. Still, have to find the right books and stuff to get the information I need...
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 26, 2017 21:21:03 GMT -5
True. Still, have to find the right books and stuff to get the information I need... |
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Post by Spottail on Mar 27, 2017 8:21:00 GMT -5
Hey Phantom I left ya post a post on the Survivors 2
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 27, 2017 11:00:37 GMT -5
Thanks I'll go check it out later when I can spend time on it
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Mar 27, 2017 12:03:41 GMT -5
True. Still, have to find the right books and stuff to get the information I need... Oh! I may take you up on that. Like, I really my. O.O Hum... maybe I should start outlining the story this week so I can figure out the best questions to ask...
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 27, 2017 12:14:43 GMT -5
If you need help with that, my brain is full of info :-) Oh! I may take you up on that. Like, I really my. O.O Hum... maybe I should start outlining the story this week so I can figure out the best questions to ask...
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 27, 2017 13:50:07 GMT -5
Owlkit blinks hopefully. "Can we have a new chapter? They're so good! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!"  |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 27, 2017 15:07:19 GMT -5
Owlkit blinks hopefully. "Can we have a new chapter? They're so good! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!"
I do apologize for this! But things are starting to come together in my head as I read. . . |
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 28, 2017 21:33:16 GMT -5
It's okay. It's just that your story is soooooooooooooo good........ |
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Post by Spottail on Mar 29, 2017 7:44:54 GMT -5
I've written some more owl
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 29, 2017 12:58:04 GMT -5
It's okay. It's just that your story is soooooooooooooo good........
hehehe Darktail more than meets his match in Phantomstrike. . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 29, 2017 14:05:45 GMT -5
Hey! I finally got the chance to read more! I am up to chapter 6: part 2 now. It's just as good as I remember, but I did find a couple minor grammatical errors in Part 1.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 29, 2017 20:35:49 GMT -5
Hey! I finally got the chance to read more! I am up to chapter 6: part 2 now. It's just as good as I remember, but I did find a couple minor grammatical errors in Part 1.  |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 29, 2017 20:38:00 GMT -5
I will have to later. They aren't so much typos are they are just punctuation errors, form what I remember.
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 29, 2017 20:38:18 GMT -5
I've written some more owl flips pages to Survivors... |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 29, 2017 20:46:07 GMT -5
I will have to later. They aren't so much typos are they are just punctuation errors, form what I remember. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 29, 2017 20:47:40 GMT -5
I think at one point you forgot punctuation entirely after someone finished talking, too.  But it happens. |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 29, 2017 21:40:20 GMT -5
I think at one point you forgot punctuation entirely after someone finished talking, too. But it happens. |
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 29, 2017 21:45:54 GMT -5
Maybe, but that's a lot to read!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 29, 2017 22:32:56 GMT -5
Maybe, but that's a lot to read! |
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Mar 30, 2017 14:15:52 GMT -5
Typos are killers.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 31, 2017 14:27:55 GMT -5
I'm in the midst of formulating the last remaining chapters and, after reading Hawkwind's Journey and the Manga at the end-- it does appear that SkyClan's "return" is farther in the future than the end of NEW BLOOD-born of smoke and fire. Hopefully I'll get more clues soon, in the 2nd Vision of Shadows book and more in the 3rd one, and can make that final "fixed point in time" determination and get this tale done, so I can write shorter ones, and finish TRAPPED!'
Thanks to all my fans for your patience!!!
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Post by Spottail on Mar 31, 2017 16:29:08 GMT -5
You're welcome and it's Hawkwing not Hawkwind
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 31, 2017 19:47:37 GMT -5
You're welcome and it's Hawkwing not Hawkwind |
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 31, 2017 19:56:55 GMT -5
FUNFUNFUNFUNF
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Post by Spottail on Mar 31, 2017 21:23:17 GMT -5
Hey, owl I just wrote a bunch more of my story, with another cliff hanger.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 1, 2017 22:40:54 GMT -5
Yes! Can't wait, Phantom!  Well, I can. But I'm really looking forward to what you are going to come up with! |
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 8, 2017 23:27:43 GMT -5
Sorry so absent-it has been a busy few weeks. . . .just too much to do and never enough time.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Apr 9, 2017 3:27:55 GMT -5
I'll second that fact.
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But it happens.
