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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 13:35:06 GMT -5
it makes little sense really like if that's so then why is Leporello outright laughing at Elvira in a few scenes also why have that when you can just give gay subtext for... bOTH OF THEM and also Blossomfall too (she was paired up with Thornclaw for no reason) even though it's obvious she's a lesbian lmao @ - Right?! He just sees her as another silly, hopeless woman Lmao, right? Literally same Thornclaw is literally older than Bramblestar; Brightheart's his sister, meaning Dovewing (around Blossomfall's age) is his great-great niece! Double ew. And! Blossomfall so had a crush on Hollyleaf. (Pretty sure it was Blossomfall. I don't remember, it was awhile ago). Also, don't get me started on how they just threw Whitewing and Birchfall together when either one or both of them was gay.
Please check out my fanfic, ListenUntil like the last ten minutes where he's like "wait! This woman is as abused and manipulated by the Don as I am! hOw CoUlD I hAvE kNoWn" erin hunter is a lot of Yikes all around lmao
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 13:36:11 GMT -5
I like to imagine that the mods were completely confused by my references to NSFW operas and just assumed the best out of it lmao And no, I can see avatars and signatures just fine for some reason @ - Probably saw the ABC Magic Flute and like a Saturday morning cartoon Don Giovanni or something, lmao. That's weird! I can't see them, I think it's time to ask the mods
Please check out my fanfic, Listen"a cartoon Don Giovanni" that sounds so bad I would pay to see how horrible it would be
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 13:44:33 GMT -5
@ - Right?! He just sees her as another silly, hopeless woman Lmao, right? Literally same Thornclaw is literally older than Bramblestar; Brightheart's his sister, meaning Dovewing (around Blossomfall's age) is his great-great niece! Double ew. And! Blossomfall so had a crush on Hollyleaf. (Pretty sure it was Blossomfall. I don't remember, it was awhile ago). Also, don't get me started on how they just threw Whitewing and Birchfall together when either one or both of them was gay.
Please check out my fanfic, Listen Until like the last ten minutes where he's like "wait! This woman is as abused and manipulated by the Don as I am! hOw CoUlD I hAvE kNoWn" erin hunter is a lot of Yikes all around lmao @ - Omg, right? "hOw HoRRiblE the dOn Is to Her" Yeah, no consistency there and incest, smh
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 13:44:59 GMT -5
@ - Probably saw the ABC Magic Flute and like a Saturday morning cartoon Don Giovanni or something, lmao. That's weird! I can't see them, I think it's time to ask the mods
Please check out my fanfic, Listen "a cartoon Don Giovanni" that sounds so bad I would pay to see how horrible it would be @ - God, can you imagine that horror show? my lord
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 13:54:22 GMT -5
Until like the last ten minutes where he's like "wait! This woman is as abused and manipulated by the Don as I am! hOw CoUlD I hAvE kNoWn" erin hunter is a lot of Yikes all around lmao @ - Omg, right? "hOw HoRRiblE the dOn Is to Her" Yeah, no consistency there and incest, smh
Please check out my fanfic, Listen"wE aRe AcTuAlLy SoRt Of ThE sAmE?!?!?" and then there's Spottedleaf's Heart which is even more Absolutely Disgusting
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 14:00:59 GMT -5
"a cartoon Don Giovanni" that sounds so bad I would pay to see how horrible it would be @ - God, can you imagine that horror show? my lord
Please check out my fanfic, Listenprediction for when that exists: Leporello is nothing more than comic relief. At the end the Don feels sorry for what he did, tells this to he Commander, and the whole story's moral becomes about apologizing.
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 14:59:37 GMT -5
@ - Omg, right? "hOw HoRRiblE the dOn Is to Her" Yeah, no consistency there and incest, smh
Please check out my fanfic, Listen "wE aRe AcTuAlLy SoRt Of ThE sAmE?!?!?" and then there's Spottedleaf's Heart which is even more Absolutely Disgusting @ - A reflection in the mirror, tbh OMG, I DIDN'T READ IT TELL ME
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 15:04:47 GMT -5
@ - God, can you imagine that horror show? my lord
Please check out my fanfic, Listen prediction for when that exists: Leporello is nothing more than comic relief. At the end the Don feels sorry for what he did, tells this to he Commander, and the whole story's moral becomes about apologizing. @ - Leporello: Stupid kid jokes. Literally adds nothing. Anna: perfect princess Elvira: annoying drama queen Don: Hero who does something really bad like say something mean Commander: Father figure who is disappointed but accepts Don's apology and Don and Anna live happily ever after, the end The other characters? Stock, possibly only one line or just left out
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 15:10:20 GMT -5
"wE aRe AcTuAlLy SoRt Of ThE sAmE?!?!?" and then there's Spottedleaf's Heart which is even more Absolutely Disgusting @ - A reflection in the mirror, tbh OMG, I DIDN'T READ IT TELL ME
Please check out my fanfic, ListenThey are very similar- a cynical character in love with the Don, and who both ultimately will do anything to be in a relationship with him, they both try to help him at the last second, only for the Don to reject their advice and die. One of few differences though is that in Ensemble as it has been a year since the Don's "death", Elvira has gotten over him and only feels pity that he's wasted his own life, where Leporello obviously hasn't. Thistleclaw and Spottedpaw (not Spottedleaf as a full grown cat, as a kit and apprentice) are a thing. Yes, a thing. It's just as creepy and child-unfriendly as you'd think and obviously an additional excuse to get Thistleclaw, who was a jerk but still loyal to his Clan and loves his mate and son, into the Dark Forest. It was so horrible the fans proceeded to chase Vicky out of writing the Warriors novellas because she wrote it
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 15:15:38 GMT -5
prediction for when that exists: Leporello is nothing more than comic relief. At the end the Don feels sorry for what he did, tells this to he Commander, and the whole story's moral becomes about apologizing. @ - Leporello: Stupid kid jokes. Literally adds nothing. Anna: perfect princess Elvira: annoying drama queen Don: Hero who does something really bad like say something mean Commander: Father figure who is disappointed but accepts Don's apology and Don and Anna live happily ever after, the end The other characters? Stock, possibly only one line or just left out
Please check out my fanfic, ListenAnna and Ottavio would be in a happy loving relationship. Elvira and the Don would probably end up together even though she'd be shown as a huge jerk. The Commander wouldn't be killed. Zerlina and Masetto would probably exist only as comic relief sidekicks to someone else. There would also be a direct to DVD sequel about the antics of the Don's kids. You know what Leporello would be? He's be like Batty from FernGully. That's what would happen. God have mercy on our souls.
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 15:18:11 GMT -5
@ - A reflection in the mirror, tbh OMG, I DIDN'T READ IT TELL ME
Please check out my fanfic, Listen They are very similar- a cynical character in love with the Don, and who both ultimately will do anything to be in a relationship with him, they both try to help him at the last second, only for the Don to reject their advice and die. One of few differences though is that in Ensemble as it has been a year since the Don's "death", Elvira has gotten over him and only feels pity that he's wasted his own life, where Leporello obviously hasn't. Thistleclaw and Spottedpaw (not Spottedleaf as a full grown cat, as a kit and apprentice) are a thing. Yes, a thing. It's just as creepy and child-unfriendly as you'd think and obviously an additional excuse to get Thistleclaw, who was a jerk but still loyal to his Clan and loves his mate and son, into the Dark Forest. It was so horrible the fans proceeded to chase Vicky out of writing the Warriors novellas because she wrote it @ - Yeah, the progression correlates really well imo Ok then, lol. Vicky must've wrote her character entirely in the first series, because the Spottedleaf portrayed later is much different, and when Spottedleaf's alive she would seem like the kind of character to go for Thistleclaw tbh. You could say that she grew wiser in StarClan (debatable), but everyone else was the same when they died
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 15:20:21 GMT -5
@ - Leporello: Stupid kid jokes. Literally adds nothing. Anna: perfect princess Elvira: annoying drama queen Don: Hero who does something really bad like say something mean Commander: Father figure who is disappointed but accepts Don's apology and Don and Anna live happily ever after, the end The other characters? Stock, possibly only one line or just left out
Please check out my fanfic, Listen Anna and Ottavio would be in a happy loving relationship. Elvira and the Don would probably end up together even though she'd be shown as a huge jerk. The Commander wouldn't be killed. Zerlina and Masetto would probably exist only as comic relief sidekicks to someone else. There would also be a direct to DVD sequel about the antics of the Don's kids. You know what Leporello would be? He's be like Batty from FernGully. That's what would happen. God have mercy on our souls. @ - Oml, no. NO NO NO Oml, he needs to die though! thAt's the WhOle pOInt Like parrots or something around the Commandee and Anna, probably NO OML Oh my lord, I can see that so clealry I am dead
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 15:22:30 GMT -5
They are very similar- a cynical character in love with the Don, and who both ultimately will do anything to be in a relationship with him, they both try to help him at the last second, only for the Don to reject their advice and die. One of few differences though is that in Ensemble as it has been a year since the Don's "death", Elvira has gotten over him and only feels pity that he's wasted his own life, where Leporello obviously hasn't. Thistleclaw and Spottedpaw (not Spottedleaf as a full grown cat, as a kit and apprentice) are a thing. Yes, a thing. It's just as creepy and child-unfriendly as you'd think and obviously an additional excuse to get Thistleclaw, who was a jerk but still loyal to his Clan and loves his mate and son, into the Dark Forest. It was so horrible the fans proceeded to chase Vicky out of writing the Warriors novellas because she wrote it @ - Yeah, the progression correlates really well imo Ok then, lol. Vicky must've wrote her character entirely in the first series, because the Spottedleaf portrayed later is much different, and when Spottedleaf's alive she would seem like the kind of character to go for Thistleclaw tbh. You could say that she grew wiser in StarClan (debatable), but everyone else was the same when they died
Please check out my fanfic, Listenanother thing to add to my List of Things That Should Be Motifs in Opera But Aren't: Leporello and Elvira parallels. yeah it's a lot of Yikes because it's basically a relationship between a creepy forty year old man and a twelve year old with cats. and it implies that the reason Spottedleaf went after Fireheart was because she was doing the same thing Thistleclaw did to her??? it's just a lot of No and it's really ooc for everyone involved too
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 15:28:15 GMT -5
Anna and Ottavio would be in a happy loving relationship. Elvira and the Don would probably end up together even though she'd be shown as a huge jerk. The Commander wouldn't be killed. Zerlina and Masetto would probably exist only as comic relief sidekicks to someone else. There would also be a direct to DVD sequel about the antics of the Don's kids. You know what Leporello would be? He's be like Batty from FernGully. That's what would happen. God have mercy on our souls. @ - Oml, no. NO NO NO Oml, he needs to die though! thAt's the WhOle pOInt Like parrots or something around the Commandee and Anna, probably NO OML Oh my lord, I can see that so clealry I am dead
Please check out my fanfic, Listenthe Don doesn't "date" women. he just calls them mean names like he just travels around door to door and yells g-rated insults at them before running off it would be a ton of b list celebrities that obviously really don't want to do it but were down on their luck at the moment and needed money also there would be references to outdated memes and it would be offhandedly shown Leporello got a female hetero love interest at the very end so Christian moral watchdogs wouldn't be angry at The Gay also most of the second act wouldn't even exist the commander would just show up at the party at the end of act one
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 15:28:30 GMT -5
@ - Yeah, the progression correlates really well imo Ok then, lol. Vicky must've wrote her character entirely in the first series, because the Spottedleaf portrayed later is much different, and when Spottedleaf's alive she would seem like the kind of character to go for Thistleclaw tbh. You could say that she grew wiser in StarClan (debatable), but everyone else was the same when they died
Please check out my fanfic, Listen another thing to add to my List of Things That Should Be Motifs in Opera But Aren't: Leporello and Elvira parallels. yeah it's a lot of Yikes because it's basically a relationship between a creepy forty year old man and a twelve year old with cats. and it implies that the reason Spottedleaf went after Fireheart was because she was doing the same thing Thistleclaw did to her??? it's just a lot of No and it's really ooc for everyone involved too @ - Yes! Definitely. You could take Don out of the equation and where would their characters be? I think you placing Ensemble ahead of Don's death is a great way to explore that Oml, ewwwwwww. On soooo many levels. And that is so wrong; how messed up is that?! Jeez
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 15:33:58 GMT -5
@ - Oml, no. NO NO NO Oml, he needs to die though! thAt's the WhOle pOInt Like parrots or something around the Commandee and Anna, probably NO OML Oh my lord, I can see that so clealry I am dead
Please check out my fanfic, Listen the Don doesn't "date" women. he just calls them mean names like he just travels around door to door and yells g-rated insults at them before running off it would be a ton of b list celebrities that obviously really don't want to do it but were down on their luck at the moment and needed money also there would be references to outdated memes and it would be offhandedly shown Leporello got a female hetero love interest at the very end so Christian moral watchdogs wouldn't be angry at The Gay also most of the second act wouldn't even exist the commander would just show up at the party at the end of act one @ - Ruins the whole thing right there. Oh yes, no gay here. Keep that stuff Christian! Just pop in with no explanation or reason
Don takes ladies' scarves or something equally dumb and "symbolic" The voice acting wouldn't even be consistent, the writing would be lazy Everyone gets a happily ever after... As long as it's hetero. And Christian The Commander is like Santa Clause or something and just brings in presents and elves and pet deer (not caribou, don't want to confuse the children) and stuff
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 15:38:03 GMT -5
another thing to add to my List of Things That Should Be Motifs in Opera But Aren't: Leporello and Elvira parallels. yeah it's a lot of Yikes because it's basically a relationship between a creepy forty year old man and a twelve year old with cats. and it implies that the reason Spottedleaf went after Fireheart was because she was doing the same thing Thistleclaw did to her??? it's just a lot of No and it's really ooc for everyone involved too @ - Yes! Definitely. You could take Don out of the equation and where would their characters be? I think you placing Ensemble ahead of Don's death is a great way to explore that Oml, ewwwwwww. On soooo many levels. And that is so wrong; how messed up is that?! Jeez
Please check out my fanfic, Listentheir ideas of where to continue their lives after the Don's death have gone pretty much nowhere. Leporello obviously hasn't found a better master, and Elvira (who in this version didn't decide to be a nun because of the no religion thing, but a cat spreading good morals around the city instead) lives in a train station and steals cigarettes from people. But at least she has a supportive lesbian girlfriend now so in a sense things are better for her. (Although it's shown she was almost happiest before the Don came and she was still an idealistic pet cat living in the Brookfield suburbs not far off from Chicago.) yeah it's Not Good. The other two novellas that came with it were actually pretty good, but not Spottedleaf's Heart. Honestly I didn't like how she kept trying to control Firestar in his dreams or whatever? I'd much prefer if she was more of a mentor figure to him than a romantic interest (him having a childhood crush on her like a student crushing on a teacher though would be ok) because she's literally sandstorm's aunt and also because the love thing got creepy
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 15:44:08 GMT -5
the Don doesn't "date" women. he just calls them mean names like he just travels around door to door and yells g-rated insults at them before running off it would be a ton of b list celebrities that obviously really don't want to do it but were down on their luck at the moment and needed money also there would be references to outdated memes and it would be offhandedly shown Leporello got a female hetero love interest at the very end so Christian moral watchdogs wouldn't be angry at The Gay also most of the second act wouldn't even exist the commander would just show up at the party at the end of act one @ - Ruins the whole thing right there. Oh yes, no gay here. Keep that stuff Christian! Just pop in with no explanation or reason
Don takes ladies' scarves or something equally dumb and "symbolic" The voice acting wouldn't even be consistent, the writing would be lazy Everyone gets a happily ever after... As long as it's hetero. And Christian The Commander is like Santa Clause or something and just brings in presents and elves and pet deer (not caribou, don't want to confuse the children) and stuff
Please check out my fanfic, ListenThe catalogue aria just becomes Leporello showing off the Don's immense collection of scarves lmao it would be animated in pretty cheap hand drawn animation or something there would be a pop song remix of the overture they wouldn't have swords they'd just threaten to fight there would be a bit where it looks like the Don's dead and someone says "is he...?" And then he turns out to be alive and it's supposed to be Heart Warming(TM) but it just ticks off everyone in the audience because we want him to die already the Don would be the Cool Smart-Talking Hero(TM) who's supposed to look cool by being selfish and only in it for himself (he really just makes the audience hate him more) only to learn how to Care For Others but here's the ultimate question: who is the villain
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 15:44:24 GMT -5
@ - Yes! Definitely. You could take Don out of the equation and where would their characters be? I think you placing Ensemble ahead of Don's death is a great way to explore that Oml, ewwwwwww. On soooo many levels. And that is so wrong; how messed up is that?! Jeez
Please check out my fanfic, Listen their ideas of where to continue their lives after the Don's death have gone pretty much nowhere. Leporello obviously hasn't found a better master, and Elvira (who in this version didn't decide to be a nun because of the no religion thing, but a cat spreading good morals around the city instead) lives in a train station and steals cigarettes from people. But at least she has a supportive lesbian girlfriend now so in a sense things are better for her. (Although it's shown she was almost happiest before the Don came and she was still an idealistic pet cat living in the Brookfield suburbs not far off from Chicago.) yeah it's Not Good. The other two novellas that came with it were actually pretty good, but not Spottedleaf's Heart. Honestly I didn't like how she kept trying to control Firestar in his dreams or whatever? I'd much prefer if she was more of a mentor figure to him than a romantic interest (him having a childhood crush on her like a student crushing on a teacher though would be ok) because she's literally sandstorm's aunt and also because the love thing got creepy @ - He never will, lmao, being obsessed and all. Elvira, smoking, as a cat is honestly the funniest image omg. At least she's happier then she was when torn up over Don Yeah, that annoyed the heck outta me. LEAVE HIM ALONE! Me too, honestly. At least it would be less weird that she kept visiting him while he was mated to Sandstorm. And, yeah, the whole love thing was very creepy because of her, sheesh. Firepaw was just a naïve and hormonal tom; she's like the creepy cougar lady who drools over the local hot teen boy
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 15:54:30 GMT -5
@ - Ruins the whole thing right there. Oh yes, no gay here. Keep that stuff Christian! Just pop in with no explanation or reason
Don takes ladies' scarves or something equally dumb and "symbolic" The voice acting wouldn't even be consistent, the writing would be lazy Everyone gets a happily ever after... As long as it's hetero. And Christian The Commander is like Santa Clause or something and just brings in presents and elves and pet deer (not caribou, don't want to confuse the children) and stuff
Please check out my fanfic, Listen The catalogue aria just becomes Leporello showing off the Don's immense collection of scarves lmao it would be animated in pretty cheap hand drawn animation or something there would be a pop song remix of the overture they wouldn't have swords they'd just threaten to fight there would be a bit where it looks like the Don's dead and someone says "is he...?" And then he turns out to be alive and it's supposed to be Heart Warming(TM) but it just ticks off everyone in the audience because we want him to die already the Don would be the Cool Smart-Talking Hero(TM) who's supposed to look cool by being selfish and only in it for himself (he really just makes the audience hate him more) only to learn how to Care For Others but here's the ultimate question: who is the villain @ - Lmao. Ironically sorted into rainbow colors because it's hidden adgenda™️ Really cheap, like flip motion lol NO. Or even worse, a country song version Or argue and proceed to upset themselves It would literally be him looking like he's sleeping with poor audio, screechy, "sad" violin music and then dramatic ochestral music as he rises He learns by small scenes where it'd be like, "Sharing is Caring" and "Everybody Cleans Up" The villain... like maybe the statue becomes a gargoyle or some other creature and constantly encourages the Don to make bad decisions and is defeated when the Don learns to Care™️ and tells the gargoyle that people help each other, and he's "defeated" and fades into magical dust or something
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 16:00:34 GMT -5
their ideas of where to continue their lives after the Don's death have gone pretty much nowhere. Leporello obviously hasn't found a better master, and Elvira (who in this version didn't decide to be a nun because of the no religion thing, but a cat spreading good morals around the city instead) lives in a train station and steals cigarettes from people. But at least she has a supportive lesbian girlfriend now so in a sense things are better for her. (Although it's shown she was almost happiest before the Don came and she was still an idealistic pet cat living in the Brookfield suburbs not far off from Chicago.) yeah it's Not Good. The other two novellas that came with it were actually pretty good, but not Spottedleaf's Heart. Honestly I didn't like how she kept trying to control Firestar in his dreams or whatever? I'd much prefer if she was more of a mentor figure to him than a romantic interest (him having a childhood crush on her like a student crushing on a teacher though would be ok) because she's literally sandstorm's aunt and also because the love thing got creepy @ - He never will, lmao, being obsessed and all. Elvira, smoking, as a cat is honestly the funniest image omg. At least she's happier then she was when torn up over Don Yeah, that annoyed the heck outta me. LEAVE HIM ALONE! Me too, honestly. At least it would be less weird that she kept visiting him while he was mated to Sandstorm. And, yeah, the whole love thing was very creepy because of her, sheesh. Firepaw was just a naïve and hormonal tom; she's like the creepy cougar lady who drools over the local hot teen boy
Please check out my fanfic, ListenElvira smoking is honestly kind of hilarious because of how she employs it as a sort of prop, as can be seen here in a set of drawings totally not with dialogue stolen from The Most Popular Girls in School (excuse my terrible penmanship lmao) She has a very deadpan dark sort of dialogue style, so while Leporello is too terrified to mention what happened when the Don "died", and Elvira's just like "yeah his flesh melted off and his nose burned away and you could see all his intestines and bones and everything" 99% of Erin Hunter Romance annoys me to no end
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 16:07:53 GMT -5
The catalogue aria just becomes Leporello showing off the Don's immense collection of scarves lmao it would be animated in pretty cheap hand drawn animation or something there would be a pop song remix of the overture they wouldn't have swords they'd just threaten to fight there would be a bit where it looks like the Don's dead and someone says "is he...?" And then he turns out to be alive and it's supposed to be Heart Warming(TM) but it just ticks off everyone in the audience because we want him to die already the Don would be the Cool Smart-Talking Hero(TM) who's supposed to look cool by being selfish and only in it for himself (he really just makes the audience hate him more) only to learn how to Care For Others but here's the ultimate question: who is the villain @ - Lmao. Ironically sorted into rainbow colors because it's hidden adgenda™️ Really cheap, like flip motion lol NO. Or even worse, a country song version Or argue and proceed to upset themselves It would literally be him looking like he's sleeping with poor audio, screechy, "sad" violin music and then dramatic ochestral music as he rises He learns by small scenes where it'd be like, "Sharing is Caring" and "Everybody Cleans Up" The villain... like maybe the statue becomes a gargoyle or some other creature and constantly encourages the Don to make bad decisions and is defeated when the Don learns to Care™️ and tells the gargoyle that people help each other, and he's "defeated" and fades into magical dust or something
Please check out my fanfic, Listenthat makes (some kind of cynical money-grabbing) sense tbh nobody would have any motivation or character development im guessing a 17% on rotten tomatoes the producers would try to hype it up on social media with Relatable Memes for the Millenial Crowd(TM). It wouldn't work the commander would be shown as like The Best Dad in the World Ever With No Flaws Zerlina would be the overly hyper comic relief type and Masetto would be the really stupid comic relief
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 16:08:15 GMT -5
Elvira smoking is honestly kind of hilarious because of how she employs it as a sort of prop, as can be seen here in a set of drawings totally not with dialogue stolen from The Most Popular Girls in School (excuse my terrible penmanship lmao) She has a very deadpan dark sort of dialogue style, so while Leporello is too terrified to mention what happened when the Don "died", and Elvira's just like "yeah his flesh melted off and his nose burned away and you could see all his intestines and bones and everything" 99% of Erin Hunter Romance annoys me to no end @ - Np, lol Oml, that's hilarious. I just realized I can be that way too. I'm really blunt, sometimes not realizing if what I say is offensive or gross. And like I said before, I'm very deadpan and sarcastic. I think I just bonded to your character, lmao
Pretty much all of them annoy me too. Just forget them. But I have to say, Graystripe and Millie as well as Brackenfur and Sorreltail were the best. I also liked Leafpool with Crowfeather (I liked Crowfeather, and then loved Jayfeather) and Brambleclaw with Squirrelflight (they aren't the same after the Po3 and now he's leader). I can't think of any others that I liked, but I don't count Firestar and Sandstorm
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 16:10:53 GMT -5
@ - Lmao. Ironically sorted into rainbow colors because it's hidden adgenda™️ Really cheap, like flip motion lol NO. Or even worse, a country song version Or argue and proceed to upset themselves It would literally be him looking like he's sleeping with poor audio, screechy, "sad" violin music and then dramatic ochestral music as he rises He learns by small scenes where it'd be like, "Sharing is Caring" and "Everybody Cleans Up" The villain... like maybe the statue becomes a gargoyle or some other creature and constantly encourages the Don to make bad decisions and is defeated when the Don learns to Care™️ and tells the gargoyle that people help each other, and he's "defeated" and fades into magical dust or something
Please check out my fanfic, Listen that makes (some kind of cynical money-grabbing) sense tbh nobody would have any motivation or character development im guessing a 17% on rotten tomatoes the producers would try to hype it up on social media with Relatable Memes for the Millenial Crowd(TM). It wouldn't work the commander would be shown as like The Best Dad in the World Ever With No Flaws Zerlina would be the overly hyper comic relief type and Masetto would be the really stupid comic relief @ - For real, though. None, no development to be seen, if they even had character in the first place If even that, lmao Try and fail BIG. Like use the wrong memes, or really old ones, or super childish ones, or all the above God forbid the Commander have the slightest showing of being anything other than the Benevolent Father So true, lol. I can see that happening, and it's scary
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 16:16:50 GMT -5
Elvira smoking is honestly kind of hilarious because of how she employs it as a sort of prop, as can be seen here in a set of drawings totally not with dialogue stolen from The Most Popular Girls in School (excuse my terrible penmanship lmao) She has a very deadpan dark sort of dialogue style, so while Leporello is too terrified to mention what happened when the Don "died", and Elvira's just like "yeah his flesh melted off and his nose burned away and you could see all his intestines and bones and everything" 99% of Erin Hunter Romance annoys me to no end @ - Np, lol Oml, that's hilarious. I just realized I can be that way too. I'm really blunt, sometimes not realizing if what I say is offensive or gross. And like I said before, I'm very deadpan and sarcastic. I think I just bonded to your character, lmao
Pretty much all of them annoy me too. Just forget them. But I have to say, Graystripe and Millie as well as Brackenfur and Sorreltail were the best. I also liked Leafpool with Crowfeather (I liked Crowfeather, and then loved Jayfeather) and Brambleclaw with Squirrelflight (they aren't the same after the Po3 and now he's leader). I can't think of any others that I liked, but I don't count Firestar and Sandstorm
Please check out my fanfic, ListenElvira is the best because Tamino's off being Tamino and "I'm the hero everything will go fine for me" while Elvira just takes a long drag on her cigarette and goes "yeah you're going to die in the next couple of days" she's 10/10 I liked how Bramblestar and Squirrelflight kept going threw ugh triad and turbulations and would get mad at each other but ultimately forgive each other, it honestly felt relatively realistic and had a strong character to it (I have a writing rule that all relationships must have a distinct personality, strengths, and flaws as if they are a character). I like the idea that one can have relationships after the death of their first love and prefer GrayMillie to GraySilver, especially because in the comic books "mangas" they get to know each other and everything, but I don't like Millie as a character after the first couple of books she appears in in the series proper. I'm also a sucker for RavenBarley and TallJake but then again so is everybody else because they're actually rather well written
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 16:29:38 GMT -5
that makes (some kind of cynical money-grabbing) sense tbh nobody would have any motivation or character development im guessing a 17% on rotten tomatoes the producers would try to hype it up on social media with Relatable Memes for the Millenial Crowd(TM). It wouldn't work the commander would be shown as like The Best Dad in the World Ever With No Flaws Zerlina would be the overly hyper comic relief type and Masetto would be the really stupid comic relief @ - For real, though. None, no development to be seen, if they even had character in the first place If even that, lmao Try and fail BIG. Like use the wrong memes, or really old ones, or super childish ones, or all the above God forbid the Commander have the slightest showing of being anything other than the Benevolent Father So true, lol. I can see that happening, and it's scary
Please check out my fanfic, ListenI honestly see the Commander as being like the Great Prince in Bambi- a stern, intimidating character who somewhat frightens even his own children and rather distant to them yet when the time comes to defend them he will kill for them. Not exactly seeming to be very loving, but a good father nonetheless it's terrifying lmao
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 16:45:05 GMT -5
@ - Np, lol Oml, that's hilarious. I just realized I can be that way too. I'm really blunt, sometimes not realizing if what I say is offensive or gross. And like I said before, I'm very deadpan and sarcastic. I think I just bonded to your character, lmao
Pretty much all of them annoy me too. Just forget them. But I have to say, Graystripe and Millie as well as Brackenfur and Sorreltail were the best. I also liked Leafpool with Crowfeather (I liked Crowfeather, and then loved Jayfeather) and Brambleclaw with Squirrelflight (they aren't the same after the Po3 and now he's leader). I can't think of any others that I liked, but I don't count Firestar and Sandstorm
Please check out my fanfic, Listen Elvira is the best because Tamino's off being Tamino and "I'm the hero everything will go fine for me" while Elvira just takes a long drag on her cigarette and goes "yeah you're going to die in the next couple of days" she's 10/10 I liked how Bramblestar and Squirrelflight kept going threw ugh triad and turbulations and would get mad at each other but ultimately forgive each other, it honestly felt relatively realistic and had a strong character to it (I have a writing rule that all relationships must have a distinct personality, strengths, and flaws as if they are a character). I like the idea that one can have relationships after the death of their first love and prefer GrayMillie to GraySilver, especially because in the comic books "mangas" they get to know each other and everything, but I don't like Millie as a character after the first couple of books she appears in in the series proper. I'm also a sucker for RavenBarley and TallJake but then again so is everybody else because they're actually rather well written Haha "You won't last more than five seconds, kid," Same. They felt like a real couple. They would be irritated with each other then figure out how to get along. (I agree; relationships should have a certain standard.) GrayMillie was awesome for that reason, but I pretty much hate Millie, lol. RavenBarley were the best. And I shipped TallJake before (and still do) I realized how popular they were. They were amazing and should've just been a couple; but, we needed Firestar, so rip
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Post by prophet on Oct 12, 2017 16:49:05 GMT -5
@ - For real, though. None, no development to be seen, if they even had character in the first place If even that, lmao Try and fail BIG. Like use the wrong memes, or really old ones, or super childish ones, or all the above God forbid the Commander have the slightest showing of being anything other than the Benevolent Father So true, lol. I can see that happening, and it's scary
Please check out my fanfic, Listen I honestly see the Commander as being like the Great Prince in Bambi- a stern, intimidating character who somewhat frightens even his own children and rather distant to them yet when the time comes to defend them he will kill for them. Not exactly seeming to be very loving, but a good father nonetheless it's terrifying lmao That would actually be pretty good outside of context, tbh. I like father characters like that, I guess, since my dad's much the same. Very much so
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 16:56:13 GMT -5
Elvira is the best because Tamino's off being Tamino and "I'm the hero everything will go fine for me" while Elvira just takes a long drag on her cigarette and goes "yeah you're going to die in the next couple of days" she's 10/10 I liked how Bramblestar and Squirrelflight kept going threw ugh triad and turbulations and would get mad at each other but ultimately forgive each other, it honestly felt relatively realistic and had a strong character to it (I have a writing rule that all relationships must have a distinct personality, strengths, and flaws as if they are a character). I like the idea that one can have relationships after the death of their first love and prefer GrayMillie to GraySilver, especially because in the comic books "mangas" they get to know each other and everything, but I don't like Millie as a character after the first couple of books she appears in in the series proper. I'm also a sucker for RavenBarley and TallJake but then again so is everybody else because they're actually rather well written Haha "You won't last more than five seconds, kid," Same. They felt like a real couple. They would be irritated with each other then figure out how to get along. (I agree; relationships should have a certain standard.) GrayMillie was awesome for that reason, but I pretty much hate Millie, lol. RavenBarley were the best. And I shipped TallJake before (and still do) I realized how popular they were. They were amazing and should've just been a couple; but, we needed Firestar, so rip like Tamino's being brutally beaten in a fight and she's in the background like "I knew this would happen" otherwise I can only describe most relationships in warriors as "cute" or "badly written" they all have a stale sort of feeling
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2017 16:59:33 GMT -5
I honestly see the Commander as being like the Great Prince in Bambi- a stern, intimidating character who somewhat frightens even his own children and rather distant to them yet when the time comes to defend them he will kill for them. Not exactly seeming to be very loving, but a good father nonetheless it's terrifying lmao That would actually be pretty good outside of context, tbh. I like father characters like that, I guess, since my dad's much the same. Very much so It's how he's portrayed in Ensemble: aloof yet protective at least the marriage of Figaro is too complicated to get a cartoon adaptation lmao
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