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Post by Brownie on Mar 12, 2017 0:02:12 GMT -5
The door is closed. On it hangs my dreams, like freshly ironed dresses or untied ties. I remember each one I bought, but I never wore any of them.
My bookshelf is overflowing. In it are my memories, crammed together in multicolored volumes, mismatched so that nothing is proper, but everything fits.
My closet is open. Like the ghosts of old friends, there hang my shirts, worn once and put away, never to be seen again.
My desk is cramped. On it are my thoughts, pens and scissors and little kisses. Coins scattered, notes written only to be forgotten.
My bed is tidy. A fake, a fraud. Three pillows, three blankets all folded and neat, concealing rumpled sheets and loose springs.
My window is closed. Outside is the world. I shut the blinds, lay on my bed, close my eyes and try to forget what it is to be me.
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Post by Hollyspots on Mar 27, 2017 16:41:10 GMT -5
im all for this. Yes. YES. this is some quality prose poetry. 10/10
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Post by Brownie on Mar 27, 2017 17:27:48 GMT -5
haha, thanks <3
I was feeling trapped after doing so much work in my room and it just happened and I hadn't done poems in a while so thx
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Post by ❴ ғα∂ιηg ✦ яεαℓιтү ❵ on Mar 27, 2017 17:33:44 GMT -5
Nice nice, I like it
If you don't mind me saying a lil challenge I think you might be up to do is it'd be a really fascinating concept to play around with and describe how each exact memory/friend/thought corresponds with the object
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Post by Brownie on Mar 27, 2017 19:44:10 GMT -5
interesting concept
but I'm out of this writing phase it's been two weeks and I've written too much Star Rose to have this stylistic a voice rip
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