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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 19, 2017 21:31:29 GMT -5
Meant Cedarclaw's, sorry
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2017 21:32:31 GMT -5
It's fine. What did ya think of the chapter?
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 19, 2017 21:34:19 GMT -5
It's good. Did Cedarclaw have anything personal with Mallowpaw? Was she his apprentice?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2017 21:37:57 GMT -5
Yes, it tells you that in the list of cats I think.
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 19, 2017 21:40:32 GMT -5
OH. You can tell that I never read anyone's alleigances. Sigh. Going to read..
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2017 21:48:38 GMT -5
It's fine Owl  |
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 20, 2017 6:00:06 GMT -5
I never read allegiances, honestly.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2017 8:52:40 GMT -5
Yeah, I can kinda se that.
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 20, 2017 9:06:16 GMT -5
*shrugs* normally, you don't get anything from the allegiances except appearances.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2017 9:18:12 GMT -5
Yeah....You're right.
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 20, 2017 12:22:05 GMT -5
Normally, you can get the character names from just reading. It's why I'm kind of lazy writing allegiances. I like to make up names on the way. It's no fun when you have names already planned and have no idea what they are, do you have to go to your allegiances and whatnot.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2017 15:33:59 GMT -5
Yup. It also told you that Cedarclaw was Mallowpaw's mentor at the end of the first chapter.
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 20, 2017 17:49:34 GMT -5
But jeez! He totally overreacted! Why would you claw her brother's cheek out? Where did all of that rage come from?  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2017 17:54:21 GMT -5
He's...Well, his personality is supposed to be like Breezepelt's.
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 20, 2017 19:47:34 GMT -5
Hmm. It's actually pretty accurate. I can see that.  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2017 20:01:33 GMT -5
Love the Emoji  |
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 20, 2017 20:17:06 GMT -5
Thank you. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 21, 2017 14:25:21 GMT -5
Sunclan Chapter 3 is out! Tell me what you think of it!
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 21, 2017 14:34:24 GMT -5
Reading...
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Post by Deleted on Mar 21, 2017 15:06:36 GMT -5
Ok. I'm getting a book cover for this!! I'm so excited!!
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