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Post by CrescentmoonJC on Mar 17, 2018 9:15:18 GMT -5
You’re gonna have to wait and see-! <•ㅅ•>
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 17, 2018 9:24:14 GMT -5
But Stonepaw still didn't get a speech. ;-; that is true. don't know what to say about that one he did have one in the original... I just wrote it this time without it. The original speech was really melodramatic and cliche, and I didn't want that, I guess. Why didn't you just *starts hyperventilating* REWRITE THE SPEECH ![:lol:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/EYovFCWKvybdNMI4vmTh.gif)
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Post by Skye on Mar 17, 2018 10:06:33 GMT -5
OH DANG YANGPAW
And here I thought Yinpaw was to be the one to snap and go slashing someone up...
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Post by moonmasksunfrost on Mar 17, 2018 12:34:05 GMT -5
YANGPAW WHAT THE HECK ;; I mean I saw it coming but STONEPAW NO
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 17, 2018 14:52:55 GMT -5
yeah.. sorry You are not sorry. XP Are you. And personally, I never cared for Yangpaw anyway, but if I did, that would throw that right out the window. One of these days, I really have to state who my favorite characters are, just so you know I don't have a low opinion of everyone. ![:lol:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/EYovFCWKvybdNMI4vmTh.gif) I love a lot of the secondary characters, in fact. I am too! A little... and that's fine, I can't force anyone to like any of my characters lol. Yangpaw's one of my favorites, though You’re gonna have to wait and see-! <•ㅅ•> oh no, he is that is true. don't know what to say about that one he did have one in the original... I just wrote it this time without it. The original speech was really melodramatic and cliche, and I didn't want that, I guess. Why didn't you just *starts hyperventilating* REWRITE THE SPEECH ![:lol:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/EYovFCWKvybdNMI4vmTh.gif) I actually thought about it some more... I realized that his not getting to say anything adds more to everything that happens in The Unforgiven. So maybe subconsciously thats why I didn't have him get to say anything OH DANG YANGPAW And here I thought Yinpaw was to be the one to snap and go slashing someone up... I mean you might get your wish YANGPAW WHAT THE HECK ;; I mean I saw it coming but STONEPAW NOgoodbye my sweet boi
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 17, 2018 14:53:50 GMT -5
I mean, don't worry all you Stonepaw stans. He's getting his own Special Episode eventually. I think it'll be after the comic is over, or closer to the end... A few more things still need to happen before we get to the end.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 17, 2018 15:26:17 GMT -5
Good. He needs a bonus comic.
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Post by FåwnFrøst on Mar 17, 2018 15:27:34 GMT -5
I'm trying to figure out why you'd do this to us, Hawky. We had such hope after the end of Skyfall. But isn't the boi the unforgiven? And one of the sisters kills the other one? I only remember this because one time I read Broken Wings and the Unforgiven and it says something about it.
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Post by CrescentmoonJC on Mar 17, 2018 20:05:35 GMT -5
Why..Yangpaw, Stoney didn’t even get a chance to say something...!! May the spirits bless you Stonepaw.. now I can hear Yinpaw screeching and yowling in the next page ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/RCFqazfvhbMAeE5hIhD3.gif)
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Post by CrescentmoonJC on Mar 17, 2018 20:07:55 GMT -5
I'm trying to figure out why you'd do this to us, Hawky. We had such hope after the end of Skyfall. But isn't the boi the unforgiven? And one of the sisters kills the other one? I only remember this because one time I read Broken Wings and the Unforgiven and it says something about it. Ooohh... that could be right-!
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 18, 2018 8:43:27 GMT -5
Why..Yangpaw, Stoney didn’t even get a chance to say something...!! May the spirits bless you Stonepaw.. now I can hear Yinpaw screeching and yowling in the next page ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/RCFqazfvhbMAeE5hIhD3.gif) I KNOW, RIGHT?!?!?! *sets up a memorial for Stoney* Goodbye, Stonepaw. You will be forever missed. The tears of our endless weeping will water your grave and cause its grass to grow greener than anywhere else. You were a Good, Pure boi who never did anything wrong and only wanted to help Yinpaw hunt, and cared for her when no one else did (excluding Yangpaw because she doesn't count for anything anymore). May you live peacefully with the other spirits of StarClan and be happy forever. And also please don't possess a certain child named Crowpaw who is the son of Stonethunder and Ariadne in the not too distant future. *end speech*
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Mar 18, 2018 9:30:22 GMT -5
I mean, don't worry all you Stonepaw stans. He's getting his own Special Episode eventually. I think it'll be after the comic is over, or closer to the end... A few more things still need to happen before we get to the end. great! *cries* Stoneyboi... you will be remembered...
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Post by CrescentmoonJC on Mar 18, 2018 10:24:56 GMT -5
Why..Yangpaw, Stoney didn’t even get a chance to say something...!! May the spirits bless you Stonepaw.. now I can hear Yinpaw screeching and yowling in the next page ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/RCFqazfvhbMAeE5hIhD3.gif) I KNOW, RIGHT?!?!?! *sets up a memorial for Stoney* Goodbye, Stonepaw. You will be forever missed. The tears of our endless weeping will water your grave and cause its grass to grow greener than anywhere else. You were a Good, Pure boi who never did anything wrong and only wanted to help Yinpaw hunt, and cared for her when no one else did (excluding Yangpaw because she doesn't count for anything anymore). May you live peacefully with the other spirits of StarClan and be happy forever. And also please don't possess a certain child named Crowpaw who is the son of Stonethunder and Ariadne in the not too distant future. *end speech* Applaud
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 18, 2018 12:25:22 GMT -5
I'm trying to figure out why you'd do this to us, Hawky. We had such hope after the end of Skyfall. But isn't the boi the unforgiven? And one of the sisters kills the other one? I only remember this because one time I read Broken Wings and the Unforgiven and it says something about it. Well yes. The Special Episode is planned to explain some things about what happens between Yin and Yang and The Unforgiven with Stonepaw Why..Yangpaw, Stoney didn’t even get a chance to say something...!! May the spirits bless you Stonepaw.. now I can hear Yinpaw screeching and yowling in the next page ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/RCFqazfvhbMAeE5hIhD3.gif) Who knows, you may be right about that! He sure is Why..Yangpaw, Stoney didn’t even get a chance to say something...!! May the spirits bless you Stonepaw.. now I can hear Yinpaw screeching and yowling in the next page ![:(](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/RCFqazfvhbMAeE5hIhD3.gif) I KNOW, RIGHT?!?!?! *sets up a memorial for Stoney* Goodbye, Stonepaw. You will be forever missed. The tears of our endless weeping will water your grave and cause its grass to grow greener than anywhere else. You were a Good, Pure boi who never did anything wrong and only wanted to help Yinpaw hunt, and cared for her when no one else did (excluding Yangpaw because she doesn't count for anything anymore). May you live peacefully with the other spirits of StarClan and be happy forever. And also please don't possess a certain child named Crowpaw who is the son of Stonethunder and Ariadne in the not too distant future. *end speech* That's a very good memorial and it will 100% happen exactly how you say it will for sure I mean, don't worry all you Stonepaw stans. He's getting his own Special Episode eventually. I think it'll be after the comic is over, or closer to the end... A few more things still need to happen before we get to the end. great! *cries* Stoneyboi... you will be remembered... He shall be... In a way...
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 18, 2018 12:31:38 GMT -5
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Post by moonmasksunfrost on Mar 18, 2018 14:00:01 GMT -5
Aw, I just had a kind of sweet thought. Minor spoilers for The Unforgiven below: In the Unforgiven, Yinpaw mentioned that eventually learned to respect Skullstripe. But as things stand right now... I don’t see that ever happening given that Skullstripe is a jerk. What if later when Yinpaw was, like, super sad, Skullstripe sees her and has a moment of that kid is feeling bad and I know how that feels and had a kind of... nice moment where he comforts her a little bit like “I’m sorry about... your TundraClan friend-person/I know how you’re feeling” or something.
And in the future, if/when Yinpaw forgives Yangpaw (because she can’t hold a grudge against her forever? Can she? Right? They seemed fine in The Unforgiven, sister-relationship-wise? And in Broken Wings Yangpaw told Stonethunder that her sister eventually forgave her?) then Skullstripe could realize that oh heck I’ve been seriously in the wrong. Poor kid I was a jerk to her. Look how she’s moving past her grief and anger oh shoot I should have done that a long time ago and have a sort of moment of clarity... and apologize to Yinpaw... leading to a sort of mutual respect/weird understanding/almost-friendship between the two?
Eh I don’t know but it seems like there’s a sort of discontinuity between how Yinpaw thinks of him now and how she thinks of him in The Unforgiven. I know it’s hard rewriting a prequel to fit what’s already been established but that’s my rant-thoughts on the whole thing. Sorry about the massive text block Hawky!
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 18, 2018 14:31:22 GMT -5
Aw, I just had a kind of sweet thought. Minor spoilers for The Unforgiven below: In the Unforgiven, Yinpaw mentioned that eventually learned to respect Skullstripe. But as things stand right now... I don’t see that ever happening given that Skullstripe is a jerk. What if later when Yinpaw was, like, super sad, Skullstripe sees her and has a moment of that kid is feeling bad and I know how that feels and had a kind of... nice moment where he comforts her a little bit like “I’m sorry about... your TundraClan friend-person/I know how you’re feeling” or something.
And in the future, if/when Yinpaw forgives Yangpaw (because she can’t hold a grudge against her forever? Can she? Right? They seemed fine in The Unforgiven, sister-relationship-wise? And in Broken Wings Yangpaw told Stonethunder that her sister eventually forgave her?) then Skullstripe could realize that oh heck I’ve been seriously in the wrong. Poor kid I was a jerk to her. Look how she’s moving past her grief and anger oh shoot I should have done that a long time ago and have a sort of moment of clarity... and apologize to Yinpaw... leading to a sort of mutual respect/weird understanding/almost-friendship between the two?
Eh I don’t know but it seems like there’s a sort of discontinuity between how Yinpaw thinks of him now and how she thinks of him in The Unforgiven. I know it’s hard rewriting a prequel to fit what’s already been established but that’s my rant-thoughts on the whole thing. Sorry about the massive text block Hawky! I love this.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Mar 18, 2018 17:13:30 GMT -5
Aw, I just had a kind of sweet thought. Minor spoilers for The Unforgiven below: In the Unforgiven, Yinpaw mentioned that eventually learned to respect Skullstripe. But as things stand right now... I don’t see that ever happening given that Skullstripe is a jerk. What if later when Yinpaw was, like, super sad, Skullstripe sees her and has a moment of that kid is feeling bad and I know how that feels and had a kind of... nice moment where he comforts her a little bit like “I’m sorry about... your TundraClan friend-person/I know how you’re feeling” or something.
And in the future, if/when Yinpaw forgives Yangpaw (because she can’t hold a grudge against her forever? Can she? Right? They seemed fine in The Unforgiven, sister-relationship-wise? And in Broken Wings Yangpaw told Stonethunder that her sister eventually forgave her?) then Skullstripe could realize that oh heck I’ve been seriously in the wrong. Poor kid I was a jerk to her. Look how she’s moving past her grief and anger oh shoot I should have done that a long time ago and have a sort of moment of clarity... and apologize to Yinpaw... leading to a sort of mutual respect/weird understanding/almost-friendship between the two?
Eh I don’t know but it seems like there’s a sort of discontinuity between how Yinpaw thinks of him now and how she thinks of him in The Unforgiven. I know it’s hard rewriting a prequel to fit what’s already been established but that’s my rant-thoughts on the whole thing. Sorry about the massive text block Hawky! I love this. I love this.
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 18, 2018 17:33:46 GMT -5
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 19, 2018 11:15:12 GMT -5
next page will probs be up sometime today
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 19, 2018 11:17:53 GMT -5
Aw, I just had a kind of sweet thought. Minor spoilers for The Unforgiven below: In the Unforgiven, Yinpaw mentioned that eventually learned to respect Skullstripe. But as things stand right now... I don’t see that ever happening given that Skullstripe is a jerk. What if later when Yinpaw was, like, super sad, Skullstripe sees her and has a moment of that kid is feeling bad and I know how that feels and had a kind of... nice moment where he comforts her a little bit like “I’m sorry about... your TundraClan friend-person/I know how you’re feeling” or something.
And in the future, if/when Yinpaw forgives Yangpaw (because she can’t hold a grudge against her forever? Can she? Right? They seemed fine in The Unforgiven, sister-relationship-wise? And in Broken Wings Yangpaw told Stonethunder that her sister eventually forgave her?) then Skullstripe could realize that oh heck I’ve been seriously in the wrong. Poor kid I was a jerk to her. Look how she’s moving past her grief and anger oh shoot I should have done that a long time ago and have a sort of moment of clarity... and apologize to Yinpaw... leading to a sort of mutual respect/weird understanding/almost-friendship between the two?
Eh I don’t know but it seems like there’s a sort of discontinuity between how Yinpaw thinks of him now and how she thinks of him in The Unforgiven. I know it’s hard rewriting a prequel to fit what’s already been established but that’s my rant-thoughts on the whole thing. Sorry about the massive text block Hawky! Aw, I just had a kind of sweet thought. Minor spoilers for The Unforgiven below: In the Unforgiven, Yinpaw mentioned that eventually learned to respect Skullstripe. But as things stand right now... I don’t see that ever happening given that Skullstripe is a jerk. What if later when Yinpaw was, like, super sad, Skullstripe sees her and has a moment of that kid is feeling bad and I know how that feels and had a kind of... nice moment where he comforts her a little bit like “I’m sorry about... your TundraClan friend-person/I know how you’re feeling” or something.
And in the future, if/when Yinpaw forgives Yangpaw (because she can’t hold a grudge against her forever? Can she? Right? They seemed fine in The Unforgiven, sister-relationship-wise? And in Broken Wings Yangpaw told Stonethunder that her sister eventually forgave her?) then Skullstripe could realize that oh heck I’ve been seriously in the wrong. Poor kid I was a jerk to her. Look how she’s moving past her grief and anger oh shoot I should have done that a long time ago and have a sort of moment of clarity... and apologize to Yinpaw... leading to a sort of mutual respect/weird understanding/almost-friendship between the two?
Eh I don’t know but it seems like there’s a sort of discontinuity between how Yinpaw thinks of him now and how she thinks of him in The Unforgiven. I know it’s hard rewriting a prequel to fit what’s already been established but that’s my rant-thoughts on the whole thing. Sorry about the massive text block Hawky! I love this. I also love this! Maybe I'll do something like this... I don't know yet though... But I like this too much to not make something along the lines work... and you're right about the discontinuity in BW and TU. As for some of that, you'll have to wait and see what happens later in YY, but as for the whole Skullstripe situation... hmm... maybe in the epilogue? Hmmmmmmmmmm
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 19, 2018 12:15:47 GMT -5
Yes yes yes
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Asexual
Lilypaw
"I did not trip and fall. I attacked the floor and I believe I am winning".
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Post by Lilypaw on Mar 19, 2018 17:01:25 GMT -5
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Asexual
Lilypaw
"I did not trip and fall. I attacked the floor and I believe I am winning".
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Post by Lilypaw on Mar 19, 2018 17:03:36 GMT -5
Great starclan that happened so fast I'm shocked.
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 19, 2018 17:22:19 GMT -5
Great starclan that happened so fast I'm shocked. exACTLY MY POINT But I trust Hawky, so I'll just let her do it her way. cx
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 19, 2018 17:57:49 GMT -5
Great starclan that happened so fast I'm shocked. Yeah it did. It was meant to be shocking Great starclan that happened so fast I'm shocked. exACTLY MY POINT But I trust Hawky, so I'll just let her do it her way. cx Yes omg trust me please! I can promise you now that we are headed towards a happy ending eventually!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 19, 2018 17:58:53 GMT -5
oh also I have a greek quiz tomorrow that I have to study for tonight, so I won't be working on the page. I'll get to it tomorrow, though! Sorry for the wait!
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 20, 2018 10:11:17 GMT -5
Eventually![:lol:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/EYovFCWKvybdNMI4vmTh.gif)
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Post by Hawktalon, on Mar 20, 2018 16:39:30 GMT -5
sorry guys, I don't think I'll be able to get up a page till friday... I'm super busy all of a sudden with school and I'm really burnt out... but we might get a snow day tomorrow so there's that... though I'd probably just use it to do my many school projects I have to do...
so yeah, sorry about that, guys
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Post by Maplestone360 on Mar 20, 2018 17:30:39 GMT -5
That's alright, Hawky. ![:)](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/lNtnPuxeCzkaKMNYVXVv.gif)
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