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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 17, 2018 15:36:20 GMT -5
Yinpaw looks so happy and adorable on page 106! she does! <3
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 17, 2018 15:37:41 GMT -5
so sorry for the lack of updates! but I'm gonna have to say probably no friday-equivalent page this week, unless I can get it up tomorrow. I have a paper to write for one of my classes and I don't know how long it'll take... so that's where it stands my dudes. there will be a monday-equivalent page though, since the paper is in question is due that day lol
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Post by Maplestone360 on Feb 17, 2018 21:57:16 GMT -5
Hmn, Yinpaw looks so happy about Yangpaw's power, and yet Yangpaw doesn't seem happy about it at all. You'd think it'd be the other way around. Strange.
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 18, 2018 1:08:47 GMT -5
Hmn, Yinpaw looks so happy about Yangpaw's power, and yet Yangpaw doesn't seem happy about it at all. You'd think it'd be the other way around. Strange. I think Yinpaw's wrapped up in like 'omg my sister has this amazing ability thats freaking amazing i can't believe it!' and Yangpaw's more like 'uh I mean sure I have this power and I guess we might know where it comes from, but its not like I choose when it activates, so I don't know how useful it'll be'
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 19, 2018 18:22:07 GMT -5
Page 107 is UP!
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Post by CrescentmoonJC on Feb 19, 2018 21:12:43 GMT -5
Woohoo-! 107 pages-! and.. I think Yinpaw doesn’t know she has awoken “force”
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Post by Maplestone360 on Feb 20, 2018 7:14:36 GMT -5
Woohoo-! 107 pages-! and.. I think Yinpaw doesn’t know she has awoken “force” Yin and Yang: The Force Awakens
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 20, 2018 15:32:02 GMT -5
Woohoo-! 107 pages-! and.. I think Yinpaw doesn’t know she has awoken “force” I think she knows that something happened, but it was too strange and unexpected and it has only happened once, so she doesn't know what it is, exactly Woohoo-! 107 pages-! and.. I think Yinpaw doesn’t know she has awoken “force” Yin and Yang: The Force Awakens omg thats true
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Post by tiger beetle on Feb 20, 2018 23:53:55 GMT -5
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 20, 2018 23:58:41 GMT -5
Whoaaaa super nice job!!! I enjoy the static like effect in the background and the environmental design with the blue rocks! Thanks so much!!!
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Post by tiger beetle on Feb 21, 2018 0:01:22 GMT -5
you're welcome! I'm glad you like it
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Post by Maplestone360 on Feb 21, 2018 7:37:07 GMT -5
Hey, Hawky, I have a question! How many pages do you plan on there being in this comic? Or do you not know yet?
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 21, 2018 15:29:48 GMT -5
Hey, Hawky, I have a question! How many pages do you plan on there being in this comic? Or do you not know yet? At the moment, I don't think it'll be more than 130... but I'm not sure. This chapter has maybe two or three more pages left to it. And a lot happens in the last chapter, including a musical number. 130 is a good estimate, but it could always be higher or lower. I don't really plan out individual pages usually, I have a general plot outline, only sometimes containing actual scripted lines like a play, but most of the time it's general plot directions. For example, this is my script for Yangpaw's dream... - Yangpaw has another dream. It’s of the very far back past, of Frozen Brother getting the original Prophecy (which allows Yangpaw to now know it) and it goes to a flashback of Frostwhisker telling Yangpaw she’s the older sister and it’s her responsibility to look after Yinpaw. “Do you promise?” “I promise” and it pulses and pulses and pulses and ends in Yinpaw screaming, blood on her face. Wakes in a cold sweat to Yinpaw still beside her. Wakes her up and takes her to the edge of camp where they won’t be heard
And in here's how a scene with scripted lines looks... - “Yinpaw… I just… I had a strange dream.”
- “Is that all”
- “No, I mean… Do you ever have these weird dreams that… sometimes its of something that happened before, or sometimes its of something that’s about to happen? Like, I had dreams about you getting up at night and going to the border. And before that, do you remember that time with Iceflight when we found Stormkit? Well, I saw that happen in a dream the night before. It’s why I was able to find Stormkit so easily. I thought they were just dreams… but…”
- “That… doesn’t happen to me?”
- “Well, it happens to me. It’s really weird, and I don’t understand it but… Yinpaw… I think we’re a part of something bigger than we know. Something huge. The dream I just had was different. There was this voice and it said something-”
- “What did it say?”
So you can see that things sometimes get changed, especially in this particular scene where it involved a lot more back and forth, and I took out a few lines, and added different ones to make the conversation quicker and flow more. And with the just scene descriptions, it's variable for how long they take page-wise. Another example is in the start of Chapter Three, with Yangpaw's battle training. The script said this... - A few days later… Yangpaw does battle training, fights Thunderpaw. Thunderpaw was the best battler, gets beat by Yangpaw, he starts to admire her. Hawkpaw wonders why Yinpaw never trains with them everyone turns to Yangpaw, expecting her to know the answer. She doesn’t.And while on paper this seems like a very simple scene, it ended up taking six pages.
So that really turned into a discussion of how I script my comics, but anyway. TL;DR, I don't exactly know how many pages YY will be. The story itself is wrapping up, but a few more important things still need to happen. Like I said, I'd but the finishing number around 130, give or take.
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Post by Maplestone360 on Feb 21, 2018 16:16:40 GMT -5
Wow, so only around 23 pages left?? Those are going to be some action packed pages for sure! ![:o](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/eejyJM8_jTuGdFr6DpMy.gif)
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 21, 2018 17:11:48 GMT -5
Wow, so only around 23 pages left?? Those are going to be some action packed pages for sure! ![:o](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/eejyJM8_jTuGdFr6DpMy.gif) Arouuuund that much. I wouldn't be surprised if it goes over, but yeah, I'm not sure. My longest comic was The Unforgiven, it had 154 pages actually haha... So I honestly don't know how far we're gonna get here
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Post by Maplestone360 on Feb 21, 2018 19:01:51 GMT -5
Break the recordAdd in some extra Yinpaw and Stonepaw drama ![:creepy:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/6UO1zKcHxy1AOX9GlvsW.gif) If you know what I mean
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 23, 2018 18:41:59 GMT -5
Break the recordAdd in some extra Yinpaw and Stonepaw drama ![:creepy:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/6UO1zKcHxy1AOX9GlvsW.gif) If you know what I mean I will see what I can do ![;)](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/K_aktz7ovAHLNjZqbiem.gif)
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 23, 2018 18:42:11 GMT -5
I'll try to get the next page up tonight!!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 24, 2018 18:04:27 GMT -5
page 108 is UP!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 25, 2018 21:24:29 GMT -5
Might as well copy this from my DeviantART... But anyway, regarding the end of YY! So it's come to my attention, especially with the posting of the title for Chapter Eight of YY, that some readers were unaware that we were so close to the end. Well, surprise! Chapter Eight (very fittingly named, The End) is the last Yin and Yang chapter! We're finally wrapping up, people! But as the journal says, don't freak out! I've said before the estimate at the moment is around 130 pages total, but I actually think now that we might go over that number. A lot happens in Chapter 8, including a musical number. So I really don't know about how many pages we have left. I'd say between 130 and 150. And here's even more of a reason to not freak out! There is another comic planned for after YY ends! The fabled Comic Six! Comic Six is a continuation of the Saga as a whole. It comes after The Unforgiven chronologically.
But that's all I'm letting slip. If you ask for more hints I won't give them. I'm keeping everything hidden because I'm incredibly excited for where Comic Six takes the Saga.So technically, it's my first "I can do whatever I want in this story since I don't have to follow a plotline that I've already established cause my last two comics have been prequels" that I've had in like over three years now. Oh, and another reminder. After YY ends, I'll be putting it along with Broken Wings (the second comic in the Saga, after YY chronologically), and The Unforgiven (the third comic) up on my Smackjeeves, since I'll be using that site as a kind of archive for all my comics. So yeah! That's where it stands, my friends! Chapter 8 will start with page 109 either tomorrow or tuesday! Get ready for The End!
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Post by Maplestone360 on Feb 26, 2018 7:42:41 GMT -5
SCREEEEEEEEEE IM STILL FREAKING OUT ANYWAY BECAUSE IM SO EXCITED FOR CHAPTER 8 AND COMIC 6!!!! They better be epic ![:creepy:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/6UO1zKcHxy1AOX9GlvsW.gif)
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 26, 2018 20:04:53 GMT -5
SCREEEEEEEEEE IM STILL FREAKING OUT ANYWAY BECAUSE IM SO EXCITED FOR CHAPTER 8 AND COMIC 6!!!! They better be epic ![:creepy:](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/6UO1zKcHxy1AOX9GlvsW.gif) they both will be ![;)](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/K_aktz7ovAHLNjZqbiem.gif)
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 26, 2018 20:08:24 GMT -5
so the next page will be up tomorrow. I have to write an essay and i have had a Day lemme tell you
I walked into my historic preservation class (one of my two majors, the other being studio art. it's basically archaeology plus stuff like preserving historic sites like houses and stuff) and everyone was looking over notes and stuff and I had the LITERAL NIGHTMARE SCENARIO. I FORGOT THE MIDTERM WAS TODAY. AND I 100% FORGOT TO STUDY ANYTHING. People LITERALLY have nightmares like this.
It's not like I knew nothing at all... I don't think I bombed it, just probably didn't do as well as I could have. It's one hundo percent on me though, I was the one who forgot.
So yeah, that was my day. And why I'm not completely in the mood right now to do the page, but depending on when I get done with my essay, I'll see how I feel then
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Post by Brownie on Feb 26, 2018 20:13:51 GMT -5
there's probably something somewhere with this but what's the order of the comics in order for the universe?
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 26, 2018 20:44:28 GMT -5
there's probably something somewhere with this but what's the order of the comics in order for the universe? I actually don't think it is here anywhere, and I'm happy to answer anyway! The order is Skyfall Yin and Yang Broken Wings The Unforgiven Comic Six
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Post by Maplestone360 on Feb 26, 2018 21:53:05 GMT -5
so the next page will be up tomorrow. I have to write an essay and i have had a Day lemme tell you I walked into my historic preservation class (one of my two majors, the other being studio art. it's basically archaeology plus stuff like preserving historic sites like houses and stuff) and everyone was looking over notes and stuff and I had the LITERAL NIGHTMARE SCENARIO. I FORGOT THE MIDTERM WAS TODAY. AND I 100% FORGOT TO STUDY ANYTHING. People LITERALLY have nightmares like this. It's not like I knew nothing at all... I don't think I bombed it, just probably didn't do as well as I could have. It's one hundo percent on me though, I was the one who forgot. So yeah, that was my day. And why I'm not completely in the mood right now to do the page, but depending on when I get done with my essay, I'll see how I feel then Uhg, that sucks. xc I would probably die of horror if that happened to me. And if I didn't I would die when I later saw the grade I would get. Because I usually don't have to study very much for most things but when it comes to exams... ;-; I hope you were able to remember what you learned and got a good grade anyway! ![:o](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/eejyJM8_jTuGdFr6DpMy.gif)
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 27, 2018 11:53:52 GMT -5
Uhg, that sucks. xc I would probably die of horror if that happened to me. And if I didn't I would die when I later saw the grade I would get. Because I usually don't have to study very much for most things but when it comes to exams... ;-; I hope you were able to remember what you learned and got a good grade anyway! ![:o](//storage.proboards.com/6575102/images/eejyJM8_jTuGdFr6DpMy.gif) I hope I do too! Thanks maple!
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 27, 2018 15:40:29 GMT -5
I've started page 109 and like, guys. this is the first page I've been really excited about for a while
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Post by Hawktalon, on Feb 27, 2018 17:51:26 GMT -5
Page 109 is UP!
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Post by ᴄᴏɴɪ﹣ғᴇʀᴏᴜs on Feb 27, 2018 18:20:29 GMT -5
"Aw yeah we're gonna fight!" Well, that's Beepaw for you.
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