Stormheart
Hello! Its me River/Stormheart I love writing, Civil War reenactments, Warrior Cats, and Drumming!
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 19, 2016 21:59:21 GMT -5
Hey guys, I just wanted to say. I understand there need to be rules, but remember this is just fiction. And it kind of interrupts the flow of the RP when somebody barges in and proclaims that "this rule" or "that rule" was broken and after the drama recedes, it completely killed the mood. I'm not trying to be rebellious, but maybe we could do something different? Like a reduction of a few certain rules and guidelines. Or just one person messaging the other to tell them politely that they should make some changes to what they wrote. Not flooding the page with objections to the writer. It's just my opinion, you can listen or not.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:03:09 GMT -5
"Yep." Pinefeather nodded proudly. "Now try stalking forward a little. You want to almost slide your paws across the ground, keeping noises to a minimum."
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Stormheart
Hello! Its me River/Stormheart I love writing, Civil War reenactments, Warrior Cats, and Drumming!
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 19, 2016 22:08:02 GMT -5
I made my statement and that's all I needed to do.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:11:52 GMT -5
I thank you for your opinion, Storm, however we do like to have consistency in our rp. I will not change any of the rules because the rules are there for very good reasons, many of them being added over the years because of incidents and arguments that have come up. Our leaders like to know what's going on in their Clans so they're not blindsided by unwanted drama and when you say one thing but do another it kills the mood for everyone. I would prefer that only one person addresses any issues within the rp and we try to do that, but there are times no one communicates and it seems everyone is trying to solve the problem and things tend to get repetitive. I'm sorry if you felt attacked, but the leaders here just want smooth and clear rp. And if I'm being perfectly honest, your character Stormheart is a hard character to follow. There was one time you had him praising StarClan but then he was walking in the Dark Forest, then he's speaking with my character (frostlake) about how the clans would be better without borders, but then he says what he said at the gathering. We're honestly having a hard time following it all and getting really confused. I didn't realize he had a rogue past until it came out at the gathering and no one knew about his sister who ThunderClan apparently killed. The ideas that you're coming up with are good ones, however you're confusing us with making them all happen with one character.
Again, I apologize that you feel attacked here, I don't want that, no one wants that. My goal for this rp is make people better writers, better rpers, to be able to be creative and make lasting friends, but again we have to have our rules for a reason. I think what we're really missing is communication.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:15:32 GMT -5
Frogpaw nodded and started to slowly slide forward, "Like this?" He asked again.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:17:48 GMT -5
"Just like that. Good." Pinefeather nodded her head. "Remember to keep your tail from touching the ground." She added.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:18:25 GMT -5
"Ok." Frogpaw mewed, he glanced back at his tail to keep it steady and in height with his body.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:19:42 GMT -5
"Good job." Pinefeather purred. "Now let's see if you can catch something eh?"
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:20:47 GMT -5
"Alright!" Frogpaw purred, he sat up and scented the air like the warriors said that they did, but he wasn't sure what he was scenting for. He tried to think of the prey that he had seen the fresh-kill pile and what they smelled like, maybe they smelled the same alive?
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:21:56 GMT -5
"Do you acent anything?" Pinefeather asked him. She could scent a frog and a sparrow. She wondered if he could detect those different smells yet.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:23:48 GMT -5
"I smell WindClan." He mewed thoughtfully, "But I'm pretty sure there's some prey out there," He paused, "A frog! And a bird of some sort?" He asked looking at his mentor.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:27:24 GMT -5
Pinefeather nodded. "A sparrow. Good job scenting them. Now you'll want to pick one and try to find where the scent in the strongest." She instructed softly.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:28:33 GMT -5
"I'm going after the frog!" Frogpaw mewed excitedly, he dropped into a hunter's crouch and focused on the frog scent, slowly following it.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:32:33 GMT -5
Pinefeather watched him, hoping he'd catch it. He wasn't a bad stalker but hopefully he didn't get too excited.
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Stormheart
Hello! Its me River/Stormheart I love writing, Civil War reenactments, Warrior Cats, and Drumming!
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Post by Stormheart on Aug 19, 2016 22:33:55 GMT -5
I like what you wrote, but the thing about Stormheart. Is that I created him not to be confusing but to be interesting. He was praising Starclan, because of what a hell the Darkforest was. He was wondering about a single Clan without borders because the idea of multiple clans fighting not joining together was still sort of a foreign conflict even though he had lived in the Clans for so long. And because he is a thinker, and the fact that he was a rogue was in the joining form I made when I first started. His sister killed by Thunderclan was an emotional moment for him of course, but also a symbol of how his past is a mystery to most of his peers. I will apologize if Stormheart is a confusing character, I like to experiment with him. And sometimes like in the past I get carried away. Like the whole "leaving the clans" scenario I did was me trying to figure out his character.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:34:25 GMT -5
(*pets Frogpaw* he's my little hunter  ) Frogpaw came into few of the frog not long later. He stalked towards it before pouncing, but he missed. His pounce not strong enough to get him to the frog and the frog quickly started hopping away. Not wanting to miss his first shot at prey Frogpaw bolted after it. The two of them heading for the thunderpath. |
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:36:11 GMT -5
(Aww :3)
Pinefeather got up to hurry after them. She wanted to make sure he was ok and second off that was the direction of the Thunderpath and she didn't want him to run out onto it.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:46:52 GMT -5
I like what you wrote, but the thing about Stormheart. Is that I created him not to be confusing but to be interesting. He was praising Starclan, because of what a hell the Darkforest was. He was wondering about a single Clan without borders because the idea of multiple clans fighting not joining together was still sort of a foreign conflict even though he had lived in the Clans for so long. And because he is a thinker, and the fact that he was a rogue was in the joining form I made when I first started. His sister killed by Thunderclan was an emotional moment for him of course, but also a symbol of how his past is a mystery to most of his peers. I will apologize if Stormheart is a confusing character, I like to experiment with him. And sometimes like in the past I get carried away. Like the whole "leaving the clans" scenario I did was me trying to figure out his character. Storm this is the joining form we have for Stormheart: Stormheart- A black and grey Norwegian Forest Cat, with a white muzzle. Intelligent, yet shy and quiet. Stormheart was born without a left ear. His hearing is a little less powerful then the other cats, he was mocked by the other kits because of his single ear. Because of this he tried to run away from the Clan twice, failing both times. Standards are high in RiverClan, and only the best cats will survive. That is why Stormheart had to try much harder then the other apprentices to be successful in his training, and to become to a Warrior. Despite his misfortunes, he has a special connection with StarClan. And he is able to visit his Warrior ancestors to better cope with his loneliness.(ShadoWindRiver) It says nothing about him being a rogue nor having a sister who died by ThunderClan's claws. When you don't specify where he came from everyone assumes he is clanborn. With only this to go off of, I hope you realize how confused we are with Stormheart. Leaders can update forms if you provide the necessary information. Characters are based off of their pasts as people are and characters are treated based off their past the same way that people are so without knowing much about Stormheart we're not sure how to get our characters to react to him and like the incident before we end up reacting the wrong way. Complex characters are welcomed in the rp, but when characters get so complex that its confusing for others to rp with, then rping gets muddled. So I urge everyone to ask questions and if you don't think someone understands what's going on with your character then politely tell them, if you don't want people to know what's going on with your character than again politely tell them and if you plans you want to try out experiment with other rpers. In my opinion its more fun that way, You never know where the story could go. |
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:47:36 GMT -5
Frogpaw had caught the frog on the thunderpath, but he felt so much pride in what he did, he didn't realize a monster was coming.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:50:11 GMT -5
"Frogpaw!" Pinefeather yowled, sprinting for her apprentice. "Get off the thunderpath!" She ran as fast as she could, getting down to the edge of it. She moved to dash forward and pull her aoorentice off.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 22:57:04 GMT -5
Frogpaw looked back at his mentor's call, but he caught sight of the monster first, his eyes grew wide and he froze on the thunderpath.
"No Pinefeather!" Northstar shouted as she came sprinting up, she stopped the warrior from stepping onto the path before running out towards Frogpaw. The apprentice was frozen with terror and the only way for Northstar to get him to move was to roughly shove him to the side for Pinefeather to reach for.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 22:58:50 GMT -5
Pinefeather looked with wide eyes as Northstar raced onto the Thunderpath. She moved forward to grab Frogpaw and pull him off the Thunderpath. She then turned away and stepped onto the Thunderpath to help Northstar.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 23:01:15 GMT -5
It was too late. As soon as Frogpaw was pulled from the thunderpath Northstar was hit. The monster whizzed away like nothing had happened, but Northstar knocked down and not moving.
Frogpaw suddenly found himself in the grass behind Pinefeather, he sat up to figure out what happened.
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 23:03:14 GMT -5
"Northstar!!" Pinefeather yowled as her leader was hit. She hurried onto the Thunderpath to look at her. She looked broken and bloodied. She bit down on her scruff to pull her to safety before another monster came.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Aug 19, 2016 23:08:42 GMT -5
Northstar didn't react as Pinefeather dragged her off.
Frogpaw stared at his leader's body almost in a stunned daze, what had happened? Did he do something wrong? Oh StarClan what happened to Northstar?!
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Post by Foxstar26 on Aug 19, 2016 23:15:46 GMT -5
"Frogpaw go back to camp and get help." Pinefeather ordered her apprentice. "Go!" She urged before looking back at Northstar. Pinefeather moved to look for some cobwebs to stop the bleeding.
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Post by HvghDuhh on Aug 21, 2016 12:50:58 GMT -5
U here lostmoon?))
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Post by 🌿 Loѕтмoon 🌿 on Aug 21, 2016 12:51:25 GMT -5
(I have arrived :3)
Echolight padded away from camp, so close to Twistedfoot that their fur was touching.
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Post by HvghDuhh on Aug 21, 2016 12:53:59 GMT -5
"Um. Did you really wanna go hunting or was it because of something else?" He asked her awkwardly.
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Post by 🌿 Loѕтмoon 🌿 on Aug 21, 2016 12:56:01 GMT -5
"W-what?" Echolight paused, turning to face a small puddle. Padding over to it, she continued. "Of course i wanted to hunt" she lied, splashing her paw which had the yew on it into the puddle.
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