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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:53:48 GMT -5
If you did not read The name no one knows and/or Seeing the world in black and gold, please go and read those two first. The story may not make sense if you don't. THERE WILL BE SPOILERS FOR THOSE STORIES!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:54:43 GMT -5
Prologue-
"Buckheart, over here!" Ashblossom yowled. In her teeth a soaked Sunstar limply swung. She set him down on the sandy bank of the lake. Buckheart padded over quickly and stared in horror at his old leader. "He's gone Buckheart" the gray she-cat whispered gently. "Mistylight isn't going to be happy."
Buckheart shook his head and sighed. "Nutchest won't be either." He picked up his body and dragged him back to camp. Mistylight, her belly heavy with kits, ran out of the nursery. She pressed up against Sunstar, her wailing getting louder with every heartbeat. Nutchest stared down at her old apprentice in shock and sorrow.
"Why didn't you help him? You blamed him for something that wasn't his fault didn't you? This is your fault" The light grey she-cat screamed. Her eyes narrowed at Buckheart and her tail lashed. "My kits are going to be fatherless because of you."
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:55:06 GMT -5
Chapters 1-5
Chapter 1-
"Stop your pointless blaming" A large white Tom with amber eyes stood between Mistylight and Buckheart. His head risen high and looking down on the blubbering she-cat. "He was guilty of killing many of your clanmates and my son. The cat that was supposed to be your mate. This isn't his fault. It's your fault for playing so many cats against each other with Sunstar." Mistylight stared in shock at the rouge and shut her muzzle. Buckheart blinked at him and stepped up next to him.
"I need to talk to you. Mind meeting me in the leader's den?" The brown and cream tom asked quietly. White nodded in agreement and left the crowd with a flick of his tail. Buckheart hurried behind him until they both squeezed into the den. "White, this clan needs change."
White flicked his ear, his eyes shining with curiosity and surprise. "I agree. Was that all you wanted to talk about?"
"No. White, how long are you and your friends staying here?"
"I'd say about however long you all need until your clan is doing alright." The tom yawned and shook his fur as he stretched.
"About that, this clan needs a leader White. They need you. You and your rouges were amazing in the battle. You were so in control. I think the clan would be happy to have you as our leader." Buckheart meowed. "It might take awhile to get use to a rouge being leader but-" White cut off Buckheart's sentence by slapping his tail over his mouth.
"No way. I'm not taking control of the clan."
"But why? You and the other rouges seem to get along just fine with us. Surely the others wouldn't complain." Buckheart raised his voice.
"It's not about that" White growled. "I'm not meant for clan life. I need to be able to roam wherever I want and I can't do that if I'm a clan leader. I go where the wind blows. I am only drifting through here." White sighed and looked back at the other tom. "They need you to lead. You'll do fine." He brushed pelts as he slid outside. "I'll be here until the clan is well again and after my son is buried."
Buckheart sighed and left the den after the older tom and headed towards the center of camp. Onepath limped up to him and raised his unkempt muzzle up to look at him. "Are you almost ready to get your nine lives?"
"Me?"
"Well of course you." Onepath snorted. "Ashblossom said she's staying in the nursery until Mistylight's kits are six moons and told me she doesn't want to be a leader. The clan agrees it should be you. Besides, you were deputy before Sunstar lost his mind. Now come on." The old tom hopped closer to his den. "I already have the herbs prepared for our trip."
"Are you sure you're okay to make the trip?" Buckheart asked concerned.
Onepath snorted again. "I made the trip okay with Sunstar just fine and that was only about five moons ago."
Buckheart sighed deeply and his shoulders sank a little. "It feels a lot longer than five moons."
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Chapter 2-
"Don't worry, it'll be fine. Every leader goes through this." Onepath mewed, attempting to soothe Buckheart's anxiety.
"Thanks. I'm sure I'll be fine." The cream and brown tom held his breath as the moonlight shimmered down inside the tight, small cave. He took a few paw steps forward and touched noses with the stone. The cold made his body ache and shiver. He settled down and closed his eyes.
"Look how far you've come. I was so sure I was going to be leader before you. Guess you won the bet" The skinny, brown tom greeted him with a cheeky grin.
"Ratpelt!" Buckheart raced towards him and tackled him. "You flea bag. You weren't supposed to die so soon!" The two toms laughed, taking turns pawing at each other's faces and nipping at ears until Ratpelt stood up.
"Sorry we can't visit long. But you have a clan to get back to and I have a bunch of inpatient cats waiting for me to finish." The long muzzled tom touched his nose to Buckheart's shoulder. "For your first life, I give you pride. Be proud of the clan you're leading and of your kin. Even if some of that kin doesn't have clan blood."
"Thank you Ratpelt."
The tom padded away and a small cream she-cat came up.
"Buckheart, it's been so long and I'm so happy to see you so grown up. I wish your father could be here to see you." She mewed. "But I'm not here to talk about family. I'm here to give you a new life. Buckheart, I give you courage. Use it to create the life you want for yourself without fear." A new feeling of bravery entered the toms body. "Farewell."
"Buckheart." A little high pitched voice startled him. A tiny brown tom with a mix of cream fur met his eyes. "I wanted to show you that I'm happy here and there's no need to worry about me."
"My son. I'm so sorry I let Sunstar-" Buckheart looked down at his paws in shame. The kit shook his head and touched him.
"My gift to you is forgiveness. Forgive those who hurt you and accept the past. It's the only way to be happy." The feeling of fresh air wrapped around him and relief set in.
"I'll miss you." His throat tightened as he stared at the son Sunstar had killed. "I should have stopped him." The kit shook his head.
"I belong here now and I'll wait for you, Ashblossom, and my siblings. But that'll be a long time." He purred and vanished.
"Ghostsight? Sunstar?" Buckheart's eyes widened.
"Hello Buckheart." Ghostsight grinned. His amber eyes lighter and full of life even more so than when he was alive. "Don't worry. He's changed. Even Ratpelt has moved forward."
"Yeah, after attacking me." Sunstar pouted. He looked over at a stern looking Ghostsight. "Yeah, yeah I know. I deserved it."
"Anyways, it's good to see you Buckheart. Congratulations on becoming leader." The white Tom touched his nose to Buckheart's chest. A mix of sorrow and anger crashed over him like a wave. "This is the gift of understanding. Use it to help your clanmates in difficult situations."
"And this is communication. What you don't know can kill you and others around you. Use this to be sure you understand why someone acts a certain way before being rash." The black and gold tom mewed. "I'm sorry for what has happened to you. I hope you can forgive me within time."
Ghostsight nodded at his old mentor before wrapping his tail around Sunstar's and padding away into the stars.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:55:33 GMT -5
Chapters 6-11
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:56:06 GMT -5
Chapters 12-17
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:56:27 GMT -5
Chapters 18-23
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:57:03 GMT -5
Chapters 24-29
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:57:21 GMT -5
Characters-
Thunderclan-
Leader:Buckstar- A large long-furred brown tom with green eyes and a cream colored stomach and a slim tail.
Deputy: Undecided
Medicine cat: Onepath- A small framed grey elderly tom with a white chest and stomach. He's close to becoming blind
Medicine cat apprentice: Stonetail- A large grey tom with black markings on his legs and face
Warriors:
Ashblossom- a short-furred dark grey speckled she-cat with darker flecks and blue eyes and large ears
Nutchest- a small dusty brown she-cat with a cream colored chest and amber eyes. She has a scar going diagonal on her chest (mentor to Ghostpaw)
Stoneleaf- a white, gray, and silver mixed tom with green eyes (mentor to Sootpaw)
Yelloweyes- a black tom with golden eyes
Smallweb- A small brown tom with blue eyes and webbed paws
Greyshimmer- A pretty grey spotted she-cat with green eyes
Searipple- Brown she-cat's with silverish grey rippled patterned fur and green eyes (mentor to Tuftpaw)
Mapleflight- A white and brown spotted tabby with amber eyes (mentor to Hopepaw-)
Apprentices-
Ghostpaw- A very small gray she-cat with blue eyes
Sootpaw- A black tom with gray freckles and blue eyes
Hopepaw- A pale gray she-cat with black paws and blue eyes
Tuftpaw- A fluffy bracken colored tom with green eyes
Queens
Mistylight- a short-furred light grey she-cat with a white undercoat and blue eyes. (Having Sunstar's kits)
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:57:47 GMT -5
Fan stuff-
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:58:04 GMT -5
Authors notes-
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:58:16 GMT -5
Save
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:58:33 GMT -5
Save
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 20, 2017 18:58:45 GMT -5
Open
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Post by Owlmoon on Feb 20, 2017 20:26:40 GMT -5
Hey! Can't wait to see the backstory of this. Sounds good.
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 20, 2017 22:40:44 GMT -5
Yah! New story! I'm really looking forward to this, because your sequels always get me attached to character I either don't care for or don't know much about.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 21, 2017 1:44:48 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by Owlmoon on Feb 21, 2017 7:55:53 GMT -5
Yah! New story! I'm really looking forward to this, because your sequels always get me attached to character I either don't care for or don't know much about. Same!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 21, 2017 8:45:49 GMT -5
Thanks guys :3
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 21, 2017 14:26:06 GMT -5
Hum, I wonder if I should write another one-shot off this series. I've got a good excuse now.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 21, 2017 14:29:40 GMT -5
Hum, I wonder if I should write another one-shot off this series. I've got a good excuse now. Yesssssssssssss
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Feb 21, 2017 14:33:04 GMT -5
I'll just finish up a couple of comic pages and I'll start one.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 27, 2017 11:45:13 GMT -5
New chapter
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Feb 27, 2017 15:13:00 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by Owlmoon on Mar 1, 2017 10:29:38 GMT -5
Hey! New chapter's good!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 4, 2017 4:29:02 GMT -5
Buckheart by me :3
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 8, 2017 5:16:07 GMT -5
Characters updated
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Mar 8, 2017 21:02:38 GMT -5
*whistles* That picture is lovely!!
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 8, 2017 21:52:26 GMT -5
*whistles* That picture is lovely!! Why thank you :3 I imagine Buckheart just like that (besides the antlers)
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Mar 8, 2017 22:07:48 GMT -5
That looks so good. O.O I love your style. The colors work surprisingly well together.
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Mar 8, 2017 22:12:16 GMT -5
That looks so good. O.O I love your style. The colors work surprisingly well together. Thanks :3 to be honest, it was one of my good art days. My style isn't always that good
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