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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Feb 18, 2017 15:34:55 GMT -5
The battle against the Dark Forest should have been a book long or so if it was THAT big of a deal. I personally would have been frustrated yet excited if the Erins gave us an actual cliff hanger. The battle could have taken however long they wanted and they could give plenty of characters decent death scenes. I would have liked to see Ashfoot's death, and an expansion on Firestar and Hollyleaf's death with maybe Squirrelflight having a scene with her daughter, too. Instead of Dovewing's Silence, we could have seen some of the aftermath in the book giving a nice end.
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Bisexual
#ffc5c5
Official Queen of Fan Clans
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ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁
Official ThunderClan & ElmClan Leader
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Feb 18, 2017 18:01:10 GMT -5
according to kate shes not very good at writing stuff like that, since the eclipse battle scene was the hardest part of the series for her to write. (8 I'm Not sure if Cherith can do it. And the point is? It was rushed and just a total mess. There's really no excuse for it.
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