If the Bramble claws vision was misinterpreted by Leafpool
Aug 2, 2016 16:32:22 GMT -5
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Post by Cedarwhisker on Aug 2, 2016 16:32:22 GMT -5
This is a roleplay where Leafpool mistook her dream in sunset with bramble claws for Thorns claws, there for making THORNCLAW the thunderclan deputy. UH OH!
All events leading up to this will be canon, but we will change the events from here onwards, like having Rainwhisker survive the storm in between sunset and The sight.
At 15 pages I am making the Windclan page, and the link will be posted here.
This roleplay is also a claim-a-cat.
Time line
(In character )
July 3rd 2016- The Windclan border is unusually empty of Windclan sent marks.
July 8th 2016- Mousekit, Berrykit and Stormkit become apprentices.
(Out charaters)
ALLEGIANCES
Leader:
Firestar-ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt
Claimed by Cedarwhisker
Deputy
Thornclaw-Golden brown tabby tom.
Medicine Cat(s):
Leafpool-light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Warriors
Dustpelt-dark brown tabby tom
Sandstorm pale ginger she-cat-
apprentice- Mousepaw-
Cloudtail long-haired white tom
Apprentice, Berrypaw
Brackenfur golden brown tabby tom-
Apprentice, Whitepaw
Brightheart-white she-cat with ginger patches
Brambleclaw dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes-
Apprentice, Stormpaw-
Ashfur pale gray (with darker flecks) tom, dark blue eyes
Apprentice, Birchpaw
Rainwhisker dark gray tom with blue eyes
Claimed by Cedarwhisker
Squirrelflight-dark ginger she-cat with green eyes
Spiderleg-long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes
Apprentices:
Whitepaw-white she-cat with green eyes
Birchpaw-light brown tabby tom
Berrypaw- cream tom- claimed by Cedarwhisker
Mousepaw- grey and white tom- claimed by Cedarwhisker
Stormpaw - grey and white she-cat,
Queens
Ferncloud pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat, green eyes, mother of Dustpelt's kits
Sorreltail-tortoiseshell and white she-cat with amber eyes
(Kits)
Emberkit- mostly dark ginger torti tom with amber eyes-
Asterkit- calico she-cat with one blue eye and one amber-
Hazelkit- cinnamon she-cat with odd markings. Her underbelly, paws, under tail, and tail tip are a lighter, russet-tinged cinnamon, while her ears are a red-cinnamon. Her eyes are a deep, forest green.
Daisy-cream-colored, long-furred cat from the horseplace
Elders: Goldenflower pale ginger coat, the oldest nursery queen
Longtail pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight- claimed by Cedarwhisker
Mousefur-small dusky brown she-cat
Rules.
Follow the forum rules and ghost rules, which I shouldn't have to reiterate here. Primarily, though, no flaming, spotlighting, or powerplaying. Also no spamming, it's so anoying.
No mary-sues/gary-stus, and no "-ests." Your cat can be very good at something, but it's difficult to say that they're the absolute best at anything. And they have to have some flaws. Otherwise, how would they get any character development? Obviously no powerplaying.
Obviously, keep things pg- pg 13. That means no very graphic descriptions of violence, no foul language, no very descriptive descriptions of blood and gore and nothing else that would be considered inappropriate for children.
Use a minimum of 3 sentences, unless you have a good excuse (example. Your eating and its hard to type) this is semi advanced so I would not like 16 sentence paragraphs but it's always nice to be descriptive and original. Also no big words that nobody knows, seriously I'm not a dictionary for your use, even though that would be cool.
Try to be descriptive and original. Since the cats are mostly claimed, I don't need to specify about appearances, so this rule mostly applies to behavior. However, should you create an original character, please keep the appearance realistic as well, no purple cats, cats with telekinesis that sort of thing.
Also no killing of cats/animals randomly. We dont want a story with lots of death, where's the fun in that. Don't be afraid to create suspense tho.
I reserve the right to reject any players that I don't consider literate enough or to remove players who don't roleplay the characters they claimed accurately.
If you are gone for more than a month without prior warning, I will remove you and open your characters up for claiming. I will not go chasing you down; liking your posts should be reminder enough. If you claim a cat I would like you to be on at least 4 of 7 days of the week. It's not much to ask.
If you claim a high-ranking position such as leader, deputy, or medicine cat, you must be especially active (check & update at least 6 days of the week, but preferably more). Everyone else should still be active, but as long as you don't trap other peoples' characters and are on relatively frequently, I'm not too concerned about activity.
Feel free to suggest ideas to me, I would love to see your ideas and thaughts/suggestions.
As for everything else, it's just the usual: please don't leave and never come back; if you're gone for a very long time without prior warning or explanation (probably a month+) you will be deleted; if you break the rules you may be deleted depending on the severity of your offense; please use () [] or something of the sort to separate in-character from out-of-character; no spamming unless you are requesting someone to go somewhere.
Thanks- Cedarwhisker
All events leading up to this will be canon, but we will change the events from here onwards, like having Rainwhisker survive the storm in between sunset and The sight.
At 15 pages I am making the Windclan page, and the link will be posted here.
This roleplay is also a claim-a-cat.
Time line
(In character )
July 3rd 2016- The Windclan border is unusually empty of Windclan sent marks.
July 8th 2016- Mousekit, Berrykit and Stormkit become apprentices.
(Out charaters)
ALLEGIANCES
Leader:
Firestar-ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt
Claimed by Cedarwhisker
Deputy
Thornclaw-Golden brown tabby tom.
Medicine Cat(s):
Leafpool-light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Warriors
Dustpelt-dark brown tabby tom
Sandstorm pale ginger she-cat-
apprentice- Mousepaw-
Cloudtail long-haired white tom
Apprentice, Berrypaw
Brackenfur golden brown tabby tom-
Apprentice, Whitepaw
Brightheart-white she-cat with ginger patches
Brambleclaw dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes-
Apprentice, Stormpaw-
Ashfur pale gray (with darker flecks) tom, dark blue eyes
Apprentice, Birchpaw
Rainwhisker dark gray tom with blue eyes
Claimed by Cedarwhisker
Squirrelflight-dark ginger she-cat with green eyes
Spiderleg-long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes
Apprentices:
Whitepaw-white she-cat with green eyes
Birchpaw-light brown tabby tom
Berrypaw- cream tom- claimed by Cedarwhisker
Mousepaw- grey and white tom- claimed by Cedarwhisker
Stormpaw - grey and white she-cat,
Queens
Ferncloud pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat, green eyes, mother of Dustpelt's kits
Sorreltail-tortoiseshell and white she-cat with amber eyes
(Kits)
Emberkit- mostly dark ginger torti tom with amber eyes-
Asterkit- calico she-cat with one blue eye and one amber-
Hazelkit- cinnamon she-cat with odd markings. Her underbelly, paws, under tail, and tail tip are a lighter, russet-tinged cinnamon, while her ears are a red-cinnamon. Her eyes are a deep, forest green.
Daisy-cream-colored, long-furred cat from the horseplace
Elders: Goldenflower pale ginger coat, the oldest nursery queen
Longtail pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight- claimed by Cedarwhisker
Mousefur-small dusky brown she-cat
Rules.
Follow the forum rules and ghost rules, which I shouldn't have to reiterate here. Primarily, though, no flaming, spotlighting, or powerplaying. Also no spamming, it's so anoying.
No mary-sues/gary-stus, and no "-ests." Your cat can be very good at something, but it's difficult to say that they're the absolute best at anything. And they have to have some flaws. Otherwise, how would they get any character development? Obviously no powerplaying.
Obviously, keep things pg- pg 13. That means no very graphic descriptions of violence, no foul language, no very descriptive descriptions of blood and gore and nothing else that would be considered inappropriate for children.
Use a minimum of 3 sentences, unless you have a good excuse (example. Your eating and its hard to type) this is semi advanced so I would not like 16 sentence paragraphs but it's always nice to be descriptive and original. Also no big words that nobody knows, seriously I'm not a dictionary for your use, even though that would be cool.
Try to be descriptive and original. Since the cats are mostly claimed, I don't need to specify about appearances, so this rule mostly applies to behavior. However, should you create an original character, please keep the appearance realistic as well, no purple cats, cats with telekinesis that sort of thing.
Also no killing of cats/animals randomly. We dont want a story with lots of death, where's the fun in that. Don't be afraid to create suspense tho.
I reserve the right to reject any players that I don't consider literate enough or to remove players who don't roleplay the characters they claimed accurately.
If you are gone for more than a month without prior warning, I will remove you and open your characters up for claiming. I will not go chasing you down; liking your posts should be reminder enough. If you claim a cat I would like you to be on at least 4 of 7 days of the week. It's not much to ask.
If you claim a high-ranking position such as leader, deputy, or medicine cat, you must be especially active (check & update at least 6 days of the week, but preferably more). Everyone else should still be active, but as long as you don't trap other peoples' characters and are on relatively frequently, I'm not too concerned about activity.
Feel free to suggest ideas to me, I would love to see your ideas and thaughts/suggestions.
As for everything else, it's just the usual: please don't leave and never come back; if you're gone for a very long time without prior warning or explanation (probably a month+) you will be deleted; if you break the rules you may be deleted depending on the severity of your offense; please use () [] or something of the sort to separate in-character from out-of-character; no spamming unless you are requesting someone to go somewhere.
Thanks- Cedarwhisker
