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Post by Redclaw on Jan 9, 2017 15:20:02 GMT -5
alright, let's get this started.
what do you think about this clan? are the cats from here good or evil? what would you change about them?
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Post by max on Jan 9, 2017 17:54:24 GMT -5
The cats from here are way too perfect. the only bad qualities I see are the ones who were pushed aside for the main plot, I mean c'mon. they're a bunch of heroes, and the ones who aren't aren't for the plot
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Post by β³ H a w k s h a d o w β½ on Jan 9, 2017 22:40:08 GMT -5
Yeah honestly, from what I remember in the books they all seemed pretty mary sue-ish.
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Post by whiteflight on Jan 10, 2017 12:19:16 GMT -5
Thunderclan I liked them when Bluestar was leader they kind of got boring after awhile, whenever the writers talk about them they always talk about them being heroes so that kind of makes me annoyed of them being called the clan of heroes when really we had Mapleshade, Tigerstar, Darkstripe, and Thristelclaw so really they aren't even the clan of heroes.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2017 19:34:49 GMT -5
When Doestar , Sunstar , Bluestar ruled it was awesome but Firestar just made it horrible. So what if he was a kittypet. Doesnt mean he should invite other un clan cats into Thunderclan.
Lets get to the beginning , Rusty is chosen because of the prohecy. He becomes an apprentice then warrior and then a Leader. He leads well for moons with normal Thunderclan standard.
Then the Erins decide lets screw em over and just implant a crap ton of non- clan cats. It just pisses me. Now every cat from Thunderclan is nosey , annoying and lame cat. (( There are some cats that are better than others in Thunderclan but still )). Sorry for ranting lol
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Post by πͺπ¦π‘π«π¦π€π₯π± π°π±ππ―π€ππ·π’π― on Jan 10, 2017 21:32:23 GMT -5
The one thing I care about is that the story needs to be written from the perspective of another clan. Also, I wasn't a huge fan of Firestar's leadership. He was an apprentice for one book, and was a warrior for only 5 or 6 books. It seems like he ranked up pretty fast, especially since everyone knew he was a kittypet.
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 11, 2017 18:42:43 GMT -5
The one thing I care about is that the story needs to be written from the perspective of another clan. Also, I wasn't a huge fan of Firestar's leadership. He was an apprentice for one book, and was a warrior for only 5 or 6 books. It seems like he ranked up pretty fast, especially since everyone knew he was a kittypet. I agree. There hasn't been another main setting really. ThunderClan always tells it. Let someone else do it for once--and I don't mean in an SE, I mean in a series. There should be one series taking place in each of the Clans.
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Post by EthanTheAnnus on Jan 12, 2017 15:27:08 GMT -5
All the ThunderClan characters are usually too perfect. The Clan name is pretty cool, though. The only cats we've really seen that aren't perfect are:
Graystripe (he fell in love with a RiverClan cat then a kittypet) Alderpaw (he's relatable.) Jayfeather (he's cranky, irritable, blind... Would you like me to go on?) Leafpool (she fell in love with Crowfeather) Where as in the other Clans...
In YS, we meet the medicine cat we know from the first book, Yellowfang, who is far from perfect. Then we meet Raggedpelt, who is also far from perfect. Same with Lizardstripe, Brokenkit and so many others....
In CP, we meet one of the leaders, Crookedstar, who again is far from perfect. We meet his brother, Oakheart, who is also far from perfect. Same with Silverstream, Crookedstar's mother and so many others....
In TR, we meet one of the leaders, Tallstar, who again is far from perfect. We meet his mother and father, who are also far from perfect. Same with the visitors, Jake and so many others....
Then we get to BP and BS and FQ. In BP, the only characters with fault are: Bluestar, Oakheart, Snowfur and Thistleclaw. In FQ, the only imperfect cat is... let me get back to you on that. In BS, the only imperfect cats are: Jayfeather, Leafpool and Bramblestar himself.
This isn't nearly good enough. ((Sorry for ranting. It was all in my system. I needed to get it out.))
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Post by wheeledwarrior on Jan 13, 2017 0:26:03 GMT -5
I think it's less that the characters are perfect and more that so many of them are in the background and are underdeveloped, and therefore seem badly writtenβ¦ With a lot of them, there is one or two traits that emphasized and that's itβ¦ And it's impossible to get more development without giving every character their own separate stories (unrealistic), or devoting a ton of pages to a side character who may not appear againβ¦
And while I do agree having some POV from another Clan would be nice, they would suffer from the same problemβ¦ There's just too many characters in Warriors to develop properly unless someone does the things I mentioned above (unlikely). Regardless of what happens, someone is going to get the shaft, and that affects the writing, unfortunatelyβ¦
The other unfortunate thing is that the only way to fix that problem would be to reduce the amount of characters, and the only way to do that is to kill huge amount of them off... However, I don't think fans would react too well to thatβ¦
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Post by cinder on Jan 16, 2017 13:25:12 GMT -5
Honestly, I would make it so that the apprentices are treated better. TC, SC, and WC seem to treat the apprentices a little badly, although RC Seems good with their apprentices. It seems like punishment for apprentices in TC, SC, and WC are punished worse than the warriors.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 21, 2017 8:49:48 GMT -5
* Burns Firestar Thunderclan because I have a deep hateed for him *
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Post by loveeye on Jan 22, 2017 9:04:15 GMT -5
I don't like that nearly all ThunderClan cats are perfect and nice and everything fine. Why are there no cats with bad behaviors or flaws. And I really hate that they are favoured so much, like always messing with other Clans buissnes, making new rules and such. And living forever. I wish that more ThunderClan cats had died in the whole series. The others loose cat after cat and ThunderClan is just immortal.
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