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Post by forestpaw on Jan 2, 2017 19:53:52 GMT -5
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 2, 2017 20:05:11 GMT -5
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 2, 2017 20:33:02 GMT -5
Rules:
- You may post only up to ten names at a time
-be kind to anyone who posts
-don't make a big deal if you get a low rating, or insult someone for getting a good rating
-you may post as many names as you'd like, just not the same ones over and over
-have fun!
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 2, 2017 20:36:34 GMT -5
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Post by Pollen-nose on Jan 2, 2017 20:49:23 GMT -5
(Most of these names are new ones I was hoping to get feedback on. Some may not fit into the series, so I wouldn't base it on that. I added general descriptions to some. I'm not the most confident in the names)
Milkpool - A graceful creamish-white Somali/Javanese she-cat mix. Her long fur is smooth and wavy, giving her a elegant yet regal look. The fur on her cheeks curl and drape down like threads of light, only adding to her soft-to-the-touch appearance. Her eyes are a pale brown color, the pupils milky due to her poor vision. Milkpool is an overall sweetheart, doing her best to make all cats feel equal and more importantly, happy. It's difficult to tick off this darling of a cat, but once you do she doesn't hold back, scolding you like a mother would do to a kit.
Plumbloom - A skinny little white-and-black Somali/Javanese tom mix. He has long, wispy fur that travels along his mostly white pelt. He has dark grayish-black markings on the left side of right side of his face and under his left eye, on his chin, a small dot under her left eye and his entire tail. His pelt is unmarked other than the dark patches, making him look clean. Plumbloom's eyes are a violet color, mostly being blue. Despite his name, he's a real grouch and needs everything to be clean and organized. If you manage to mess with his organization, you'll have fresh claw marks across your cheek.
Snailstride - A short and lean bold brown Ragdoll/Siamese tom mix. His fur is short but messy, giving him a wild-appearance. He has white marking on his front paws, back legs, tail tip, nose bridge, middle of his chin and the hair in his ears. He has faded tabby markings along his back and legs, mostly forming his large blotches due to the unevenness. He has a pair of murky pale green eyes. He's a possessive little runt, unable to share anything of his own with any other cat. He acts like a spoiled kit, claiming anything he wants and expecting others to just go along with it.
Flarestalk - A tall and thin dark almond brown Egyptian Mau/American Short-hair she-cat mix. She has a decent length coat, not too long and not too short. Her classic tabby markings are a darker brown color, the color resembling burnt wood. She has lighter cream fading around her lower legs and stomach. Her eyes are a deep yellowish-green color. Flarestalk is a silent cat, some cats mistaking her for being mute. She only opens her mouth when necessary.
Bushfire - A chubby light Siamese/Munchkin she-cat mix. Her fur is rather long, the fur on her stomach almost dragging on the ground as she walks. Her legs are short, some apprentice-aged cats being taller than she is due to her Munchkin genetics. She has dark Siamese markings and white freckle-like markings across her cheeks. She has a few white splashes across her pelt. Her eyes are a dark amber color. Leaf-frost is an easy-going cat who is very encouraging, perfect mentor material. Her patient and kind nature makes up for her cruel intentions, enjoying the idea of killing prey and trespassing cats.
(I'll probably end up entering more in, these are just a few)
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 2, 2017 22:26:54 GMT -5
(Most of these names are new ones I was hoping to get feedback on. Some may not fit into the series, so I wouldn't base it on that. I added general descriptions to some. I'm not the most confident in the names) Milkpool - A graceful creamish-white Somali/Javanese she-cat mix. Her long fur is smooth and wavy, giving her a elegant yet regal look. The fur on her cheeks curl and drape down like threads of light, only adding to her soft-to-the-touch appearance. Her eyes are a pale brown color, the pupils milky due to her poor vision. Milkpool is an overall sweetheart, doing her best to make all cats feel equal and more importantly, happy. It's difficult to tick off this darling of a cat, but once you do she doesn't hold back, scolding you like a mother would do to a kit. 5/10
This name is very unlikable for me. The prefix and suffix together don't match and sound awkward and weird together. Though, I do get where you were trying to go with her whole form, and I do have to give points for using milk as a prefix because from what I've seen, it hasn't been used often. But pool put after it just sound weird. I would suggest names more like these; milkfur, milkpelt, milkstep, whitefur, whitepool
Plumbloom - A skinny little white-and-black Somali/Javanese tom mix. He has long, wispy fur that travels along his mostly white pelt. He has dark grayish-black markings on the left side of right side of his face and under his left eye, on his chin, a small dot under her left eye and his entire tail. His pelt is unmarked other than the dark patches, making him look clean. Plumbloom's eyes are a violet color, mostly being blue. Despite his name, he's a real grouch and needs everything to be clean and organized. If you manage to mess with his organization, you'll have fresh claw marks across your cheek. 4/10
This is the same type of name as Milkpool. This name doesn't really flow to much, and the prefix and suffix. They just sound awkward together, and would match more of a she cat more than a tom. Though I have to add points for the uniqueness of the name. I've never seen the word 'plumb' used at all, and it's bold to use it in a cat name. Even the suffix 'bloom' isn't commonly used.
Snailstride - A short and lean bold brown Ragdoll/Siamese tom mix. His fur is short but messy, giving him a wild-appearance. He has white marking on his front paws, back legs, tail tip, nose bridge, middle of his chin and the hair in his ears. He has faded tabby markings along his back and legs, mostly forming his large blotches due to the unevenness. He has a pair of murky pale green eyes. He's a possessive little runt, unable to share anything of his own with any other cat. He acts like a spoiled kit, claiming anything he wants and expecting others to just go along with it. 10/10I love this name! It's very fitting for a tom, aswell as unique, and even has a good flow to it. I can imagine this being a minor character that would be in the character. I've only seen sail used a few times in fanfics and Rps, much less stride. Nice job!
Flarestalk - A tall and thin dark almond brown Egyptian Mau/American Short-hair she-cat mix. She has a decent length coat, not too long and not too short. Her classic tabby markings are a darker brown color, the color resembling burnt wood. She has lighter cream fading around her lower legs and stomach. Her eyes are a deep yellowish-green color. Flarestalk is a silent cat, some cats mistaking her for being mute. She only opens her mouth when necessary. 7/10
This name sounds a bit awkward. I love the prefix, because it's not the average bright orange tabby like firestar was. However, I dont like the suffix 'stalk' because it just doesn't go good for a cat name, only on rare ocassions will it flow in the least bit. Suggestions: Firepelt, Firefur, Firefrost, Firefall, Flamewhisp
Bushfire - A chubby light Siamese/Munchkin she-cat mix. Her fur is rather long, the fur on her stomach almost dragging on the ground as she walks. Her legs are short, some apprentice-aged cats being taller than she is due to her Munchkin genetics. She has dark Siamese markings and white freckle-like markings across her cheeks. She has a few white splashes across her pelt. Her eyes are a dark amber color. Leaf-frost is an easy-going cat who is very encouraging, perfect mentor material. Her patient and kind nature makes up for her cruel intentions, enjoying the idea of killing prey and trespassing cats. 8/10
It's a great name, though the prefix 'Bush' doesn't really match with 'fire'. Though I have to say I love the name, so much because it reminds me of one of my OCs. I think it's a beautiful and powerful name for a she cat. Though I would suggest the name Brushfire instead. I know it's not two words mashed together, but it gives off a kind of compeleted, and strong sound to it.
(I'll probably end up entering more in, these are just a few) Congrats! You get three kits! I'll need to post descriptions through PM in the morning though. |
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Post by Pollen-nose on Jan 2, 2017 23:22:11 GMT -5
Alright, heres a few with image references. Splashflower - linkGingersplash - linkCottonflower - linkSteppingstone - linkPipitfeather - linkSmallpuddle - link
Whiteface - link
Batskin - link |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 2, 2017 23:38:14 GMT -5
Swiftsky: A long-furred white she-cat with silver splotches and icy blue eyes.
Brooksplash: A light brown tabby she cat with very pale blue eyes and a while tail-tip.
Spottednose: A white tom with gray paws, underbelly, tail-tip, and chest with darker gray speckles only on his back. (Looking s bit like a badger.)
Sagewhisker: A black she-cat with a brown chest and jade-green eyes.
Runninghare: A lithe, pale brown (almost cream) tom with a bob tail.
Stormstrike: A very dark grey tom with bushy fur and large paws, along with dark brown eyes.
Lightfern: A golden she-cat with darker stripes and a feathery tail
Silentflame: A silver she-cat with bright hazel eyes.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2017 0:39:17 GMT -5
Cinderblaze - Muscular dark gray tabby tom with amber eyes
An excellent fighter, and has a fiery personality.
Willowpool - Long-haired light gray she-cat with blue eyes
A very gentle and caring medicine cat.
Cherryheart - Ginger tabby she-cat with a white patch on her chest
A very loyal warrior who would do anything to defend her clan.
Silverstorm - Thick-furred light gray tom with blue eyes
Unpredictable personality. Good hunter and fighter.
Dawnstream - Long-haired cream she-cat with green eyes.
An excellent swimmer.
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 4, 2017 9:09:06 GMT -5
@cyll @brambleisback Pollen-noseSo sorry for the wait everyone! I'll try and reply tonight! I'm really caught up! Stalkerleaf I will have your prizes done soon after I rate everyone else's names. Everyone! I forgot to mention! important:if you get the rare rating of eleven out of ten, or all of your names are rated ten out of ten you will get a drawing request of your choice for me to draw. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2017 14:51:43 GMT -5
*cough*
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2017 15:39:05 GMT -5
Jaysong
Lilyfoot
Whrolfeather
Skywhisker
Ashfall
Cherrypool
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 24, 2017 17:11:12 GMT -5
((Sorry guys. My life is very crammed at the moment. And i accidentally closed out of the page so I stopped getting notifications. I will try and get them gone though it might now happen for a bit. Thank you so much for understanding!
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 24, 2017 17:47:09 GMT -5
Swiftsky: A long-furred white she-cat with silver splotches and icy blue eyes. 7/10
This name is a generally cute name. I do have to take off points for two things; one, I think this name sounds kind of like a Mary Sue. It's not that bad, and you could defiantly still pass it by as a regular name as long as she has some distinct flaws. Second, there is also a lack of flow to this name. I do generally love the ending 'sky' and 'swift' for a name. Just, they don't sound top quality when put together. Suggestions: Swiftwater, Silversky, Whitewater, Silverspot, icesky, snowsky, swiftsnow, swift pool. Thepossibilities are endless! Expand your horizons!
Brooksplash: A light brown tabby she cat with very pale blue eyes and a while tail-tip. 8.5/10
This name is a very elegant, yet strong name for a cat. I do think it could start to cross into Mary Sue territory depending on the way the she cat acts. I do think that this name doesn't flow perfect,y, but I can't think of any better combinations, so nice job making me stumped!
Spottednose: A white tom with gray paws, underbelly, tail-tip, and chest with darker gray speckles only on his back. (Looking s bit like a badger.) 9/10
I am very fond of this name! The name makes me already have the expiration that this Tom is gonna be playful and curious; a handful! I think that this expectation should be met. So, just a pointer; do not make this cat have a flat, and always serious personality! (I'm not taking off any points for that btw XD) I can also imagine this being in the books as a semi main character. But, I do think I remember this name actually popping up in the series, so for that possibility I had to take a point off. Sorry. Suggestions; Spottedfrost, Spottedfawn, Spottedbranch, cloudnose
(You don't have to take those into mind because I actually love this name! Just look into if the name was used in the original series.  )Sagewhisker: A black she-cat with a brown chest and jade-green eyes. 8/10
This is the same deal with the previous name. I love the name, and I love how it gives off good vibes for the character. I do think that this name was a minor character in the books though. So, look into that as well. I also think that this name could be dangerously close to being a Mary Sue. But nice job with the name! Suggestions; Sagefoot, Sagefern, Sagefall, Sagebush, chestnutfall, littlesage, littlewhisker
Runninghare: A lithe, pale brown (almost cream) tom with a bob tail. 9/10
This is a very cute name. You are very good at making adorable and elegant names that make me automatically love the character! Nice job!! Though, I did have to take off a point for a lack of flow. That suffix and prefix song really blend together quite well. Suggestions; littlehare, runningfoot, runningfern, frosthare, shadowhare, snowhare.Stormstrike: A very dark grey tom with bushy fur and large paws, along with dark brown eyes. 6/10
I've gotta be honest. I don't like this name as much as the others. It's a generally good name, but it does kind of sound like a Gary Stue. It would be a very pretty name for a she cat, but I don't think it works as well as a male name. I also don't like the lack of flow; they both go together very badly, and don't make for that much of a good name. I also feel as though the look, and somewhat the name are copying a lot of boom character and ocs (not accusing you of anything! It's a lovely name!)suggsstions; Stormtuft, Greystrike, greystorm, lightningstrike.
Lightfern: A golden she-cat with darker stripes and a feathery tail 7/10
This name is better than the previous one, but not by much. I love both the leefix and suffix separately, but not blended together. The flow is lacking by a lot. Suggestions; littlefern, shadowfern, sunfern, sunstorm, nightstorm, shadowstorm
Silentflame: A silver she-cat with bright hazel eyes. 10/10!!
One thing I would point out would be to change the eye color from Hazel to a brown, or an orange of any sort. Nice job!
((You have seven kits!!! Nice!! I'll make you kits after I'm finish rating the names we have so far!!
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 24, 2017 18:01:55 GMT -5
Cinderblaze - Muscular dark gray tabby tom with amber eyes An excellent fighter, and has a fiery personality. 7/10
This is a very commonly used, but still charming name. I am very fond of it. I just think both the prefix and suffix are used waaaay to often. So, I had to take off a point or two for that. I also don't like the lack of flow. The prefix and suffix don't really blend well together, but it's not the worst I've seen. Nice job! Suggestions; thunderblaze, Sunblaze, shadowblaze, Cinderfern, Cinderfoot
Willowpool - Long-haired light gray she-cat with blue eyes A very gentle and caring medicine cat. 9/10
I really like this name! I did have to take a point of for the lack of flow (I know I'm nit-picky but hey! It's a big thing when it comes to names!). Suggestions; Willowfern, willowfoot, windpool, Riverpool, sunpool, Silverwillow
Cherryheart - Ginger tabby she-cat with a white patch on her chest A very loyal warrior who would do anything to defend her clan. 10/10
Nice job! Love this name! I personally love the prefix 'cherry'!
Silverstorm - Thick-furred light gray tom with blue eyes Unpredictable personality. Good hunter and fighter. 10/10
Nice job again!!! I love this name as well! I feel like this could even be a name to go in the actually Warriors series! Nice job! You could do a lot with this name, but be careful he's not to much like Silverstream. Also, just a suggestion; maybe this name could belong to a she cat instead of a Tom. Dawnstream - Long-haired cream she-cat with green eyes. An excellent swimmer. 7/10
This is a very pretty name. However, it does sound a bit like a Mary Sue name. So beware of that. I also had to take off points for the lack of flow. Suggestions; Dawnpool, Littlepool, Shadowpool, Shadowstream, Sandstream, Sandpool, Sandwhisker, Nightstream, Nightpool
You have won 5 kits!! Nice job!!
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 24, 2017 18:11:35 GMT -5
Jaysong 8/10
This is a very nice name! I do feel as though it is very close to Jayfeather. I actually think that this name was also used in the actual series, so look into that. Suggestions; Finchsong, Bluefeather, Littlefern, Littlejay, Littlesong, EchosongLilyfoot 10/10
Nice job. A simple yet pretty name. Plus a name I can imagine being in the series. Whrolfeather 10/10
There's nothing really to say! This is a unique, yet pretty name with good flow! Nice job! Skywhisker Ashfall 5/10
I'm 70% sure this is in the actual series Cherrypool 10/10Nice job! You hit my weakness with the prefix 'cherry'. XDYou get four kits!! well done
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Post by forestpaw on Jan 24, 2017 18:14:01 GMT -5
Pollen-nose It's a bit to complicated to do the rating with pictures and it just gets in the way. Can you just post a short description. I've already seen most of the pictures. Thanks!
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Post by Owlmoon on Feb 10, 2017 16:50:26 GMT -5
Ivylight- a white spotted she cat, who will heal with her delicate paws.
Owltalon-brown furred tom, calm and collective, but a dedicated warrior
Moonstrike- white tabby she-cat very brave in battle and has many scars.
Falcontalon- feisty young tom who never seems to run out of energy.
Bubblebounce- a feisty she cat who seems to be blue furred.
Irisblossom- white she cat who is very graceful.
Skycloud- white tom who is light on his paws.
Pineneedle- a reddish brown she cat who's tongue is as sharp as flint.
Snowstorm- a white tom who loves the snow.
Lilacblossom- a she cat who always liked the lilacs from when she was born.
Mintleaf- a gentle brown-furred tom who is a great medicine cat.
I apologize for the short descriptions, but I needed to test these out for something and didn't have much time to do it.
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