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Post by Deleted on Dec 12, 2016 13:32:27 GMT -5
ALLENACIES
Oakclan :
Leader : Larchstar- Huge brown tabby tom with ice blue eyes.
Deputy : Finchtalon - Orange tabby she-cat with soft yellow eyes
Medicine Cat : Voiletblossom : White and grey she-cat with beautiful amber eyes
Apprentice : Batpaw - Black, white and brown tom with green eyes
Yarrowclan :
Leader : Creekstar- Black tom with white legs and brown belly.
Deputy : Voleclaw - Big light-brown spotted tom with large claws.
Medicine Cat : Larkfeather- Black tom with white belly.
Apprentice : Twistedpaw- Orange tabby tom with a white belly.
Lilyclan :
Leader : Otterstar - Brown tabby tom
Deputy : Poppyleaf - Orange tabby she-cat
Medicine Cat : Rainstorm - White and gray tom
Apprentice : Grassflight- Brown she-cat with blue eyes
Dewclan :
Leader : Dovestar - White she-cat with gray belly.
Deputy : Twigheart - Brown she-cat with blue eyes.
Medicine Cat : Cedarpelt - Black and brown she-cat
Apprentice : Cherrypaw - ginger and white she-cat
Ivyclan :
Leader : Briarstar- Big brown tabby tom with white back-legs
Deputy : Lichentwig - Golden brown tabby tom with black ears.
Medicine Cat : Nightbreeze - Gray and black tom
Apprentice : Ripplestorm - Gray tabby tom.
PROLOGUE
Moonstar looked down on Yarrowclan. Its only been 6 sunrises since Iv'e left my cats. She looked down at her precious son. Oh Twistedpaw how one day you will be the best medicine cat ever.The gray she-cat grieved in peace. Her silver patches shown through the night. Before she could lift her head. A black and gray tabby walked up to her. Waspstar ? Moonstar had remembered the tom back when has on his last three lives. I remember how sad Flowerstripe was. " Moonstar Iv'e had a prophecy". The she-cat gasped a little in shock but opened her mouth to respond. " Surely not while the clans are in so much trouble Waspstar". He looked at her with a small glance of hope. He isn't happy about this. " All of Oakclan, Ivyclan,Yarrowclan,Lilyclan,and Dewclan need to be ready". Is my son in trouble ? Is my clan in trouble ? I can't let my cats perish. " Tell me the prophecy". The tom took a breath and then spoke " A twig will snap before long and fall into darkness. Robins wing will flap and land on the snow. And the mallow sky will set free a breeze of peace". " Ill deliver the news to Oakclan. You go to Yarrowclan". She nodded. Even after giving 9 lives to my clan I will give eternity to save them. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 21, 2016 4:59:52 GMT -5
Chapter One.
Twistedpaw woke up in his nest from a long nap. He saw his mentor , Larkfeather. From the other side of the clearing. All what I want to do is mope until I join Moonstar. His mother, Moonstar had died in battle. It was a tradgedy. She lost two lives just like that. Twistedpaw knew that tensions were high over the borders of Ivyclan. If only we let them have that rabbit. His brother and sister. Robinsnout , A reddish tabby she-cat and Batwing , A dark grey tom with light grey flecks that looked almost exactly like Moonstar. They had been grieving too. I must put aside my grief. My clan needs me. Surely Moonstar is now at peace in the hills of shining stars ? The hills of shining stars is where good cats go. And the dark mountains is where bad cats go. Twistedpaw got up on his feet and looked at the prey-pile. I'm not hungry. But his belly lurched. He finally retreated to the prey-pile and got a shrew. Twistedpaw swallowed up the shrew in a minute and went over to the medicine cat den. " Larkfeather ? " Twistedpaw was too see if he was in his den. Weird. He was in his den a minute ago. Twistedpaw went out of the camp and into the juinper trees that covered Yarrowclan with the occasional white spruce, and tall pine trees. He over the dead tree. Before long he smelled a stench of blood. A stench so strong that it couldn't be prey. He stepped towards the border. Larkfeather ! Larkfeather lied there. His green eyes batted with pain. His belly and tail were bitten and scratched. His throat was oozing blood. Why my ancestors ? Must you take away everyone Iv'e ever loved ? Twistedpaw dug his claws deep in the ground. He did a prayer. May you find good shelter, good hunting and peace Larkfeather. You were so wise and patient. I'll never forget you. He buried the body quickly. He had to tell Creekstar. There was a mole somewhere in the clans. And if someone was going to find them. It would be Twistedpaw |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 21, 2016 5:56:46 GMT -5
Chapter 2
Sweetpaw woke up in the apprentice's den of Oakclan. Can we just not train today ? It was hailing and raining for two days now. But she knew her mentor, Whiteblossom. Would make her train. Ugh Larchstar only put me with her cause we have white fur. It annoyed Sweetpaw that she got a cranky old senior-warrior. While her sister. Amberpaw got Goldcloud. Goldcloud was fun and outgoing. And young. Before long. She heard her leader climb the twisted tree up. " Let all cats old enough to hunt in the oaks gather for a meeting under twisted tree for clan meeting to hear my words !". All cats from camp came out of their dens. " Cats of Oakclan, It is haling to hard for apprentices to climb trees. Therefore today we cannot climb trees higher than half-point". There were yowls of outrage but Sweetpaw didn't speak. Climbing trees is our specialty. How do we control that ? The gathering disassembled and Sweetpaw made her way to Whiteblossom. " Sweetpaw, How about we take it easy today ?" Easy ? Whiteblossom ? " O-okay " Sweetpaw stammered. Finchtalon called Whiteblossom and Sweetpaw over. " Your on the hunting patrol. " Finchtalon said firmly. Sweetpaw headed out with 4 other cats and her mentor. " Me and you can try the acorn grounds ? " The acorn grounds is where fat squirrels gather. Those squirrels are so easy to catch. It's like a cat just threw the prey into my paws. She dropped into a hiding position and saw a big squirrel nibbling on an acorn. She leaped for the squirrel and it climbed up the tree. " You haven't won yet ! " Sweetpaw said with delight. She raced up the tree faster than an owl at night. Sweetpaw raced up to the fat squirrel and clawed him with one claw. The squirrel tried to escape her grasp. But she finished the squirrel with a killing bite. Sweetpaw realized she was in deep hail. Her fur was splattered wet. She was way to high up the tree and could see Whiteblossom. She climbed down as quickly as possible. There was something wrong thought. An owl was swooping down to the clearing Whiteblossom was in. " Whiteblossom, Look out ! " She screeched from the top of her lungs and raced up a oak. I have to save her. Sweetpaw leaped down on the owl. Batting its wings. The owl screeched and tried to drop her. Sweetpaw clawed its eyes and nose. The owl was blinded by her paws and fell to the ground. It tried to flutter away but Sweetpaw killed it with a final bite. " You saved my life ! " Whiteblossom panted. " But that was so stupid ! ". Here comes the nagging. Whiteblossom ranted for what seemed like forever. " Now go back to camp ! " He finally finished lecturing her. She had the help of a warrior to carry back her owl. " Sweetpaw ! " Her sister Amberpaw said in suprise. " You caught that owl ?! ". " It was going to attack Whiteblossom so I just leaped for it and it well... died ". " Sweetpaw I've never caught an owl in my life. This truly shows your ready to be a warrior " It was Larchstar. His deep strong voice. " Really ?!" . Larchstar nodded. After everyone got settled. Larchstar called for a meeting. " Sweetpaw, Do you promise to protect Oakclan ? Even at the cost of your life ? " I do " Sweetpaw said proudly. " Then by the powers of my ancestors-" There was a queen wailing. " My kit ! Ravenkit has gone missing ! ". It was Blackflower with her 3 other kits. Puddlekit , Crowkit, and Ashkit. " Im sorry Sweetpaw. But we have to do this another time ". Well then. Whatever it was out there that grabbed Ravenkit wasn't nice. Sweetpaw could feel an evil sensation around her. There is something weird going on. Owls in Oakclan ? Kits going missing. The Yarrowclan medicine cat was killed. I can't standby and watch this. I have to do something. This won't be the end of the clans. We will survive. I know it |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 21, 2016 18:39:08 GMT -5
Chapter Three
Twistedfire woke in the Medicine cat's den. Another day, Another moon. Life seems like it goes on forever. It had been 2 moons since Larkfeather had died. While Twistedfire wasn't having trouble with treating his clanmates. Twistedfire had been getting weird signs. He had found a robins wing in the prey pile. Feathers still on the red bird. Twigs that weren't rotten would snap as he looked at them. The sky would barely snow or hail. Instead. Every single night. A twig snaps while a breeze blows and then the sky turns cream. Are my ancestors trying to reach me ? I must speak with them tonight. Twistedfire knew that it wasn't half-moon but he had to speak with his ancestors. He had to go to the Starkstone. The starkrock is where Medicine cats share tongues with The Hills of Shining Stars. Ill go tell Creekstar. He went to Creekstar's rock den. " Creekstar , I must speak with The Hills of Shining Stars. Im going to Starkstone". Creekstar sighed but finally spoke. " Very well, but I want you to be careful. Losing Larkfeather gave me a fright". He said firmly. The black tom was well lithed and muscled. " Take a warrior with you". Who do I chose ? He couldn't chose Spiderfang. With that murderer out. Robinsnout would be so sad. Twistedfire decided to choose Snipewing. She had no mate or kits. Shes old but shes a good fighter. " Hello Twistedfire". Snipewing said nicely with her tail up. " I need someone to go to Starkstone with me". " I would be delighted to come ". They padded out of camp and went up beyond Yarrowclan. They went to the small trees and bushes of Ivyclan. " What are you doing here ? " A brown tabby tom hissed. " Were going to Starkstone ". I responded with firmness. " Acorntail ! " A golden brown tabby came and called his name. It was Lichentwig. The Ivyclan deputy. " I'm sorry for Acorntail's idiocy " He hissed and looked at the brown tabby. " You may pass throught to Starkstone ". Twistedfire nodded but Snipewing just grunted. Twistedfire padded throught and eventually they were out of Ivyclan and into the moss meadows of Starkstone. " Ill stay out here". Snipewing said calmly. Twistedfire went in. " My ancestors. I need an answer. Is Yarrowclan in trouble ? Are all clans in trouble ? Please guide me with widsom". He touched his nose to the stones pool and touched his nose. Twistedfire woke in The Shining hills. " A twig will snap. It will fall. " A starry cat said. " Robin will pick the twig and screech. Flying over the horizon. The mallow sky will set you free ". They all repeated it once then all said " Free,Free,Free..." It repeated over and over. He could hear sounds of battle and screeches. Hissing and yowling. It started dying out and Twistedfire woke. Am I alive ? But then Snipewing came in and said " Are you alright ?". He nodded yes. " You were screeching like a badger in there ". " Let's just get back home". They made their way back to camp. " Thanks, Snipewing" He thanked her and left. Creekstar you have to hear about this. Creekstar was eating a shrew. " Creekstar, We really need to discuss this".
(( Im gonna leave it there. Tell me how you like the story so far. )) |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 28, 2016 9:29:59 GMT -5
Chapter Four
Blizzardflower woke up in her den in Lilyclan. " Good morning , Blizzardflower You are going on the hunting patrol " Poppyleaf's green eyes popped into her vision. " Alright " Blizzardflower said raspry. She licked her fur clean and head out with three warriors and two apprentices. Blizzardflower had gotten Flashpaw " Hey watch this ! " It was Flashpaw. She had been training for barely a moon. " Save your energy Flashpaw " Her and her brother Breezepaw never stood still. " Today were going to learn how to hunt ducks or any other water birds " Blizzardflower said to her apprentice. " Yay ! " Flashpaw sqeauked. " Can we hunt birds too ?! " Breezepaw said to his mentor. " Were gonna go fishing at the bigger side of the river today ". Breezepaw squeaked also. " Let's go Flashpaw " Blizzardflower ordered her apprentice. They had gotten to the shore of the river. A swan had flew down. It was about to go into the water " Leap with me " Blizzardflower ordered the apprentice. Flashpaw nodded. " Now ! " Blizzardflower leaped and clawed at the bird. It started screeching. But Blizzardflower and Flashpaw killed it. " Good job Flashpaw ! " Blizzardflower was proud. But not everything was right as Breezepaw's mentor . Duckface came in " Breezepaw fell into the river ! Hes drowning ! " Duckface said in a very panicked tone. " Show us " Blizzardflower said and Duckface showed them where. " I can't go go down that deep ! " Duckface exclaimed. " I'm gonna try to get him " Blizzardflower didn't hesitate and took a deep breath. Breezepaw cant die now .... It would scare Flashpaw for the rest of her life. She lept into the stream. Going deep. As she saw Breezepaw's lifeless body. Blizzardflower swam over.Push ! Push ! She pushed up as his body came up and she saw the sky again. Taking in a deep breath. But she wasn't done. " Let him get air ! " She started to pump his chest. Getting the water out. Breezepaw opened his eyes weakly " Flashpaw ... ? " He said in a weak tone. " Im right here Breezepaw " Flashpaw looked at her brother. " Oh thank you Blizzardflower ! " Duckface said. " Don't worry about it .. " Blizzardflower said. " Get him back to camp or else he will get green cough " Blizzardflower told them to do so. They made it back at camp where Scorchflame and Lightfire were sitting with there kits in the Medicine Cat den. " Oh my kits ! Thank you Blizzardflower ! " Lightfire thanked her and Scorchflame gave her an apprecaited nod. She gave them a nod and went on. Something was down there. It was like the river wanted me and Breezepaw to sink and die. Whatever it was. It was evil and I don't think its gonna leave any time soon ..... |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2017 8:10:55 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Lightstrike woke up in the Warriors den in Dewclan. It always feels weird to me .... But Im a new warrior. I will get used to it. But the den had broken down this moon due to the rain. Then came Daisycloud. " Hey Lightstrike ... " She said softly. We know we love each other and I'm ready to settle down at a young age. (( They do the it now lol )). Tonight was the gathering. And the whole clan would yowl his name as loud as ever. The group going to the gathering all came . Dovestar led the group with a flick of her tail as they started walking to the gathering. Dewclan was fourth to arrive. Ivyclan being the latest. The cats started sharing tongues. Two apprentices were talking about their clans. The leaders all climbed to the top of the mountain. " Oakclan will start. Hunting has been going well and we have one new warrior. Sweetflower " The Oakclan cats yowled the name " Sweetflower ! Sweetflower ! ". " But something horrible has happened. Ravenkit has been missing. I suspect one of our rival clans has done this. " He looked at Otterstar and Briarstar. Otterstar hissed. But Briarstar lunged at Larchstar. " Give us back the swamp clearing. And then you get the kit ! " He jumped and clawed at Larchstar's throat. But missed. Larchstar leaped at him. Biting his stomach. Briarstar fell. His body rolled down the mountain. His body hit a large trunk. He stayed limp. " Briarstar ! " Nightbreeze. The Ivyclan Medicine Cat ran over to him. " It was his last life ! " Lichentwig hissed. " Everyone ! Be quiet and look at the sky ! " The Yarrowclan Medicine cat. Twistedfire shouted. Lightstrike took a look at the moon. It was covered. The stars were mad. A huge strike of thunder came down on the mountain. Larchstar screeched. The thunder hitting his pelt. He fell limp. " Larchstar ! " Sweetflower and Finchtalon were in sync. Multiple thunder strikes hit. " The Robin will pick up a twig and screech. Flying over the horizion. The mallow sky will set you free " What was this voice ? This voice was gone now. The moon was set free of the clouds. But several cats mumbled and talked. " Everyone Quiet !" Dovestar screeched. " Dewclan let's go " She ordered. How could Dovestar just leave now ? With so much drama ? We need to discuss this . Our clans are falling apart because of one kit , one gathering . Lets just get back to camp .... Lightstrike looked
for Daisycloud. " I have some news Lightstrike ... " Dovestar said in a cold voice. " Daisycloud has gone missing.. We don't know where she went " She looked at Lightstrike. Lightstrike didn't say a word. Shes gone .... She can't be gone too. Ive had enough. I can't lose her. He ran. He needed to find Daisycloud. There was no way she was going to leave Lightstrike. Daisycloud. Im coming. Just wait .... |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2017 19:43:38 GMT -5
Hello anyone can comment as I have decided to let it be that way. So tell me how you like the story so far.
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 10, 2017 10:47:09 GMT -5
It's a good story. I like how you are telling it from different cats in different Clans. Now, please keep going!!!
Also, I don't know about anyone else reading this but I sorta found the font a bit distracting. (My personal opinion, no ? intended)
I like how you threw that bit of romance in the Lightstrike section.
Please continue....
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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2017 19:42:06 GMT -5
School has got in my way but Ill keep trying to post new chapters. I always rough copy my chapters and make my charecters before applying them to the storyline.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 15, 2017 6:55:46 GMT -5
Chapter 7
Lightstrike didn't know where he was heading. My mind tells me to go this way ..... Its telling me to find Daisycloud. But where could she be ? Why is my mind telling me to go this way ? Lightstrike was now deep in the forest. So deep he could hear tons of birds. Whats going on ? Why are all the birds here ? " Lightstrike save me ! " He heard a voice. Im coming Daisycloud ! " Stop ! " Lightstrike heard a sudden voice. This tom looked like none he knew well. " Your mind is playing games ... Daisycloud is gone. Shes far out of Yarrowclan territory " He growled. This small cat wont stop me ! Im coming Daisycloud ! " Save me ..... " The voice went through the breeze. Lightstrike ran. Way out of their territory. He was now in a shallow moor scoop with flowers and dark blue puddle ... Stop ..... The puddle reflected. Cant you see what your doing ? Don't be a bafoon. Why do you care so much about Daisycloud ? Shes just one cat .... Why would you want her over controlling the clans ? Come , come , come along into the Dark dreams. Come with us .... Maybe I can save Daisycloud if I come with these cats .... Maybe I can find her ........ -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
" Whats wrong with him !? " Daisycloud exlaimed. He wont wake up. But he isn't dead ? Lightstrike please don't leave me to parent these ones alone. I can't do such a thing. Many toms had been interested to become Daisyclouds mate but she wanted Lightstrike ... " Give me a second ! "Cedarpelt yowled. The branch had hit him hard from the warriors den.
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Lightstrike awoke. It was just a dream ? A dream ..... " Larchstar and the others ! And Daisycloud ! " He yowled. Daisycloud looked puzzled. " Im fine .... The Gathering was okay. Lightstrike are you okay ? " She gave a confused look. " Daisycloud you didn't see them ! The gathering ... Poor Larchstar ! " Lightstrike. Dovestar was standing at his side. " Your babbling nonesense Lightstrike .... The only thing that happened at the gathering was Larchstar had been angry about Oakclan taking the clearing ... " Dovestar meowed. " I need a moment with my mate Dovestar " Daisycloud gave a serious look to her Leader. She nodded and left the room. " Lightstrike I have news ... " She said with a scared tone. " Well ? " He gazed into her soft blue eyes. " Im expecting kits ! " She blapped the exiting news out. " Thats wonderful ! " He now had been mood lifted. The same words are ringing throught me ..... Larchstar , Dark puddle , Death , Larchstar , Dark puddle , Death .... What has gone wrong with me ? |
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 15, 2017 18:08:11 GMT -5
Ooh! Suspense!
AND nice new font. That was smart. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2017 7:50:45 GMT -5
(( Im at a writers block rn XD. So if anyone has suggestions for the next chapter then please say so ! ))
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 23, 2017 7:45:31 GMT -5
Maybe a chapter about the kits. What are you going to name them? When are they due? What do they look like? More like Daisycloud or Lightstrike(Cool Name)?
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 23, 2017 7:49:10 GMT -5
Or maybe a nervous apprentice passing her assessment?
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Post by mintedstar/fur on Jan 23, 2017 16:47:44 GMT -5
Or maybe a nervous apprentice passing her assessment? This could be interesting. ^ |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 28, 2017 11:49:20 GMT -5
Chapter 8
(( Im sorry for the long wait I had a bit of Writer's Block ! ))
Blizzardflower was sitting in the cold frost of Leaf-fall. Flashpaw has grown so much .... Shes finally going to be a warrior.... Blizzardflower hoped her apprentice would have a Beautiful life that lived long. She knew her life hadn't gone the way she had always wanted .... Her parents hated clans and left her in died and so did two of her kits. Her only kit left was Grassberry and she still lives with Blizzardflower. Flashpaw is like a daughter to me and I also love Breezepaw. I wish them the best. " Let all cats old enough to swim in the rivergather for a clan meeting under Swamp hill to hear my words ! " Otterstar yowled as he stepped onto the small green hill with the large stream that had sparkling blue sprinkles and lithe green stems with their brown buds. It shined and shimmered. But Otterstar's shadow covered itall. His brown pelt was tabby-striked and he was defiantly handsome . The clan gathered, All warriors came out from their dens to see this. " Tonight we have two apprentices. They have been the strongest of apprentices and will be the newest edition to Lilyclan ! Flashpaw ! Breezepaw ! Step forward ! " He yowled in defiance. " Blizzardflower , Duckface " He gave a stern look to her and Duckface was standing between two other other warriors. " Do these apprentices deserve to be made warriors ?! " He was even more serious. He didn't need actions that were not meant to be made. " I think Breezepaw does. Blizzardflower ? " He gave a look that gentle like his spirit. " I think so " She tried to sound serious. " Then by the powers of our Ancestors invested in me ! I name you Breezestrike and Flashspeckle ! " He mewed loudly. " Breezestike ! Flashspeckle ! Breezestrike ! Flashspeckle ! " The clan yowled. The two newly-made warriors greeted everyone with a look and walked over to their parents. A few warriors had been sleeping but it didn't matter. Rainstorm ran in. And he leaped on the hill. " Poppyleaf has died ! She is dead ! " He yowled. Murmurs and shocks were passed around. Otterstar gave a confused look. " What do you mean ?! She was asleep in her nest. " He hissed in frustration. " No she is dead ! You don't understand ! " He mewed back with sadness in his eyes. " Follow me ! " He started sprinting. Blizzardflower followed. They stopped at the back of their terrtiory where it didn't feel safe ...This place is not where she died .. Infact I can't even smell blood ... " Attack ! " A hiss and screech was ringing throught the small trees. Cats out of nowhere. " This is it Otterstar ... Im done being your second ! You never recognize my hard work ! Im going to make these clans and their horrible system break and kill you all ! Every last clan cat will be finished off from existence. " Poppyleaf hissed. Her green eyes were glaring with hatred. I couldn't believe it ... She hates us so much after all the times she has shared in the clan .... This is it and we are now going to have to fight several others. Lilyclan needs help ... So much help. |
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Post by Owlmoon on Jan 31, 2017 20:07:59 GMT -5
Cliff hanger! Nice chapter. Poppyleaf turns traitor! I liked how you went in with a calm beginning, then made it turn viscous!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2017 8:20:42 GMT -5
(( Hey guys , I dont know if anyone has known this but Ive went throught a small state of depression. Anyways Im so caught in life that I cant seem to continue the story ... And it sucks because I dont wanna leave this on a cliff hanger. I was thinking maybe we could make a Roleplay of the five clans as I dont want my work to all go to waste. ))
(( Im going to make a roleplay page and put it here. So sorry that I cannot continue this. If you want. You can take over this thread. And continue the story. Just PM me why you should continue the story and I will hand it to someone if their any writers willing to take the story. ))
(( NOTE : To continue this story their are the following needed. (( This is if any writers wanna take this over ))
Allegancies dont have to be finished but you can finish them if you please .
Must be able to put out a new chapter. If their is no new chapter in 2 months then I will hand it to someone else.
(( Thanks for understanding and when Im done the roleplay page I will put it on here. ))
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2017 18:53:14 GMT -5
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Post by Owlmoon on Feb 11, 2017 19:41:26 GMT -5
I guess I can take it over. My work will be spotty, though. Just be warned.
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Post by Owlmoon on Feb 16, 2017 8:21:13 GMT -5
Alright, I have officially taken over this story.
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Post by Owlmoon on Feb 16, 2017 8:22:52 GMT -5
Next Chapter is going up now!
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Post by Owlmoon on Feb 16, 2017 8:24:06 GMT -5
Blizzardflower gasped as Poppyleaf launched herself at Otterstar. That’s totally against the warrior code!
Panicking, she turned to the newly made warriors. “Flashspeckle! Breezestrike!” The two warriors turned, pride flashing in their eyes as they heard their new names being spoken.
“Go! You must take a message to the nearest Clans. We need help, and fast!” Blizzardflower spoke hastily. The two warriors bounded away, as fast as they could carry their paws.
She watched in horror as Rainstorm jumped to Poppyleaf’s side. “And I’m going to help him!”
What? Blizzardflower thought in dismay. Nobody’s helping him! She jumped to Otterstar’s side. “You are an insult to the warrior code!” The snarl rose in her throat and Blizzardflower’s fur bushed out.
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