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Captain Americat
"Don't frown, someone could be falling in love with your smile." - Teen Wolf
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Post by Captain Americat on Sept 1, 2016 8:54:35 GMT -5
Lore; sometimes XD I'm gonna poof, though. I shouldn't be on the computer for too long, hehe.
dark; yeah :/ next time you post something for someone to see, maybe you could ask for some constructive criticism? Maybe they'll give it to you then? (:
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 8:55:49 GMT -5
Lore; sometimes XD I'm gonna poof, though. I shouldn't be on the computer for too long, hehe. dark; yeah :/ next time you post something for someone to see, maybe you could ask for some constructive criticism? Maybe they'll give it to you then? (: All right, then. See you?
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 1, 2016 8:58:04 GMT -5
I have. oh well.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 9:51:31 GMT -5
Hey, Thunder!
Glad to hear that it is.
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Post by Thunderheart57 on Sept 1, 2016 9:53:03 GMT -5
The content warning is also a nice touch, because I personally think that Warriors is a series that should be targeted to people 13 and up.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 9:57:23 GMT -5
It is, though it's mostly due to legalities and all that, as far as I understand.
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Post by Thunderheart57 on Sept 1, 2016 9:57:59 GMT -5
I understand that too.
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 1, 2016 9:59:16 GMT -5
I was 8-9 years old when I first started reading it. Between 4-5 grade
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 10:01:35 GMT -5
Thunder: Nevertheless, it's a good idea.
Dark: I started late. I began to read it at twelve or thirteen.
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Post by Thunderheart57 on Sept 1, 2016 10:03:46 GMT -5
I began reading the series back in 2009, and I was 11 at the time. Originally, I did not like how violent the series was, but i got used to it after reading the first series.
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 1, 2016 10:04:16 GMT -5
Lore: it was the first series I would actually read. I hated reading before that
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 10:05:58 GMT -5
Thunder: It didn't affect me, oddly enough.
Dark: I'd heard it was good, so I bought a copy of Into the Wild online to try it out.
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Post by Felix on Sept 1, 2016 10:06:31 GMT -5
Hey guys! I'm watching through the 3ds direct as I couldn't catch it live, should be good!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 10:07:43 GMT -5
Hey! Hopefully you enjoy it. I wanted to see it, too, but it didn't work on any of my devices.
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 1, 2016 10:08:50 GMT -5
My pappy showed my cousin and she showed me and i read nearly a book and a half a day and always forgot breakfast
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 1, 2016 10:10:18 GMT -5
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Post by Felix on Sept 1, 2016 10:22:21 GMT -5
I've caught up with the interesting things, and the most interesting is MUNCHLAX! Love that little guy!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 10:24:41 GMT -5
Munchlax is great, isn't it?
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Post by Felix on Sept 1, 2016 10:26:37 GMT -5
Munchlax is my favourite pokemon. They are the absolute greatest.
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#f0a9e4
Name Colour
Captain Americat
"Don't frown, someone could be falling in love with your smile." - Teen Wolf
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Post by Captain Americat on Sept 1, 2016 11:00:05 GMT -5
dark; oh, that stinks :/ Well, sometimes if you post it on the guild and ask specifically here, someone who has time can help (:
Lore; I'm back, haha
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 11:08:06 GMT -5
Hi, Kay!
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#f0a9e4
Name Colour
Captain Americat
"Don't frown, someone could be falling in love with your smile." - Teen Wolf
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Post by Captain Americat on Sept 1, 2016 11:23:50 GMT -5
How are you? (:
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 11:38:30 GMT -5
Not bad. You?
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 1, 2016 11:52:40 GMT -5
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Post by Felix on Sept 1, 2016 12:06:30 GMT -5
I read the opening, and I don't really like it. It feels like you've got a jug of backstory and have just poured it all on us at the very start, rather than let it trickle down on us throughout the story. It feels unnatural the way you've done it. Since the backstory is most of the opening, I can't really comment on anything else.
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Post by Mother Dark on Sept 1, 2016 12:09:04 GMT -5
Okay thanks. ^_^ i need to reorganize it because I have it all messed up. The part at the top is for maybe a second book after all of that has already happened so it is a recap kind of. Ill put what I would consider the start of the first book at the top and fix everything
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Post by Maplestone360 on Sept 1, 2016 15:02:52 GMT -5
*falls in* I'm back! I was at school..
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 16:14:25 GMT -5
Hey, Maple!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2016 16:31:53 GMT -5
Heyo guys! (Sorry for poofing) So about the names: I've decided to use both, [cause why not?] but I want to make sure they sound good with the descriptions. Wrenik is the Beta Hunter. [posts picture cause I'm too lazy to write a description :P] (Yes they are dogs, ok?) Brother of the alpha, Ra'kashey, his is a smart and sly dog, and always has a snarky reply in hand. The Beta is quick footed, and is the best hunter in the pack. Rotashu is the Beta Guard He is mostly quiet, never saying a word, but during a battle, he is almost a whole new dog. Barking orders out like no tomorrow, he is a fierce war-dog, and can surprise you if you haven't seen him in action before. (Thanks to Kamirah's Puppy Maker for the images!)
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