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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2016 23:36:37 GMT -5
Woo I read it all ^^ I really like it! I can't wait to see what happens next c'x I like how each character has their own unique personality. Nothing is bland or anything. c:
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Post by Jackalstep on Oct 24, 2016 21:41:43 GMT -5
~5~Scarfire~5~Thanks! I will add you! @thewolfsshadow Aw, thank you!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2016 22:42:43 GMT -5
You're welcome!
Now I can't decide if I like this or I Am A Rock better c'x
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Post by Jackalstep on Oct 27, 2016 14:00:35 GMT -5
To be perfectly honest, even though I shouldn't pick favorites among my main characters, I like Pigeonstar much better than Sunny. But then, I put more of my own characteristics into Pigeonstar and almost none into Sunny (except my trademark wishy-washiness!)
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2016 14:26:00 GMT -5
Now that you say that, I think I do like Pigeonstar a little better as well. Both are nice though. ^^ haha xD
I sometimes reflect my own characteristics in my characters too. ;u;
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Post by Jackalstep on Nov 9, 2016 1:26:44 GMT -5
Now that you say that, I think I do like Pigeonstar a little better as well. Both are nice though. ^^ haha xD I sometimes reflect my own characteristics in my characters too. ;u; Adding in personal characteristics certainly helps make them easier to write, I think. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 9, 2016 17:48:50 GMT -5
Yeah, that's probably true.
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Post by Jackalstep on Dec 1, 2016 16:31:00 GMT -5
Planning to get another chapter or two up over Christmas break. It's dead week now and I only popped in briefly to check on things.
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Dec 2, 2016 10:37:10 GMT -5
Planning to get another chapter or two up over Christmas break. It's dead week now and I only popped in briefly to check on things. Sweet! =) |
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Post by Jackalstep on Dec 12, 2016 12:38:26 GMT -5
Okay, so I've got the detailed outline of the next chapter done, and have made some progress in writing it. I don't really want to write it XD but it has to happen for the story to continue...
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Dec 13, 2016 11:34:36 GMT -5
Okay, so I've got the detailed outline of the next chapter done, and have made some progress in writing it. I don't really want to write it XD but it has to happen for the story to continue... No worries! XD It happens to me when I write stories too. You get to the part of the story where something bad happens, but it has to happen. And you want to change what happens, but you know if you do the story will be different and not go where it's suppose to go. Kind of like life in a way. |
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Post by Jackalstep on Dec 14, 2016 22:54:48 GMT -5
Okay, so I've got the detailed outline of the next chapter done, and have made some progress in writing it. I don't really want to write it XD but it has to happen for the story to continue... No worries! XD It happens to me when I write stories too. You get to the part of the story where something bad happens, but it has to happen. And you want to change what happens, but you know if you do the story will be different and not go where it's suppose to go. Kind of like life in a way. True, true. Although in stories, we at least get the benefit of knowing what will happen if we make a different decision! |
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Post by Owlmoon on Dec 20, 2016 21:28:47 GMT -5
Hey, fan me! This is a great piece of work!Please proceed to the next chapter.
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Post by Jackalstep on Dec 21, 2016 19:00:49 GMT -5
Will do! Thank you! I'm probably 1/4 to 1/3 of the way through writing the next chapter, so it's on its way.
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Post by Jackalstep on Jan 4, 2017 1:16:59 GMT -5
Between holiday travels and being sick I haven't had much time to work on this, but the plan is still to get the next chapter out in less than a week. I've been working a fluffy predictable short story in the meantime, although I might wait to finish that as a reward to myself for finishing the next chapter of this.
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Post by Jackalstep on Jan 5, 2017 18:55:13 GMT -5
A wild chapter has appeared!
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Post by Jackalstep on Feb 14, 2017 0:17:25 GMT -5
No updates in the near future; I've got the next chapter outlined, but I'm not sure when I'll have time to sit down and really write. Well, there's a 3-day weekend approaching, so maybe I could get started...
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Post by ~5~Scarfire~5~ on Feb 17, 2017 18:33:00 GMT -5
No worries, life gets busy. (Which is why none of my fan-fics have gotten past the second chapter...lol) I'm really excited where this story is going. =) Keep going!
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Post by Jackalstep on Feb 21, 2017 22:44:55 GMT -5
Thanks  Didn't do any writing over the weekend, but I might tonight, since I don't have much homework left. |
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Post by Jackalstep on Mar 22, 2017 0:19:19 GMT -5
I'm thinking that this is unlikely to be updated until the summer, unless I have time during spring break. But I have so much on my non-school to-do list already, haha.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Mar 23, 2017 21:56:01 GMT -5
WHY DID SLEETSTRIPE HAVE TO DIE ;-; AHHH MY POOR HEARTSTRINGS
This was a wonderful read, Jackal. You keep the pace up really well, which is probably why I sped through this so quickly. I simply couldn't stop reading!
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Post by Jackalstep on Mar 24, 2017 1:05:20 GMT -5
WHY DID SLEETSTRIPE HAVE TO DIE ;-; AHHH MY POOR HEARTSTRINGS This was a wonderful read, Jackal. You keep the pace up really well, which is probably why I sped through this so quickly. I simply couldn't stop reading! Does it sound terribly cruel if I admit that I planned for his death to have that effect on people...way back when he was first introduced? (The Hunt for Red October taught me all about how to kill off characters who aren't a main character, so blame that movie for Sleetstripe's death.) And thank you so much! |
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Post by perfectlypink♥ on Mar 30, 2017 19:19:30 GMT -5
I'm definitely late to the party, but I've read a few chapters and I'm obsessed! Could you add me as a fan?
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Post by Jackalstep on Mar 31, 2017 21:37:29 GMT -5
I'm definitely late to the party, but I've read a few chapters and I'm obsessed! Could you add me as a fan? Thanks! Will do! |
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Post by Jackalstep on Apr 20, 2017 18:31:58 GMT -5
Bump.
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Didn't do any writing over the weekend, but I might tonight, since I don't have much homework left.
