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Post by nem on Nov 19, 2016 17:20:33 GMT -5
We should do a collaboration on it, much rather than one person making it. But it's only if Jayfeather allows us to. For those who don't know, it was a fanfiction about a normal WindClan apprentice, by the name of Donaldpaw, who was teased for his name. So, he asked StarClan for help. StarClan told him to build a wall. It was originally here: link.This is what I think we should develop our story using this synopsis as our basis: "Build that wall! Build that wall! Build that wall!" Donaldpaw is only humble WindClan cat, with no desires or goals in mind. He just want to be a regular warrior. Unless there is an opportunity to become more than that. Onestar was murdered by an edgy Thunder-Shadow-SkyClan patrol, and Harespring, now Harestar, is leader. He is having great indecision picking a new deputy, seeing how Sedgewhisker refused to become his. Harestar decides to do something no leader has ever done before, run an election. Donaldpaw notices that, and he runs. Though he shouldn't be able to, seeing how a deputy must've had a apprentice. But, his amount of support has skyrocketed much higher than it should be. This is all because of one promise that he makes. They are going to build a wall to keep ThunderClan, SkyClan, and ShadowClan out. Barricade the kittypets away. Make the Clans great again. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2016 17:31:49 GMT -5
This actually sounds amazing.
But only if there's a Hillarypaw involved.
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Post by nem on Nov 19, 2016 17:39:34 GMT -5
This actually sounds amazing. But only if there's a Hillarypaw involved. There's definitely a Hillaryclaw. And Berniesand. Tedkit. Marcopaw. Jillsong. Garyjump. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2016 17:40:52 GMT -5
This actually sounds amazing. But only if there's a Hillarypaw involved. There's definitely a Hillaryclaw. And Berniesand. Tedkit. Marcopaw. Jillsong. Garyjump. This'll work fine. |
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Post by Jaysnow on Nov 19, 2016 17:41:58 GMT -5
You guys can go ahead. I won't have time myself, but give me credit for the idea.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2016 17:43:39 GMT -5
You guys can go ahead. I won't have time myself, but give me credit for the idea. We'll give you credit! |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2016 23:51:19 GMT -5
❈ -- lol XD omg i was actually thinking about a prologue for this once
idk if it would work tho
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Post by pastelpills on Nov 20, 2016 0:49:11 GMT -5
I'm so in. This would be amazing.
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Post by nem on Nov 20, 2016 8:48:15 GMT -5
I was honestly thinking that the following events would happen in the prologue:
- Onestar dying.
- Harestar trying to pick a deputy.
- Sedgewhisker refusing to be that deputy.
- Harestar wondering what to do now.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 20, 2016 8:49:46 GMT -5
I was honestly thinking that the following events would happen in the prologue: - Onestar dying. - Harestar trying to pick a deputy. - Sedgewhisker refusing to be that deputy. - Harestar wondering what to do now. This would totally work. I was also thinking about Donaldpaw being born in the prologue. |
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Post by nem on Nov 20, 2016 9:06:38 GMT -5
I was honestly thinking that the following events would happen in the prologue: - Onestar dying. - Harestar trying to pick a deputy. - Sedgewhisker refusing to be that deputy. - Harestar wondering what to do now. This would totally work. I was also thinking about Donaldpaw being born in the prologue. I'd want something that more sets up the main plot than birth. In my world, the death of Onestar causes a chain reaction that leads to the wall. |
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Post by pastelpills on Nov 20, 2016 9:34:16 GMT -5
This would totally work. I was also thinking about Donaldpaw being born in the prologue. I'd want something that more sets up the main plot than birth. In my world, the death of Onestar causes a chain reaction that leads to the wall. That sounds good. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 20, 2016 10:54:28 GMT -5
only if every time he speaks he says 'wrong' at least once
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Post by nem on Nov 20, 2016 11:56:14 GMT -5
only if every time he speaks he says 'wrong' at least once Hillaryclaw: "You're running for deputy too?" Donaldpaw: "Wrong- I mean yes I am." |
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Post by nem on Nov 21, 2016 22:49:17 GMT -5
Bump. ):
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2016 0:47:19 GMT -5
could I join in?
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2016 2:15:47 GMT -5
❈ -- are we gonna make this a fanfic? …or just a random story cx
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Post by pastelpills on Nov 22, 2016 4:43:59 GMT -5
only if every time he speaks he says 'wrong' at least once Hillaryclaw: "You're running for deputy too?" Donaldpaw: "Wrong- I mean yes I am." more like Hillarymail |
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Post by nem on Nov 22, 2016 8:20:40 GMT -5
Yeah. xxfantasyFanfiction. I, personally, want it to be written as seriously as possible, despite having a crazy plot. |
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Post by mEmE on Nov 22, 2016 10:40:06 GMT -5
There should be a short summary between Hillarymail and Haiti
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2016 13:36:35 GMT -5
❈ -- okay
so, can i do all the graphics work then?
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