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Post by kiwi cheesecake on Nov 14, 2016 19:05:11 GMT -5
Need criticism, please. Tell me where needs shading, what anatomy needs improving, etc.
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Post by 𝕊’𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 on Nov 14, 2016 19:30:14 GMT -5
OOC Well the nose could use some readjustment, it makes it appear like there's a lot of space between the eyes and the nose, and compared to the eyes, the nose and the mouth are sort of small, but it looks really good so far!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 14, 2016 20:09:27 GMT -5
i hate critiquing because im always afraid of hurting people, but as im typing i can think of a bit of criticism. so if you want to read it then here: 1-eyes are suppose to be halfway in the middle of the head. also, if you go across the head, there should be enough room to fit 5 eyes. there should be 1 eye length between the eyes, and 1 eye length between the eye and the side of head. but if its your style, you can bend the rules a little. i still suggest making the eyes a little closer together.
2-the nose is pointed to the side. practice front view noses. there could also be shading along the bridge of of the noses sides.
3-there are no eyebrows. when there are eyebrows, put shading between them and the top of the eye. but be careful with this and practice.
3 1/2-i ate an onion. im dead.
4-the head is a bit oddly shaped, but then again if its your style then ok. bend the rules carefully.
5-give her a little more chin.
6-the neck is a little thin. work on that.
7-the collar bone is just 2 little lines sorta. look up some pictures.
8-there could be more shading under the hair and head
9- i almost forgot about this one, but the edges of the mouth should come to about the middle of the eyes.
overall, make your lines a little nicer and work on anatomy. do a little more shading too. but nice work, she looks good.
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Post by Suspicious Toast on Nov 14, 2016 21:05:53 GMT -5
Okay I'm just going to leap I to harsh criticism if thats okay. Im bad at balancing it so right now I'm just gonna say it looks good, but things you could improve upon, (and I will be very blunt, please don't get hurt over it because it's just me trying to push you to be better):
The head shape is strange. It should be equally wide as the neck. The hair doesn't end. I'd make that more defined, also less dark. Even though its black hair, it's still effected by lighting. The face isn't proportioned very well. Move the nose to a more central position, and make it bigger. The eyes are too far up and far apart from each other. The shading could also use some work. You seem to be just using a blur tool? Dont do that. Try to blend manually, it'll make things look better and make the eyes fit better with the rest of the drawing. Also, make your shading more adventurous or dramatic. You have really dark shadows, but there's just one line of shade and the rest is lighter. Try to add multiple layers to your shadows (darken more area with an in-between shade). Also, make use of lineart. The chin and jawline just blends straight into the neck and it looks unnatural.
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