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Post by mintedstar/fur on Sept 29, 2017 14:38:59 GMT -5
BTW you guys are gonna freak out over this next chapter I'm predicting massive capitalized fonts NO YOU HAVE NOT GIVEN US ONE! see. capitalized fonts.
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Post by Mᴏᴏɴ - - on Sept 29, 2017 15:28:11 GMT -5
» ѕнαdσω ⚔️ ;; oOF, Thank you! I'm glad you like it!! I had fun drawing her expression. <3
Well, I am a Seer after all. So maybe I am... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Also I'm really hyped for Chapter 33! Ready to start hollering, tbh. :'0
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Sept 29, 2017 15:30:49 GMT -5
Mᴏᴏɴ - - that artwork is amazing! And no, I don't think we've had a sneak peak. STOP TANTALISING US, SHADOW!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Sept 30, 2017 15:25:47 GMT -5
SNEAK PEEK #1 chapter 33 - and the silver-tongued devil speaks A loud roar echoes through the crack in the wall. The sound of at least a clan-sized audience yowling in excitement makes my fur stand on end. I take in a deep breath, trying to calm my sudden nerves. I felt excitement yesterday, but now knowing a bit more about Snow’s flawless win streak, I am beginning to wonder if taking on this challenge was a mistake. “Do not be afraid,” a voice says calmly next to my ear. I flinch, turning to my right to see Falconwing, her bright yellow eyes focused on the light coming in through the crack in the wall. Great StarClan, when was the last time I saw her? Wasn’t it during the initiation to become a warrior? Yes, that’s right. She helped me rescue Eaglefrost when he fell from the path on MountainClan’s northernmost border. It feels like forever ago. Another life.She was good to me, and tried her best to help. Is she here to help me now? “Falconwing…why are you here?” I ask, shock and gratitude mixing in my voice. She doesn’t move. She is still staring at that crack, almost as if she too is frozen in place by the roar of the crowd outside. “Your ancestors have been too busy chasing down Shadowhunter to come aid you, and I am fed up with my daughter’s secrets,” she says firmly, finally moving her eyes to mine. “Now that your clan is no more, there is no reason for you to hide your powers for your safety.” “My safety?” “Cursed were hated for most of their history,” Falconwing confirms. “They were feared as dark, unforgiving creatures with a power too overwhelming to control. Clan leaders were ordered to execute Cursed cats by StarClan. Now that you don’t have a clan and thus a leader, you can be who you were meant to be without fear.” Horror crawls under my skin. “How have they gotten away with that?” I hiss. Falconwing shakes her head. “That I cannot answer. Take comfort that there is a leader like Owlstar today who is willing to give our kind a chance. Maybe when MountainClan is rebuilt, they can do the same.” “I’ll make sure of it,” I growl, nodding to her. She smiles grimly, turning her attention back to the small window into the arena. “She is a silver-tongued devil, Shadowface. Do not let her ease you into confidence,” she warns me. I look down at my paws, flexing my claws against the cave floor. “I know.” “You have kits now. I know you would be willing to sacrifice yourself for them, but I beg of you, do not leave them to this fate.” I swivel my head toward her, my eyes widening, but before I can say anything, her form fades, and a feeling like sand rubbing itself against my skin whips through my fur, leaving me with a feeling of foreboding. At least she came to show her support, right? I sigh, lowering my head and taking in a mouthful of herbs as the crowd suddenly becomes louder. It must be time. Ready or not, Snow. Here I come.
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 30, 2017 16:26:48 GMT -5
It begins!
And at least Falconwing came, nice to know one of Shadowface's Ancestors care about her right now.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Sept 30, 2017 16:32:04 GMT -5
Yes! It is nice, especially for Shadowface, who I feel like got dealt a bad hand with her ancestors xD
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 30, 2017 16:57:42 GMT -5
Yes! It is nice, especially for Shadowface, who I feel like got dealt a bad hand with her ancestors xD Indeed. They're relatively unhelpful. And I'm not going to even go into Shadowhunter as a whole given my feelings about her.
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Post by Mᴏᴏɴ - - on Sept 30, 2017 17:03:39 GMT -5
Aghh, this is so exciting, Shadow! Love it so far. <3
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Sept 30, 2017 17:07:17 GMT -5
x'D
Given how long this chapter will turn out to be I may be dropping one or two more little peeks!
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Post by Katanaheart on Sept 30, 2017 17:12:31 GMT -5
x'D Given how long this chapter will turn out to be I may be dropping one or two more little peeks! Yay! More info! Which is nice to have in between waits.
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Post by Dingoleap on Sept 30, 2017 23:11:40 GMT -5
Jumping on for a few minutes and was hecka confused until I realised that Shadow changed her screen name XD
Confusion aside, awesome sneak peak! I'm looking forward tot he rest of the chapter!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 0:21:47 GMT -5
LOL Apologies Dingo <3 It's the human name for Shadowhunter btw AND TY TY
FIGHT SCENE IS DONE WRAPPING UP THE CHAPTER NOW It's at 32 pages right now, so it may be just under 40 once I get this final scene finished.
Also, a little fun advice/saying to help you with your fight scenes. "VIOLENCE IS A DIALOGUE"
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 1:23:43 GMT -5
No more sneak peeks. You know why? Because Chapter 33 Is Finished
I'M POSTING IT NOW
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 1:59:55 GMT -5
Alright it is posted!
Chapters 34 - 40 have generic plots written out, so, officially, I can say Curse will be 40 chapters + a prologue. On the front page I have tentative title chapters for each, so enjoy your speculations! (The title for the Epilogue is final though)
I will begin writing chapter 34 tomorrow after I get some things done for myself. Feel free to ask me questions and give me feedback after you read chapter 33!
I would especially like feedback on the fight. o.o
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Post by Katanaheart on Oct 1, 2017 2:16:01 GMT -5
I feel like this escape attempt shall be for nothing...
Snow controls them now, it would be as easy as commanding Shadowface to kill Eaglefrost, then it would be all over...
Also we still have a Darkmoon around, so not the last Cursed cat.
Silver eyes though. Doesn't Darkestday have silver eyes? Or was this Spottedmoon's genes?
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Post by Katanaheart on Oct 1, 2017 2:17:00 GMT -5
As for the fight, this is my first time hearing about a "spider move,"
Also Snow's powers seem ice related with the appearance of Fire.
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Post by Mᴏᴏɴ - - on Oct 1, 2017 8:47:07 GMT -5
Holy heck, I'm halfway through and it's already awesome! I'll be reading the next part soon, but the buildup is very good! Shadowface's getting a few answers now, I see.
Also, speaking of her, I found a new song that I think really fits her, most likely in the sense that her curse is looming at her back, ready to strike once time runs out for her. It's called "Find Me" by TeZATalks.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 11:47:34 GMT -5
Katanaheart Whoops, you got me there. Kinda forgot about Darkmoon in that sense, but I can try and explain a reasoning for you. Snow really doesn't like Darkmoon because of her Curse. One thing Snow fears most is the way she will die. (I can't portray this too well in Curse sadly) So Snow wants nothing to do with Darkmoon, and would rather not run the risk of getting cursed. If they fought for real, it would be a battle of who would Curse who first, and you could say Snow could just command Darkmoon to revoke the Curse, but there is a special condition/rule that all Cursed are bound to: Only the "caster" can take back a Curse. Once it is said, it cannot be changed by anyone or anything.
Of course there be loopholes about but I won't go into that for sake of simplicity. :'D
As for the escape, I will only point to Eaglefrost, and say, "He is a guardian."
Both Darkestday and Spottedmoon had the same silver eyes. (': ( But did they have the curse power? :'O )
"Spider move" was a joke. x'D Akiro/Tuesday provides comic relief during the fight.
Yes! I am using the "ice" part of her power to both show how different she is from other Cursed, AND also as a call back to her history which there won't be much of here, but you can infer from this chapter that, like Intalia, Snow was found possibly abandoned in the winter time by the rogues. Mᴏᴏɴ - - - Yaya! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. :'D I'm checking out that song now!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 11:59:12 GMT -5
OH BTW For this chapter the new cameos are: Red = KatanaheartIvy = MosspoolIntalia = ⁻ ⁻ ☾ ᵇˡᵘᵉ ᵐᵒᵒᶰBerry = Razz I couldn't fit more, but I promise the others will be featured in a upcoming chapter. If not then I will reveal them here and try to re-write chapter 32/33 to fit more in.
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Post by Mᴏᴏɴ - - on Oct 1, 2017 12:31:55 GMT -5
» ѕнαdσω ⚔️
Wow, this chapter was great, and very climactic. Never expected Snow to have such similar powers, but with this... chilling effect that just freezes your bones, and snaps them into whatever place the user wills you to. Such a contrast to Shadow's blazing skin-scorching heat. It was a very intense chapter; I could imagine it all in my head, like a movie.
Also, Eagle is back! I had a hope that he'd show up sooner or later, but I wasn't sure when. :'>
And yes, I also had a callback to Spottedmoon and Darkestday as well; I wonder if they're interconnected somehow.
Another thing I remember that I can possibly tie to this is the snippet you gave us of "A Tale of Snow". Although it was humanized, I do remember the abandoned little girl and the baby she held tight, even when under the influence of cold The White Death. I always wondered if that baby was Snow...
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Post by Mosspool on Oct 1, 2017 12:52:07 GMT -5
AHHHHHHHH!! That chapter was so good! The fight was super epic, one of the best fights that I’ve ever read. And Eaglefrost is back!! I’m so excited. Also I made a cameo! Thank you so much! The funny thing too is that Ivy is one of my favourite names xD
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Post by Katanaheart on Oct 1, 2017 13:36:03 GMT -5
OH BTW For this chapter the new cameos are: Red = KatanaheartIvy = MosspoolIntalia = ⁻ ⁻ ☾ ᵇˡᵘᵉ ᵐᵒᵒᶰBerry = Razz I couldn't fit more, but I promise the others will be featured in a upcoming chapter. If not then I will reveal them here and try to re-write chapter 32/33 to fit more in. Wait, cameos? And I was one of them?
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 16:42:04 GMT -5
» ѕнαdσω ⚔️
Wow, this chapter was great, and very climactic. Never expected Snow to have such similar powers, but with this... chilling effect that just freezes your bones, and snaps them into whatever place the user wills you to. Such a contrast to Shadow's blazing skin-scorching heat. It was a very intense chapter; I could imagine it all in my head, like a movie.
Also, Eagle is back! I had a hope that he'd show up sooner or later, but I wasn't sure when. :'>
And yes, I also had a callback to Spottedmoon and Darkestday as well; I wonder if they're interconnected somehow.
Another thing I remember that I can possibly tie to this is the snippet you gave us of "A Tale of Snow". Although it was humanized, I do remember the abandoned little girl and the baby she held tight, even when under the influence of cold The White Death. I always wondered if that baby was Snow... Thank you, Moon! :'3 I tried to never let on that Snow was Cursed in any capacity, but when you give it a moment and think how she was controlling other cursed, it was the only option. I'm glad you didn't see it coming. I wanted it to be shocking!
Yes, he is finally back, and he won;t be going away again, I promise. (':
They are, and we will find that out very very soon!!
The girl holding the baby is Spottedmoon, and the baby is her younger human sister who she was keeping warm with her cursed heat. (':
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 16:44:04 GMT -5
AHHHHHHHH!! That chapter was so good! The fight was super epic, one of the best fights that I’ve ever read. And Eaglefrost is back!! I’m so excited. Also I made a cameo! Thank you so much! The funny thing too is that Ivy is one of my favourite names xD AHHH THAT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME YOU HAVE NO IDEA <33 Yes, Tuesday's son is back lol AND YES, you did! :'D I apologize for not giving you more dialogue. I thought it was funny that she turned down Snow. x'D That's actually way too perfect :'O
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 16:45:45 GMT -5
Katanaheart Of course you were! WHY WOULDN'T YOU BE Red was very fun to design. She's a redish Japanese bobtail. <3 I took inspiration from your username for the look!
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 16:49:14 GMT -5
ACK I FORGOT WINDSEEKER Here are all the cameos this chapter (new ones) and their descriptions! Red – Katanaheart – A calico Japanese bobtail she-cat with dark amber eyes and a shredded ear. Brave and fierce, she was a member of PineClan before Snow’s invasion. Defected after witnessing Snow’s ‘curse taming’ power and wanting to learn what else she had to offer. Berry – Razz – Small dusty brown tom cat with a fluffy neck and upturned ears with large tufts and yellow eyes. The unofficial “medicine cat” of the rogues. Intalia – ⁻ ⁻ ☾ ᵇˡᵘᵉ ᵐᵒᵒᶰ – The youngest of Snow’s inner circle. She has soft white fur with a pink nose and grey tabby patches. Snow keeps her close at all times and usually explains all her decisions and choices to her. It is not certain whether she is being groomed to become the next leader or if Snow has a soft spot for the young she-cat she has raised and refuses to let her leave her sight. Ivy – Mosspool – A supple Bengal patterned she-cat with soft green eyes and a long, whip like tail. Not a member of Snow’s circle even though she has been a loyal follower since before her reign. It is rumored that Ivy may have angered Snow after refusing her romantic advances. Windseeker - Windsong – Absynnian she-cat with slanted yellow eyes and delicate facial features. She was rumored to once be a medicine cat from TundraClan who defected over after she saw a vision from StarClan describing Snow’s arrival. She is now a healer and ‘seer’ to Snow and delivers prophetic messages.
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Post by Katanaheart on Oct 1, 2017 17:53:04 GMT -5
Katanaheart Of course you were! WHY WOULDN'T YOU BE Red was very fun to design. She's a redish Japanese bobtail. <3 I took inspiration from your username for the look! I see! (That suddenly makes sense now, given the Japanese bobtail look! ) Thank you, Shadow!
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Post by Mosspool on Oct 1, 2017 18:10:24 GMT -5
AHHHHHHHH!! That chapter was so good! The fight was super epic, one of the best fights that I’ve ever read. And Eaglefrost is back!! I’m so excited. Also I made a cameo! Thank you so much! The funny thing too is that Ivy is one of my favourite names xD AHHH THAT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME YOU HAVE NO IDEA <33 Yes, Tuesday's son is back lol AND YES, you did! :'D I apologize for not giving you more dialogue. I thought it was funny that she turned down Snow. x'D That's actually way too perfect :'O <3 I’m just happy I was even in it! xD That was funny.
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Oct 1, 2017 18:17:16 GMT -5
Psshhh you two. You both have been reading Curse for a long time now. Y'all deserve cameos and much more. <3
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Post by Mᴏᴏɴ - - on Oct 1, 2017 18:28:14 GMT -5
» ѕнαdσω ⚔️
Wow, this chapter was great, and very climactic. Never expected Snow to have such similar powers, but with this... chilling effect that just freezes your bones, and snaps them into whatever place the user wills you to. Such a contrast to Shadow's blazing skin-scorching heat. It was a very intense chapter; I could imagine it all in my head, like a movie.
Also, Eagle is back! I had a hope that he'd show up sooner or later, but I wasn't sure when. :'>
And yes, I also had a callback to Spottedmoon and Darkestday as well; I wonder if they're interconnected somehow.
Another thing I remember that I can possibly tie to this is the snippet you gave us of "A Tale of Snow". Although it was humanized, I do remember the abandoned little girl and the baby she held tight, even when under the influence of cold The White Death. I always wondered if that baby was Snow... Thank you, Moon! :'3 I tried to never let on that Snow was Cursed in any capacity, but when you give it a moment and think how she was controlling other cursed, it was the only option. I'm glad you didn't see it coming. I wanted it to be shocking!
Yes, he is finally back, and he won;t be going away again, I promise. (':
They are, and we will find that out very very soon!!
The girl holding the baby is Spottedmoon, and the baby is her younger human sister who she was keeping warm with her cursed heat. (': You're welcome, dear!!
I honestly wondered that for a while. How can a "normal" cat control Cursed if they possess so much power? It was a very nice reveal. <3
Awesome~ I figured so!
Ohh! That's cool; never would've thought that.
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