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Post by .drifting feather. on Oct 28, 2016 17:49:52 GMT -5
I'm drawing the banner for an RP and I wanted to see if there was anything I could fix before I finalize lines and begin to color? So, anyone see anything to improve???
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2016 18:26:08 GMT -5
That's really good! The ears are really pretty, and I like how the cats are positioned in the back. I'm sorry that I have no critique for you though.
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Post by Sootfeather on Oct 29, 2016 16:33:51 GMT -5
I don't have much, but I think the cat's nose is too small. It looks nice though!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 30, 2016 12:27:25 GMT -5
the cat's nose is a little small but other then that the proportions are flawless!! i love this its really nice
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Post by .drifting feather. on Oct 30, 2016 14:24:58 GMT -5
Thanks to everyone who critiqued, I appreciate it!
(I knew I couldn't trust that nose)
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Post by pigsarelife on Nov 1, 2016 0:01:46 GMT -5
I almost think you should take out the cats in the background. I'm holding my hands over them trying to picture it without them and in my opinion, it looks so much better. If they're an important part of the theme you're trying to convey with your drawing, then obviously keep them, but I would definitely recommend giving them far less detail than your main cat so that it doesn't get cluttered and the eye knows where to focus.
But yeah your proportions are great (I didn't even notice the nose till other people pointed it out.) I also love the style you used for your trees.
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