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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Nov 30, 2022 11:21:25 GMT -5
Also, I apologize for taking so long to get back to you.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Nov 30, 2022 11:42:21 GMT -5
Cat Name : Robinpaw Username : lunapaw Clan : ThunderClan Rank : Apprentice Description : An orange she-cat with lighter orange mackerel stripes and mittens. She has a variety of shades of orange spread throughout her face, and a short stub of a tail with a lighter-orange tip. She has emerald green eyes.  Personality : She often bites off more than she can chew, though she is a brave and compassionate young she-cat with an eagerness to learn. She is often found training either alone or with a mentor, and hopes to become a great warrior one day. Robinpaw is a bright and bubbly she-cat who is very eager to learn, and has a big heart. She has a passion for life as a warrior, and strives to be just like her father. She is confident and excels when it comes to her training. She is well-mannered, and is often asked for favors by her other clanmates. She is always willing to lend a helping hand, and others often come to her for advice as well. Robinpaw enjoys participating in clan patrols, and is often seen wandering around clan grounds on her own accord. She is a diligent and agile she-cat who is often found chatting with her clanmates, and likes to engage in occasional gossip. History : Robinpaw never really knew much about her mother, her father was often secretive regarding the topic and never told her much about what had happened. She didn’t have any memory of her, though she was always extremely close with her father. Flamepelt raised her all on his own, which contributed to their close bond. She never had many friends, though she never let that taint her confidence. Robinpaw grew up an exuberant and adventerous kit, who often has trouble staying focused. She thinks of her mother often, which can sometimes distract her from her duties. Family : Father --> Flamepelt Codeword : Foxstar26 Am I accepted? Cat Name : Flamepelt Username : lunapaw Clan : ThunderClan Rank : Warrior Description : An orange tabby tom with various shades of an orangeish brown spreading throughout his tail and within his face. He has darker brown mittens with lighter orange mackerel markings on his coat. He has emerald green eyes. He is a large tom with short whiskers and a long, fluffy plumed tail.  Personality : He is a fierce and loyal warrior whose ambition is what drives him. He is often mistaken as arrogant, though he is rather charming and humble. Flamepelt shows great care for his kit, Robinpaw. He is extremely skilled, and finds ways to show off his said excellence on patrols with his clanmates. He is a good-hearted tom, with great compassion for others. He has a strong sense of life in itself, and is always on alert. He often keeps to himself, though he doesn’t mind engaging in conversation with his fellow clanmates. Flamepelt is a large tom, though he was rather scrawny and small when he was a young kit. He has a great passion for life as a warrior, and commits to his lifestyle full time. He enjoys going on patrol, and spending time with Robinpaw. He is often seen sunbathing on various rocks or bringing back a load of prey. History : Flamepelt fought on his own against rogues and even other loners as time went on, until he met his mate and had a kit of his own. However, his mate died in a fight and only his kit survived, who would come to be known as Robinpaw. Flamepelt once lived as a loner, fending for himself as his mother had abandoned him when he was only 3 moons old. He struggled surviving all on his own for quite some time, and even got in fights with other cats. However, eventually Flamepelt met a she-cat by the name of Ruby. She was a gorgeous ginger she-cat with bright eyes and a kind soul. The two began to always look out for one another, and became quite dependent on each other. They soon became mates, and had a kit of their own. After some time, more rogues began to enter their territory one by one. Flamepelt knew he had to take action, and got in many fights with them. In a battle with other loners, Ruby lost her life, and their kit was all that remained. Flamepelt decided to name her Robin, and always stayed close to her. He was right by her side at all times, and was always there to look after her. Flamepelt and Robin lived alone for quite some time as he mourned, until he finally sought a better life for them. He wanted Robin to be raised within the safety of a clan, and luckily he found a place where they could have the protection in which he sought. Family : Kit --> Robinpaw | Mate --> Tawnyfur Codeword : Foxstar26 Am I accepted? Cat Name : Tawnyfur Username : lunapaw Clan : ThunderClan Rank : Queen Description : A ginger she-cat with darker mackerel spots across her coat. She has various shades of orange within her tail, face, and her mittens. She has a long and fluffy pelt. She’s a gorgeous she-cat with long whiskers and a fluffy plumed tail.  Personality : Tawnyfur is kindhearted and sincere, though she always maintains constant focus on the task at hand. She is extremely empathetic, though she often does not finish what she starts. She’s often found looking after her kits in the nursery, or helping her kit Robinpaw train. She’s a compassionate she-cat with great determination. She prides herself in her love for her kits, as she is an extremely caring queen. She enjoys chatting with clanmates, especially other queens who share her interests. History : Tawnyfur met Flamepelt shortly after he joined the clan, and began to help out with taking care of his kit, Robinpaw. The two bonded closely, as he felt she was the only cat within the clan that he could trust. She didn’t mind looking after a kit that wasn’t her own, as she had always dreamt of having kits of her own, and this was the closest thing to it that she had ever felt. After spending quite a bit of time together, the two shortly became mates. Tawnyfur expressed her longing to have kits of her own to her mate, and the two shortly did. She gave birth to three healthy kits, and was beyond estatic. Family : Kits → Gingerkit, Briarkit, Elderkit | Mate →Flamepelt Codeword : Foxstar26 Am I accepted? Cat Name : Thunderbite Username : lunapaw Clan : ThunderClan Rank : Warrior Description : A yellow tabby with darker-yellow patterned markings and dark yellow mittens. He has various shades of yellow plaguing his face and tail, as well as his ears. He has a darker yellow stripe that reaches across his spine.He has a notch in his left ear, from a fox attack.  Personality : A fierce and skilled hunter who spends most of his time either on patrol or mentoring an apprentice. He is ferocious in battle, and passionately driven by his ambitions. Primarily, Thunderbite is brave and regarded as a considerate cat. He is reserved, warm-hearted, and extremely kind. He is a hopeless romantic, and often finds himself too quickly and overly interested in she-cats. Thunderbite is an admirable tom with great pride held about him, and he maintains his reputation through various acts of service. He is often seen helping out wherever he can, revealing his great compassion. He has always been a gentle tom with a big heart, and has nothing but love to give. Though rather reserved, he has no trouble opening up to others, especially his apprentice. He is a great mentor and feels he has much to teach, and rather enjoys it. Thunderbite showed his excellence in his mentorship, and was even awarded two apprentices on behalf of his excellency. History : Thunderbite once had a beautiful mate, though sadly she died during a fox attack, the same one in which he lost a bit of his ear. He often thinks of her, and has never truly forgotten about her death, and probably never will. He often mourns the death of his mate, though he keeps a smile about his face. He is a great mentor, and has achieved the master status of mentorship. He was awarded two apprentices on behalf of his great teaching, and shows great diligence when it comes to his duties. Thunderbite often has visions of the clan and has gone to others with claims of a prophecy. He often visits the Starcave, where he visits with his ancestors. He believes he sees visions of them, and even believes that he is chosen to be guided by StarClan. Codeword : Foxstar26 Am I accepted? It's up to Foxstar26 and Icefire15 to accept your characters, but I can tell you that you'll need to change Thunderbite's name. 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Post by Icefire15 on Nov 30, 2022 12:26:24 GMT -5
Hey Luna,
We do have a couple concerns about your character: Thunderbite. Like Moonpower said, you will need to change his name as we don't allow characters with the Clan names as their prefix anymore. We do like that Thunder hides the pain of losing his mate. That'll be something that other members can work with. Someone can try to get him to open up and heal. That's great stuff for RP. However, the "achieved master status of mentorship/awarded two apprentices" and "prophecy/visits with StarClan" stuff is an issue. We don't like to just hand out master status of mentorship to cats. We like to see them earn that status. Moonpower has a cat in ShadowClan that went through--I think--6 apprentices before gaining that status. She rped her character to grow in that way that it earned that character the respect of the Clan. So, if you want your character to be a "master mentor" we'd like to see the character grow into that instead of just automatically being it--does that make sense? As for the awarded two apprentices, you'd have to have a pretty good reason as to why Lightningstar would give him two apprentices instead of giving the second apprentice to another warrior. I don't see Fox allowing that.
And lastly, the visions/prophecies. One of our rules is that no characters can visit the moonstone unless they have their leader's permission. If Thunder is going to be so blessed that he receives visions from StarClan without being a leader or medicine cat, then you need to give us a pretty darn good reason as to why. It wouldn't be fair for us to allow your character to have visions/prophecies and then restrict another member of the same thing.
Personally, if you have all these ambitions for Thunderbite, I would suggest making him a younger cat. Maybe start him as an apprentice? Have him have a great relationship with his own mentor and that's what encourages him to want to be a great mentor himself? Then you can build upon that through Rp and grow Thunderbite into the respected warrior you want him to be. As he's growing, we may have a plot come along that would allow him to have visions or prophecies. You never know.
I hope this all makes sense.
Thank you for your understanding.
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Nov 30, 2022 13:57:20 GMT -5
Cat Name : Specklefoot Username : lunapaw Clan : ShadowClan Rank : Queen Description : A white she-cat with a partial black underbelly and black speckles littered across her coat. Her tail has black and white rings, and she has full black ears with a black muzzle. She also has black mittens. She has shorter whiskers to match her short, messy fur.  Personality : She is a cold-hearted queen, though extremely passionate when it comes to her kits and their protection. She is fiercely loyal to her clan and her family, though she can be vicious when provoked. Specklefoot is a rarely social she-cat, and she hardly ever makes time to converse or associate with other clan members. However, she shows great loyalty to her kits, who she would sacrifice her life for. She is often seen lurking around the nursery, and looking after her young. She is rather withdrawn and regarded as callous, though she has nothing but love for her kin. Specklefoot is extremely distrusting, and stays wary of those around her. She enjoys going out and hunting on her own rather than taking the prey of fellow warriors. She avoids asking favors or placing herself in a position in which she may take on debt. She does not want to have to repay anyone, or do any favors for them. In fact, she actually wants nothing to do with anyone that isn’t her family. Specklefoot is often viewed as harsh towards others, though she shows great care towards her kittens. History : Specklefoot was heavily abused by her mother as a kitten, and was abandoned years later when she was only about eight moons. She had come to discover clans after living through the hardships of lonesomeness, and finally found her place in the clan. She often sought the comfort and companionship of others, though she was typically rejected due to not being clanborn. She was regarded as an outcast, and because of this she began to isolate herself in complete solitude. Specklefoot met a tom who only saw her beauty, and not her flaws, and the two soon became mates. They grew close rather quickly, and had kits together after a few moons. The two were practically inseparable, and grew together into a perfect family. However, her mate was sent off on patrol and never returned. She cursed the clan, accusing them of not even trying to find him. Specklefoot mourned for many moons as she awaited the arrival of her kits. She suffered from post-partum depression shortly after giving birth, and never truly recovered. Family : Midnightkit, Snowkit Codeword : 🌙Moonpower🌙 Am I accepted? This one I can accept. I can see Northstar welcoming her into the Clan. All I need is an act that Specklefoot did to prove herself. Did she provide prey in leaf-bare? Did she save kits that snuck out of camp? Help a patrol fight off a badger? Give me an act that will tip the scales for Northstar to extend the offer for her to join the Clan. I want to explain the difference between Speckle and Skunk and why I'm accepting her and not him right now. You stated that when Speckle joined the Clan, she tried to seek companionship with clanmates, but they rejected her (we do have plenty of cats who would reject her). She only became distant after the rejections and losing her mate and that's something we can make a plot out of by getting her back into relationship with the Clan. Skunk's form is just a little confusing to me and I don't see why either Northstar or Cedarstar would welcome him when it's suggested that he doesn't even want to be around his clanmates. Now, two last questions: You'll have to remind me, do I have Midnightkit's and Snowkit's forms? And, Are you going to want Specklefoot to be a permanent queen? In order to prove herself, Specklefoot defended kits from a badger attack along with the help of a patrol. No, I have not yet created their forms but I will get to it shortly. Yes, I would like her to be a permanent queen. |
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Nov 30, 2022 14:02:37 GMT -5
I will add that to her form and get her on our front page. Thank you!
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Nov 30, 2022 14:17:24 GMT -5
Specklefoot is added to ShadowClan! Post Midnightkit's and Snowkit's forms whenever your ready.
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 2, 2022 7:46:07 GMT -5
Hey Luna, We do have a couple concerns about your character: Thunderbite. Like Moonpower said, you will need to change his name as we don't allow characters with the Clan names as their prefix anymore. We do like that Thunder hides the pain of losing his mate. That'll be something that other members can work with. Someone can try to get him to open up and heal. That's great stuff for RP. However, the "achieved master status of mentorship/awarded two apprentices" and "prophecy/visits with StarClan" stuff is an issue. We don't like to just hand out master status of mentorship to cats. We like to see them earn that status. Moonpower has a cat in ShadowClan that went through--I think--6 apprentices before gaining that status. She rped her character to grow in that way that it earned that character the respect of the Clan. So, if you want your character to be a "master mentor" we'd like to see the character grow into that instead of just automatically being it--does that make sense? As for the awarded two apprentices, you'd have to have a pretty good reason as to why Lightningstar would give him two apprentices instead of giving the second apprentice to another warrior. I don't see Fox allowing that. And lastly, the visions/prophecies. One of our rules is that no characters can visit the moonstone unless they have their leader's permission. If Thunder is going to be so blessed that he receives visions from StarClan without being a leader or medicine cat, then you need to give us a pretty darn good reason as to why. It wouldn't be fair for us to allow your character to have visions/prophecies and then restrict another member of the same thing. Personally, if you have all these ambitions for Thunderbite, I would suggest making him a younger cat. Maybe start him as an apprentice? Have him have a great relationship with his own mentor and that's what encourages him to want to be a great mentor himself? Then you can build upon that through Rp and grow Thunderbite into the respected warrior you want him to be. As he's growing, we may have a plot come along that would allow him to have visions or prophecies. You never know. I hope this all makes sense. Thank you for your understanding. Of course! Thank you for your time. I could change his prefix to Lightning and maybe start him out as an apprentice? |
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 2, 2022 8:12:37 GMT -5
Midnightkit Clan : ShadowClan Age : 4 moons Gender : Tom Rank : Kit Physical Appearance : A jet black tom with white ear tufts. He is a smaller tom, with large paws. Though he is rather small, he is a fluffy tom with a long tail. He has strong features, with bright green emerald eyes. He has a darker nose with short whiskers, and pink amongst his ears. Personality / Mental : Midnightkit is a bit of a sleuth, and is a rather curious tom who loves to lurk in the shadows. He is often prowling around, observing other clan members. He hopes to be a great hunter one day, and practices when he can. He often gets into trouble with his mother as he sneaks out of clan grounds, though she still loves him unconditionally. Midnightkit is brave and a fearless kit, and often seeks independence from his mother. Background / History : Midnightkit was born into the clan alongside his sister, Snowkit. He was born naturally curious, and naturally mischievous. He often plays harmless tricks on his sister, and messes with her quite often. His mother believes this is his way of showing affection, though she’s not entirely sure what to think. Though Midnightkit never shared a close bond with his mother, she always looked out for him and showed him an equal amount of love as his sister. Kin : Mother → Specklefoot | Sibling → Snowkit Codeword : 🌙Moonpower🌙 Am I accepted? Snowkit Clan : ShadowClan Age : 3 moons Gender : She-cat Rank : Kit Physical Appearance : A primarily white she-cat with black speckles spread across her coat, similar to her mother. She is a rather tubby kit within her mid-section and her bottom, as well as a bit in her face. She has a long plumed tail, and long whiskers to accompany her pink nose. Personality / Mental : Snowkit is a kind and compassionate kit, who loves to play with her brother, Midnightkit. She is rather innocent, and doesn’t know much of the outside world. Her mental skills are not quite as advanced as her motor skills, though this doesn’t slow her down. She is rather energetic, and shows no boundaries when it comes to expelling this energy. She shares a close bond with her mother, as the two are very similar in appearance. Background / History : Snowkit was born into the clan as an exuberant young kit, who wanted to explore the world. Her and her mother had a close relationship from the very beginning, and the two had become quite inseparable. Midnightkit, however, kept his distance as he had other things he enjoyed doing. Snowkit never got into much trouble, as she was always by her mother’s side, and rarely ever left her sight. Kin : Mother → Specklefoot | Sibling -> Midnightkit Codeword : ^^ (I will have picture references this evening) |
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 2, 2022 8:15:48 GMT -5
Cat Name : Skunkpelt Username : lunapaw Clan : ShadowClan Rank : Warrior Description : A black tom with a white underbelly and mittens, along with a white-tipped tail and dark-grey stripes spread across his coat. He has a white muzzle, and dark eyes with a pink nose. He has a white blaze stripe connected to his muzzle and spreading behind the back of his neck.  Personality : He is calm, quiet, and collected, as well as often regarded as shy as he often remains hidden within the shadows. Skunkpelt is mysterious, and unusual as he spends his time lurking within the darkness. He is a gracious and rather elegant tom with a dark side like no other, though he shows his other clanmates great respect. Skunkpelt often regards his elders as foolish and useless, as they contribute nothing to the clan. He possesses a rather negative outlook on life, partially due to his rough upbringing. He is rather mischievous, and a very sneaky tom who finds his way into places he often shouldn’t. He finds it difficult to make small take with other clan members, and views it as rather futile as a whole. Skunkpelt views himself as superior, and often fantasizes about one day becoming the leader of a clan of his own. He was often picked on for his small stature, leading him to have a hateful attitude towards other cats. However, he found himself very prideful in his later years, and kept his head held high with great dignity about him. History : Abused and abandoned as a young cat, he made his way through several clans’ territories before ultimately deciding where his loyalties lie. Skunkpelt was brought up in ShadowClan, though his parents were rather neglectful and hateful towards him. His mother never fed him, leading him to seek milk from other queens within the clan. His father began to abuse him, clawing at him and taking out his anger upon him whenever he felt fit. Skunkpelt took it upon himself to leave home when he was only 6 moons, and found shelter within a new clan which he made his home. However, he always remained rather withdrawn and never felt any comfort within the presence of his clanmates. Codeword : 🌙Moonpower🌙 Am I accepted? I'm a little confused about Skunkpelt's history. You said he made his way through several clan territories. Does that mean he joined several clans or was just passing through? Also, were Skunkpelt's parents a part of ShadowClan? If that's the case it, I don't understand why he would be traveling through Clan territories. From your description, I can't tell if he was born a kittypet or born in a Clan. If he was born outside of ShadowClan, I need a reason as to why he was accepted into ShadowClan. He doesn't sound like a cat either of my leaders would welcome. Especially if he's not making an effort to not feel withdrawn from his clanmates. I understand your confusion, to clarify, he was born outside of the clan, but he is the father to Specklefoot's kits. However, I understand why you would not accept him. |
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 4, 2022 13:20:23 GMT -5
( Frozen Is RiverClan medicine apprentice open? It says the role is available, but it also says that RiverClan is no longer accepting apprentices.) |
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Post by Icefire15 on Dec 4, 2022 13:48:23 GMT -5
Hey Luna, We do have a couple concerns about your character: Thunderbite. Like Moonpower said, you will need to change his name as we don't allow characters with the Clan names as their prefix anymore. We do like that Thunder hides the pain of losing his mate. That'll be something that other members can work with. Someone can try to get him to open up and heal. That's great stuff for RP. However, the "achieved master status of mentorship/awarded two apprentices" and "prophecy/visits with StarClan" stuff is an issue. We don't like to just hand out master status of mentorship to cats. We like to see them earn that status. Moonpower has a cat in ShadowClan that went through--I think--6 apprentices before gaining that status. She rped her character to grow in that way that it earned that character the respect of the Clan. So, if you want your character to be a "master mentor" we'd like to see the character grow into that instead of just automatically being it--does that make sense? As for the awarded two apprentices, you'd have to have a pretty good reason as to why Lightningstar would give him two apprentices instead of giving the second apprentice to another warrior. I don't see Fox allowing that. And lastly, the visions/prophecies. One of our rules is that no characters can visit the moonstone unless they have their leader's permission. If Thunder is going to be so blessed that he receives visions from StarClan without being a leader or medicine cat, then you need to give us a pretty darn good reason as to why. It wouldn't be fair for us to allow your character to have visions/prophecies and then restrict another member of the same thing. Personally, if you have all these ambitions for Thunderbite, I would suggest making him a younger cat. Maybe start him as an apprentice? Have him have a great relationship with his own mentor and that's what encourages him to want to be a great mentor himself? Then you can build upon that through Rp and grow Thunderbite into the respected warrior you want him to be. As he's growing, we may have a plot come along that would allow him to have visions or prophecies. You never know. I hope this all makes sense. Thank you for your understanding. Of course! Thank you for your time. I could change his prefix to Lightning and maybe start him out as an apprentice? That sounds good to me. I forgot to mention that your other characters look good, and Fox will add them when she can. Once you fix Lightning's form, we can accept it ^.^ |
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Post by Frozen on Dec 4, 2022 20:14:22 GMT -5
( Frozen Is RiverClan medicine apprentice open? It says the role is available, but it also says that RiverClan is no longer accepting apprentices.) Hi, sorry that I took so long to respond! RiverClan medicine cat apprentice is open. Hawkeye is also fine and I just wanted to clarify two things about Duststrike: 1. I think Ice already brought up the name rule, but can you change his mate's name since River- isn't a prefix that we use? (same thing with Thunder, Shadow, etc.) 2. You mention that Dust left the Clan and found a place in a new Clan - does this mean he was originally from one of the other Clans? He has a close bond with his brother, so I'm just a little confused. |
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Dec 4, 2022 21:43:11 GMT -5
Midnightkit and Snowkit are added to ShadowClan lunapaw🐾 |
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Dec 4, 2022 21:52:23 GMT -5
Okay! I can make those changes as needed. As far as Duststrike goes, the idea was that he previously belonged to another clan, along with his brother, however they joined a new one. I gather you made these cats for any roleplay. Please adjust them to fit into this roleplay. |
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 5, 2022 6:54:44 GMT -5
Cat name: Mousepaw User Name: lunapaw Clan: RiverClan Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice Description: A primarily light-grey she-cat with a lithe figure, and dainty paws. She has white ear-tufts to match the fur on her chest, as well as a white mask across her face. She has darker grey speckles spattered across her pelt, along with white markings. Mousepaw has heterochromia, making one of her eyes blue while the other is green.  Personality: Mousepaw was born into the clan as a rather bright and bubbly she-cat who loved to play with others. She spent most of her younger years inside the elder’s den, where she felt most comfortable. As she grew older, she realized that she had quite the knack for helping others in any way in which she could. She is a rather intelligent she-cat who knows her herbs very well, and makes sure to practice memorizing them daily. Mousepaw enjoys running errands, and often finds herself collecting herbs. She is kind-hearted and shows great compassion for her clanmates. History: Though she is clanborn, Mousepaw has spent much of her time within the outside world. She grew up rather fond of nature, and its healing properties. Mousepaw ran away from home on one occasion, feeling she was unworthy of clanlife. However, she has learned her place within the clan and accepted her self-worth throughout her development. Codeword: Frozen Am I accepted? |
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Post by thistlekit on Dec 8, 2022 23:48:40 GMT -5
Cat name: Thistlepaw
User Name: thistlekit
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Apprentice (Moor-runner)
Description: Thistlepaw is a scrawny, mostly white calico she-cat. She has a long black tail and amber eyes.
Personality: Thistlepaw, although skittish, has an insatiable curiosity about the world around her... especially clan life. She has endless questions for any cat who will listen, and always promises to make it worth their while (usually by doing favors for them). Thistlepaw is a pacifist by nature, but she reminds herself often that she can only shy away from fighting for so long.
History: Born as a loner, Thistle was the daughter of a Riverclan cat turned kittypet and a rogue. When Thistle's mother left Riverclan, her father took her with him, to raise her to be a wild cat just as they were. When she was roughly of apprentice age, her father brought her to the nearest clan, Windclan, and asked for them to take her in. He believed that clan life would be the safest for Thistle, as he felt he would be unable to protect her on his own.
Codeword: My favorite cat is Hollyleaf or Crookedstar! I resonated with Hollyleaf's commitment to the code and her desire to seek the truth, and Crookedstar deserved better. (Also I am new to forums so I don't know how to ping the leader specifically to ask if she's good 😭)
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 9, 2022 7:58:24 GMT -5
Of course! Thank you for your time. I could change his prefix to Lightning and maybe start him out as an apprentice? That sounds good to me. I forgot to mention that your other characters look good, and Fox will add them when she can. Once you fix Lightning's form, we can accept it ^.^ Changes have been made:) Apologies for my mistakes |
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 18, 2022 9:42:04 GMT -5
Cat Name : Yellowpaw User Name : lunapaw Clan : ThunderClan Rank : Apprentice Description : A shorthair yellow and orange tabby with yellow eyes. He has a notch in his right ear.  Personality : Yellowpaw is a young male apprentice cat with a strong and ambitious personality. He is determined to succeed and make a name for himself within his feline community. He is driven and hardworking, always striving to improve his skills and knowledge. Yellowpaw is not one to sit back and let others do the work for him. He takes initiative and is not afraid to take on new challenges. He is confident in his abilities and is not afraid to speak his mind, even if it means going against the status quo. Despite his ambition, Yellowpaw is also compassionate and caring. He values the well-being of his fellow cats and is always willing to lend a helping paw when needed. He is respectful of his elders and takes their guidance and advice seriously, recognizing that they have much to teach him. Overall, Yellowpaw is a well-rounded and driven young cat who is sure to make a positive impact on his feline community. History : Yellowpaw is a young male apprentice cat who was born into the ThunderClan, a group of cats who live in a forest and are known for their strength and bravery. From a young age, Yellowpaw showed promise and a strong desire to succeed. He was always eager to learn and was not afraid to take on new challenges. As a kit, Yellowpaw was curious and adventurous, often venturing out into the forest on his own to explore and learn about the world around him. He was also fiercely loyal to his clan, always ready to defend and protect his fellow cats. As he grew older, Yellowpaw's ambition only grew stronger. He was determined to become the best warrior he could be and to make a name for himself within the clan. He worked hard every day, practicing his hunting and fighting skills and studying the ways of the warrior code. Finally, the day came when Yellowpaw was made an apprentice. He was thrilled to begin his training and was eager to prove himself to his clanmates. He threw himself into his studies, determined to become a warrior that his clan could be proud of. Now, as a young apprentice, Yellowpaw continues to work hard every day, always striving to improve and be the best he can be. He knows that the path to becoming a warrior is long and difficult, but he is determined to see it through to the end. Codeword : Foxstar26 Am I accepted? |
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If anyone knows of any good clans to join (that I'm not already active in) please message me! :)
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 18, 2022 10:44:01 GMT -5
Cat Name : Umbermask User Name : lunapaw Clan : WindClan Rank : Elder Description : A fluffy brown and white she-cat with a long plumed tail, and blue eyes. She has white socks and a brown face to match her ears.  Personality : Umbermask is a grumpy elder she-cat with a no-nonsense attitude. She has lived a long and hard life, and has seen a lot of hardship and heartache. As a result, she has become a bit cynical and skeptical, and tends to look at the world through a jaded lens. She doesn't suffer fools gladly, and has little patience for those who waste her time or try to take advantage of her. Despite her gruff exterior, Umbermask does have a soft spot for those in need, and will go out of her way to help those who are struggling or disadvantaged. She is fiercely loyal to her friends and allies, and will do whatever it takes to protect and defend those she cares about. Despite her age, Umbermask is still a formidable force to be reckoned with. She is strong, agile, and wise, and has a wealth of knowledge and experience that she is not afraid to share with those who are willing to listen and learn. She may be grumpy, but she is also fiercely independent and self-sufficient, and refuses to let her age or any other circumstances hold her back. History : Umbermask was born in the midst of a harsh winter, to a mother who had been driven out of her own Clan by a group of ruthless thugs. Umbermask's mother did her best to raise her kits on her own, but times were tough and food was scarce. When Umbermask was still just a few moons old, her mother fell ill and was unable to hunt or protect her kits. One cold night, Umbermask and her siblings were huddled together, trying to stay warm, when they were discovered by a patrol from WindClan. The Clan cats took pity on the orphaned kits and brought them back to their camp, where they were cared for and raised as members of the Clan. Umbermask was a scrappy, determined kit, and she worked hard to prove herself to her new Clanmates. She was fiercely independent, and refused to let anyone tell her what to do. As she grew older, she became known for her fierce loyalty and her no-nonsense attitude. As she grew older and became an elder, Umbermask's grumpiness only seemed to increase. She had seen a lot of heartache and loss in her long life, and it had left its mark on her. But despite her gruff exterior, Umbermask was still fiercely loyal to her Clan and her friends, and would do whatever it took to protect and defend those she cared about. Codeword : Firebelly Am I accepted? |
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If anyone knows of any good clans to join (that I'm not already active in) please message me! :)
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Post by lunapaw🐾 on Dec 18, 2022 10:55:33 GMT -5
Cat Name : Mousepelt User Name : lunapaw Clan : WindClan Rank : Warrior Description : A light brown tom with a dark brown overcoat and mackerel markings spread across his pelt. He has an unordinarily long tail, with long white whiskers and green eyes.  Personality : Mousepelt is a pretentious and dignified male cat, with an air of superiority that he carries with him at all times. He is a bit of a snob, and is not afraid to let others know it. Mousepelt prides himself on his sophistication and his refined tastes, and looks down upon those who do not meet his standards. Despite his pretentious demeanor, Mousepelt is actually quite insecure and sensitive. He is constantly worried about his reputation and his standing in the community, and is easily offended if he feels that he is not being treated with the respect that he believes he deserves. He is also prone to fits of jealousy, and can become quite possessive if he feels that someone is trying to steal the spotlight from him. Despite his flaws, Mousepelt is not a completely unsympathetic character. He is intelligent and well-educated, and is always eager to share his knowledge and insights with others. He is also fiercely loyal to those he considers his friends, and will go out of his way to help them if they are in need. However, he is not always the best at expressing his emotions, and can come across as cold and distant at times. History : Mousepelt was born into a wealthy and influential family, and from a young age, he was accustomed to getting his way. He was raised to be a leader, and was taught to value intelligence, sophistication, and refinement above all else. As he grew older, Mousepelt developed a bit of a snobbish attitude, and began to look down upon those who did not meet his standards. Despite his privileged upbringing, Mousepelt was not content to simply coast on his family's wealth and status. He was determined to make a name for himself, and to prove that he was more than just a pampered aristocrat. When he was still just a young warrior, he decided to leave his comfortable life behind and join WindClan, a Clan known for its fierce and independent spirit. At first, Mousepelt struggled to adapt to the harsh and unforgiving life of a Clan cat. He was used to getting his way, and was not used to having to work hard or follow the rules. However, he eventually learned to embrace the challenges and the discipline of Clan life, and became a respected and influential member of WindClan. Despite his pretentious and dignified demeanor, Mousepelt was not always the easiest cat to get along with. He was prone to fits of jealousy and possessiveness, and could be a bit of a drama queen at times. However, he was also fiercely loyal to his Clan and his friends, and was always willing to lend a helping paw to those in need. Codeword : Firebelly Am I accepted? |
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Post by Frozen on Dec 23, 2022 22:25:41 GMT -5
Cat name: Aspenpaw User Name: lunapaw Clan: RiverClan Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice Description: A primarily light-grey she-cat with a lithe figure, and dainty paws. She has white ear-tufts to match the fur on her chest, as well as a white mask across her face. She has darker grey speckles spattered across her pelt, along with white markings. Aspenpaw has heterochromia, making one of her eyes blue while the other is green. Personality: Aspenpaw was born into the clan as a rather bright and bubbly she-cat who loved to play with others. She spent most of her younger years inside the elder’s den, where she felt most comfortable. As she grew older, she realized that she had quite the knack for helping others in any way in which she could. She is a rather intelligent she-cat who knows her herbs very well, and makes sure to practice memorizing them daily. Aspenpaw enjoys running errands, and often finds herself collecting herbs. She is kind-hearted and shows great compassion for her clanmates. History: Though she is clanborn, Aspenpaw has spent much of her time within the outside world. She grew up rather fond of nature, and its healing properties. Aspenpaw ran away from home on one occasion, feeling she was unworthy of clanlfie. However, she has learned her place within the clan and accepted her self-worth throughout her development. Codeword: Frozen Am I accepted? Sorry for the delay again, life happened. Hawkeye and Duststrike are good now and I'll make sure to add them. As for Aspenpaw, we were considering the idea of having her undergo her running away in the RP as it would be some good drama. However, RiverClan has had problems maintaining the medicine cat apprentice position for a while (RPers disappearing), so we weren't sure if we wanted to do that or have Aspen hold her position without any more drama. Thoughts? Also, I feel bad for mentioning this since we've already made you change names multiple times, but there's already a medicine cat with the Aspen prefix (Aspenfall in ThunderClan) so we probably wouldn't want two if you wouldn't mind changing it. Thanks! |
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Post by mintleaf2 on Dec 26, 2022 20:22:28 GMT -5
Cat name: Snowflower User Name: Mintleaf2 Clan: Riverclan Rank: Warrior Description: A silver tabby she-cat with white paws and a fluffy white tailtip. Bright green eyes. Personality: Sweet and shy, Snowflower is deeply loving of her clan and is a cat many of her fellow Warriors can rely on for advice or sharing a meal. Though reserved, she's very considerate of others and enjoys a good hunt. Her battle skills are weaker, but she can spend hours fishing and enjoying the flow of the river. History: Snowflower grew up in the clan. She has a sister: Birchtail. She hasn't really made waves and her Warrior ceremony was a bit delayed due to her trouble grasping some fighting concepts. She did eventually make up ground and join her sister as a warrior. Codeword: @frozen am I accepted? I haven't read the books in ages but I remember really liking Brackenfur! Cat name: Birchtail User Name: Mintleaf2 Clan: Riverclan Rank: Warrior Description: A mostly white she-cat with a ringed, grey tail. Has green eyes with a tinge of yellow in them. Personality: More rowdy than her sister, Birchtail is always up for a competition. She enjoys racing and training and is often the first one up and ready for patrol. She's deeply protective of her sister. While loyal to her clan, she's a bit less convinced that the clans have to be so strongly separated. History: Birchtail grew up in the clan. She's still very young, but made a name for herself at some gatherings by causing trouble challenging other apprentices when she was one. Since then, she's been to few gatherings and remains a bit unaware of the world. Codeword: Same as above  |
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Post by Frozen on Dec 26, 2022 20:40:41 GMT -5
Cat name: Snowflower User Name: Mintleaf2 Clan: Riverclan Rank: Warrior Description: A silver tabby she-cat with white paws and a fluffy white tailtip. Bright green eyes. Personality: Sweet and shy, Snowflower is deeply loving of her clan and is a cat many of her fellow Warriors can rely on for advice or sharing a meal. Though reserved, she's very considerate of others and enjoys a good hunt. Her battle skills are weaker, but she can spend hours fishing and enjoying the flow of the river. History: Snowflower grew up in the clan. She has a sister: Birchtail. She hasn't really made waves and her Warrior ceremony was a bit delayed due to her trouble grasping some fighting concepts. She did eventually make up ground and join her sister as a warrior. Codeword: @frozen am I accepted? I haven't read the books in ages but I remember really liking Brackenfur! Cat name: Birchtail User Name: Mintleaf2 Clan: Riverclan Rank: Warrior Description: A mostly white she-cat with a ringed, grey tail. Has green eyes with a tinge of yellow in them. Personality: More rowdy than her sister, Birchtail is always up for a competition. She enjoys racing and training and is often the first one up and ready for patrol. She's deeply protective of her sister. While loyal to her clan, she's a bit less convinced that the clans have to be so strongly separated. History: Birchtail grew up in the clan. She's still very young, but made a name for herself at some gatherings by causing trouble challenging other apprentices when she was one. Since then, she's been to few gatherings and remains a bit unaware of the world. Codeword: Same as above Hello! Both of your cats look good. I will add them to the page when I can, but you're free to RP. Welcome! |
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Post by f1r3st2rr on Dec 28, 2022 8:49:27 GMT -5
Cat name: Goldenblaze Screen Name: f1r3st2rr Clan:Thunderclan Rank: Young warrior Description: Goldenblaze is a large and muscular she-cat with bright, long golden fur. She has slightly darker gold rosettes on her back. She has very fluffy neck fur and tail. Her belly and paws are a bit lighter than her pelt She has dark green eyes with brown feckles. She has a scar under her eye from a fight, a burn scar on her hind right leg and a chin scar she got when she slipped and fell on a sharp rock. Personality: Goldenblaze is rather introverted. When she is around strangers, she isn't open. She wouldn't walk up to a stranger and make friends with them, but if a stranger approaches her and she evaluates that they're good, she would be friends with them. When she's with her close friends she is very silly and funny, it doesn't seem like it's a same cat. When she truly befriends somebody, she is loyal to them till her last breath. She often has bursts of energy, but the rest of the time she is calmer. She is intelligent and eager to learn from her mentor. She loves fighting. She doesn't like traitors and disloyalty.She is ambitious (in a good way) and wants to become leader some day. History:She was born to her parents who are from Windclan. They left her on Thunderclan territory because it was a harsh time for Windclan and a border patrol found her and took her to the camp. She always declared herself as a Thunderclan cat, even though her parents are from Windclan. She became a warrior when she was 12 moons old and fought in a few battles since then. Code: Foxstar26 am I accepted? |
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Post by f1r3st2rr on Dec 28, 2022 9:42:22 GMT -5
Cat name: Nightclaw Screen name: f1r3st2rr Clan: Shadowclan Rank: Senior warrior Description: Nightclaw is an incredibly big tom with unusually large paws. His pelt is completely black and shiny. It's short. He has an eye scar, lip scar, massive shoulder scar and a hind leg scar. He got them all in battles which shows how experienced and mature fighter he is. He has piercing yellow eyes. He has a torn ear. He is very strong.He is known for his sharp claws after which he got his name. Personality: Nightclaw is an ambitious battle enthusiasth. He is neither introverted nor extroverted but somewhere in between. He is rough and harsh most of the time, but he has a soft side; he likes kits as long as they dont humiliate him and he is a big romantic. Sadly, he still hasn't found a mate. If he found one, he would protect her with his life. He is loyal to his clan, and mostly, his leader. History: He is born to a Shadowclan queen and the former deputy. He had two other siblings: Leopardkit and Moonkit. Moonpaw died in a battle as an apprentice while Leopardkit grew up to become Leopardspot. He became very close to his brother after Moonpaw died, yet he still is. He was a curious apprentice who loved to learn about fighting. He had his warrior ceremony early because he passed the assignment. He fought in many big battles bravely and confidently. Code: 🌙Moonpower🌙 am I accepted? |
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Post by f1r3st2rr on Dec 29, 2022 4:13:29 GMT -5
Cat name: Spottedfur Screen name: f1r3st2rr Clan: Windclan Rank: Moor runner Description: Spottedfur is a medium sized she-cat. She is a calico (white with black and ginger patches). Her fur is short and thick. Her head is half ginger, half black. She has heterochromia. Her left eye (on the ginger half) is blue, and her right eye (on the black half) is amber. She has a slim and elegant figure and thanks to that she is very swift. She has a big scar on her flank, which she got in a battle. She also has a scar on her tail base, which is from a badger. Personality: Spottedfur is very brave. She is extroverted and loves to be near other cats. She is friendly and usually gets along well with other cats. She wouldn't go in a battle if it's not necessary and will only attack if there's a good reason. She values justice. But when a battle starts, she turns into a killing-machine. She has no mercy against her enemies. She is a noble warrior so she never kills other cats in a battle unless it's necessary. When a battle ends, she is helpful and always checks on her clanmates even if she is hurt badly. History: She was born in Windclan as Spottedkit along with her sister Cherrykit. Cherrykit is a tortoiseshell with yellow eyes. They both became apprentices t the same time. As an apprentice, Spottedpaw fought in a few battles, but one of them was a big battle. In that battle, her sister, Cherrypaw, got her front left paw crushed by teeth of a Riverclan warrior and since then she is limping. Spottedpaw helped her recover. They became warriors, Spottedpaw became Spottedfur, and Cherrypaw became Cherrypelt. Spottedfur fought in many battles since then and earned respect from her clanmates. Code: Firebelly am I accepted? |
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Post by f1r3st2rr on Dec 29, 2022 5:20:32 GMT -5
Cat name: Bluefeather Screen name: f1r3t2rr Clan: Riverclan Rank: Warrior Description: Bluefeather is a blueish grey she-cat. Her fur is long and well-cared. Her chin, belly and tail tip are lighter grey. She has light green eyes. Even though her eyes look normal and healthy, she is blind on her left eye. She has many scars across her pelt. Her tail is half-size of the normal tail of a cat. She has unusually sharp teeth so she is a good fighter. She is large, yet lithe, so she is both strong and fast. Personality: Bluefeather is bold and ambitious. She is powerthirsty, yet too loyal to do anything bad to her clan for power and fame. She doesn't like kits, because she is very intolerant. She is a romantic and she is looking for a mate. She has lots of respect for elders, since she always listened to their stories as a kit and an apprentice. She absolutely adores swimming which makes her a perfect Riverclan cat. History: She was born as Bluekit (she was the first born) with her three other siblings (ordered from oldest (after bluekit) to youngest): Stormkit-a dark gray tom with blue eyes, Rainkit-a silver tabby she-cat with silvery eyes, and Graykit-a gray tabby tom with yellow eyes. Bluekit was closest with her sister, Rainkit. The kits loved to play fight and Bluekit almost always came out as a winner. Perhaps because she was the oldest one, or perhaps just because she was the strongest. She was the most dominant of the kits. They grew up to become Bluepaw, Stormpaw, Rainpaw and Graypaw. They had a fun apprenticeship and they still remained close to each other. Bluepaw became warrior a moon before the others. They became Bluefeather, Stormtail, Rainfur and Grayfur. In a battle against Thunderclan, a Thunderclan warrior clawed Bluefeather's left eye and she remained blind on that eye. One time there was a badger wandering on Riverclan territory, and Bluefeather was leading a border patrol when she ran into it. She fought bravely and the badger ran away, but the big damage was already done. It clawed Bluefeather's tail and it was almost chopped off. A medicine cat recommended to remove that part off completely. From that day, Bluefeather had only half of her tail. Code: Frozen am I accepted? |
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Post by f1r3st2rr on Dec 29, 2022 6:31:50 GMT -5
Cat name: Frostclaw Screen name: f1r3st2rr Clan: Skyclan Rank: Warrior Description: Frostclaw is a huge tom. He has long white fur that every cat would envy. He tries to keep it clean as much as possible. He has astonishing ice blue eyes and his gaze freezes the blood in veins. He is almost deaf, which makes it harder to hear commands from leader or deputy. He has only one, but big scar on his back. He has a torn right ear. He is one of the best fighters in his clan. His strong muscles tense as he walks. Personality: Frostclaw may look sweet and kind due to his white fur, but he is bossy and exilted. But when his clan is in danger, he would die to protect them. When a cat "bullies" another cat from his clan, he would defend the cat. He is caring and kind to all those cats who respect him and are good to him too. History: He was born in Skyclan along with his sister, Snowkit-a white she cat with blue eyes, just like him. He was playful and curious as a kit. He and his sister became apprentices at the same time, and they became warriors before they were 12 moons old. He became Frostclaw, and his sister became Snowstorm. When they were only 16 moons old, a disaster happened. A fox was roaming in their territory, and he was on a border patrol with his sister, another warrior and an apprentice. They found the fox and as soon as Snowstorm noticed it she jumped on it to attack it. Before anyone could help her, the fox threw her off its back and bit her neck. Snowstorm instantly died. They took revenge on the fox, but Frostclaw was never the same after that. That's why he became so introverted and cold. But like it wasn't enough, he lost another cat he loved. He found a mate and tehy were happy together. They were planning on having kits soon. But when there was a battle against Thunderclan, his mate was killed by a former Thunderclan deputy. That is the reason Frostclaw has been so protective over other cats. That is the reason he isn't socializing and making friends. He is scared that they would break his heart like his sister and mate did. He is afraid-to love... Code: Jewelspirit am I accepted? |
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Post by kermie on Dec 29, 2022 21:50:47 GMT -5
Cat name: Honeypaw
User Name: kermie
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice
Description: Honey colored fur with a light white cape and piercing blue eyes
Personality: see statement above
History: see statement above
Codeword: Jewelspirit
(This is all for not cuz it’s late. How complex do you want a HR’s, specifically the Med Cat’s apprentice to be minimum?)
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