Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2016 15:05:07 GMT -5
I noticed as I am reading OotS, a lot of cats have been jealous of their siblings in this arc.
Blossomfall was jealous of Briarlight
Ivypool was jealous of Dovewing
I am sure I am missing more, but it's become really cliché and I can understand why some people would dislike the use of jealousy for the sake of developing the characters.
It's become very predictable for this arc, and I really hope that the Erins will be more creative for AVOS. But I will say that I am definitely pleased with the series so far.
I just wish jealousy wasn't used so often in Warriors. While it can give their characters development, it makes the writing too easy to figure out. Either the character will go insane (Ashfur) or that character will mature and move on (Ivypool) and get over it.
Now I know a lot of people can relate to jealousy, including myself, but that doesn't mean you should overdo it so often. It's okay, in my opinion, to write down at least one character who's jealous of the other, but writing more than one about jealousy just becomes predictable at this point.
Blossomfall was jealous of Briarlight
Ivypool was jealous of Dovewing
I am sure I am missing more, but it's become really cliché and I can understand why some people would dislike the use of jealousy for the sake of developing the characters.
It's become very predictable for this arc, and I really hope that the Erins will be more creative for AVOS. But I will say that I am definitely pleased with the series so far.
I just wish jealousy wasn't used so often in Warriors. While it can give their characters development, it makes the writing too easy to figure out. Either the character will go insane (Ashfur) or that character will mature and move on (Ivypool) and get over it.
Now I know a lot of people can relate to jealousy, including myself, but that doesn't mean you should overdo it so often. It's okay, in my opinion, to write down at least one character who's jealous of the other, but writing more than one about jealousy just becomes predictable at this point.
