This is the worst Into the Wild fanfic I have seen so far
Oct 22, 2016 10:21:24 GMT -5
finland likes this
Post by pastelpills on Oct 22, 2016 10:21:24 GMT -5
Graypaw seemed to know this cat. "Redtail is dead!" wailed Ravenpaw. "Tigerclaw said not to tell, but he killed him!" Gasps of shock rippled through the Clan. "Ravenpaw!" A growling voice sounded through the bushes. "No...." Ravenpaw seemed shocked.
Tigerclaw leaped out of the bushes and clawed at Ravenpaw. "You revealed my secret!" He hit Ravenpaw, leaving a gash in his chest. "Ow!" Ravenpaw wailed.
A very battered, but small, lithe cat ran over. "Redtail?" Bluestar sounded shocked. "Yes. Tigerclaw has tried to kill me," Redtail replied. Tigerclaw let out a furious hiss. "How could you do such a thing?" Bluestar was hissing. She leaped on top of Tigerclaw and raked her claws across his ears.
He let out a snarl of challenge and rolled on the ground, smashing her under his weight. "No!" Smudge, no, Blackpaw dived into the fight and bit Tigerclaw. He let out a wail of pain, fury, and frustration and got up. "Thanks." Bluestar's voice sounded broken and battered.
It was as if Tigerclaw leaped into her throat and clawed her voice out. "Tigerclaw, you are banned from this Clan!" Her voice sounded frail. "Leave! Leave!" The cats chanted.
Tigerclaw ran out of sight. "I will be leader one day - just you watch!" He snarled over his shoulder. "I will, watch you die!" Blackpaw was furious, he sure sounded like it. "Come on, let's get you healed." A sweet voice sounded over Firepaw's shoulder. "That's our medicine cat, Spottedleaf."
Tigerclaw leaped out of the bushes and clawed at Ravenpaw. "You revealed my secret!" He hit Ravenpaw, leaving a gash in his chest. "Ow!" Ravenpaw wailed.
A very battered, but small, lithe cat ran over. "Redtail?" Bluestar sounded shocked. "Yes. Tigerclaw has tried to kill me," Redtail replied. Tigerclaw let out a furious hiss. "How could you do such a thing?" Bluestar was hissing. She leaped on top of Tigerclaw and raked her claws across his ears.
He let out a snarl of challenge and rolled on the ground, smashing her under his weight. "No!" Smudge, no, Blackpaw dived into the fight and bit Tigerclaw. He let out a wail of pain, fury, and frustration and got up. "Thanks." Bluestar's voice sounded broken and battered.
It was as if Tigerclaw leaped into her throat and clawed her voice out. "Tigerclaw, you are banned from this Clan!" Her voice sounded frail. "Leave! Leave!" The cats chanted.
Tigerclaw ran out of sight. "I will be leader one day - just you watch!" He snarled over his shoulder. "I will, watch you die!" Blackpaw was furious, he sure sounded like it. "Come on, let's get you healed." A sweet voice sounded over Firepaw's shoulder. "That's our medicine cat, Spottedleaf."
"Is something wrong, Featherheart?" A calm voice mewed beside Firepaw. He jumped in surprise. "Did I scare you?" The voice sounded sympathetic. Firepaw turned to see a she-cat. "My name is Willowpelt," she mewed. "I saw your ceremony." Firepaw was unsure of what to say.
"She likes you!" A voice cut through his thoughts. "Do not!" Willowpelt's voice sounded again. The last thing Firepaw needed was an argument. "Don't do it." He knew he sounded like he was pleading. Willowpelt had turned away in embarresment. "I'll never admit it to the rest," she whispered into his ear. "But I like you."
Firepaw could not believe what he had just heard. "I'm just an apprentice!" He couldn't stop the words from coming out of this mouth. He quickly slapped his tail over it. "Nothing, nothing." He hoped he sounded more sure then he felt. "You like her." It was Graypaw. "Graypaw..." Firepaw wanted to claw him.
"She likes you!" A voice cut through his thoughts. "Do not!" Willowpelt's voice sounded again. The last thing Firepaw needed was an argument. "Don't do it." He knew he sounded like he was pleading. Willowpelt had turned away in embarresment. "I'll never admit it to the rest," she whispered into his ear. "But I like you."
Firepaw could not believe what he had just heard. "I'm just an apprentice!" He couldn't stop the words from coming out of this mouth. He quickly slapped his tail over it. "Nothing, nothing." He hoped he sounded more sure then he felt. "You like her." It was Graypaw. "Graypaw..." Firepaw wanted to claw him.
"Featherheart said she wants to be a medicine cat!" Gasped a voice.
Firepaw guessed he hadn't heard. "What!?" He again couldn't stop his voice from screaming.
"I dunno."
"Why? Why?"
Another voice. "What in the name of StarClan, Runningwind?" Willowpelt had spoken. "All my training... It was worthless." He had turned away. "No, Runningwind, you are one of the best warriors," Willowpelt assured him. "No! All my training, thrown away!"
"I didn't mean to make you sad." It was Featherheart, from the rock. "I still love you, mentor."
Firepaw guessed he hadn't heard. "What!?" He again couldn't stop his voice from screaming.
"I dunno."
"Why? Why?"
Another voice. "What in the name of StarClan, Runningwind?" Willowpelt had spoken. "All my training... It was worthless." He had turned away. "No, Runningwind, you are one of the best warriors," Willowpelt assured him. "No! All my training, thrown away!"
"I didn't mean to make you sad." It was Featherheart, from the rock. "I still love you, mentor."
it kinda makes me want to leave and never come back to warriors again.
