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Post by Windspirit14 on Oct 10, 2016 19:28:07 GMT -5
I really think the writing has improved again. There are a lot of characters in the book who I really hate *cough*Onestar*cough*Needletail*cough*, but the book itself was really good. There still need to be way less background characters, but other than that, a lot of stuff I liked about the first series is back.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 10, 2016 19:30:24 GMT -5
I agree. I feel like the Erins heard our complaints about the quality back in 2012, lol. But hey, if you wanna continue Warriors, don't screw up. You're an author for a reason.
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Post by Windspirit14 on Oct 10, 2016 19:31:41 GMT -5
Do you know which of the Erins wrote this book?
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Oct 10, 2016 19:33:24 GMT -5
The quality has certainly improved greatly.
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Oct 10, 2016 19:33:58 GMT -5
Do you know which of the Erins wrote this book? It's says right in the first few pages of the book that it was Cherith. |
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Post by Windspirit14 on Oct 10, 2016 19:34:51 GMT -5
There was a lot of drama in this book. That helped, but I feel like it was almost too much, and almost screwed up the book.
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Post by Windspirit14 on Oct 10, 2016 19:35:59 GMT -5
Do you know which of the Erins wrote this book? It's says right in the first few pages of the book that it was Cherith. Wait, where? I have a copy right next to me, and I don't see it. |
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#a3c5e6
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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Oct 10, 2016 19:41:58 GMT -5
It's says right in the first few pages of the book that it was Cherith. Wait, where? I have a copy right next to me, and I don't see it. It's should say it in the dedication, as well as Kate's blog. |
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Oct 10, 2016 19:50:54 GMT -5
Actually, on her blog, Kate revealed she wrote it.
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Post by mEmE on Oct 10, 2016 20:09:45 GMT -5
Onestar's cruel no-nonsense heartlessness was probably one of my favourite parts about Thunder and Shadow
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Post by Windspirit14 on Oct 11, 2016 18:44:54 GMT -5
Onestar's cruel no-nonsense heartlessness was probably one of my favourite parts about Thunder and Shadow Really? I think it went a little too far. |
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Post by Wicked Witch on Oct 11, 2016 21:17:28 GMT -5
Onestar's cruel no-nonsense heartlessness was probably one of my favourite parts about Thunder and Shadow Really? I think it went a little too far. thats what makes it funny. for me at least. he has no chill, and it's not because he's an actual star, but because he just doesn't care for a clan if he sees they aren't handling a potential threat. he was the best character in this book. |
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Post by mEmE on Oct 11, 2016 21:59:57 GMT -5
Onestar's cruel no-nonsense heartlessness was probably one of my favourite parts about Thunder and Shadow Really? I think it went a little too far. In a sense, he was kind of like "If you want our help, act like you actually want to help yourself before you start crying to other people". Which was true, ShadowClan at this point was pretty much doing absolutely nothing to stop the rogues, even when other clans, yes including WindClan HAVE offered to help chase out the rogues. But idk what the heck was up with ShadowClan. It was a clear "Prove that you deserve our help first, then I'll maybe go to aid." In this case, ShadowClan really didnt do much |
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