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Post by Deleted on Oct 9, 2016 21:18:49 GMT -5
Like, how do you hair?...
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Post by ssquiffy on Oct 9, 2016 22:52:57 GMT -5
theres not really much to critique here since its only the top half of the face. i think your hair is fine for the amount of shading in the picture. a bit more line variation would be nice.
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Post by darkforestwarrior on Oct 9, 2016 23:09:30 GMT -5
I think the hair here works with the style you are using, it is a clean and somewhat minimal art style. The one thing I can think that might be nice would be to allow the hair to go in front of the horns a bit at the bottom, as they are now the horns look like they are stuck on over top of the hair, if that makes sense. The highlighting on the hair might also look a little better if it was done in a more "organized" way, again I really hope that makes sense, it can be hard to find the right words to describe what I mean here.
Overall I think your art does look very nice though :3
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Post by Deleted on Oct 10, 2016 9:57:22 GMT -5
Thank you bolth, I will try your suggestions next time.
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