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Oct 9, 2016 10:47:49 GMT -5
Post by sea cat on Oct 9, 2016 10:47:49 GMT -5
how can i make this more punchy
'My love of being around people has enabled me to notice unique behaviours that others display and has led me to develop an interest in why people do certain things.'
you can edit it into a completely new sentence if u want just pls help it's really important - for my university application
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Oct 9, 2016 11:07:52 GMT -5
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Post by qυeeɴ oғ ɢнoѕтlιɴɢѕ on Oct 9, 2016 11:07:52 GMT -5
Perhaps you could try:
'My love of being around people has enabled me to notice unique behaviours that others display in their everyday social interactions and has led me to develop an interest in the reasoning behind why people act in certain ways.'
It's not the best but I liked what you had so I just added things to it. I assumed it related to psychology so I went with that. Good luck with your applications and university ^^
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