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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 12:57:18 GMT -5
So, I'd like to try to make a Clan, but I need help! I am welcome to any ideas! Thank you in advance!
I need help with:
-Maps
-Territory
-Code! I have no idea where to start with coding, so i'll need lots of help with this!
-History
-Introduction
-About
-Traditions
The Warrior Code will be the same as the books.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 13:43:52 GMT -5
Ok so the most important ting to forgive out first is the basics of your clan. Why is it called SunClan? Do they live in the desert? In the sky? Have powers?
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 13:48:49 GMT -5
It's called SunClan because the weather is mainly sunny. It is dry and it doesn't rain often, but not to the point of being a desert. They live in a sandy hollow. They don't have powers, it's going to be a normal Clan. Their fur colors are also generally yellow, orange, and white.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 13:50:45 GMT -5
It's called SunClan because the weather is mainly sunny. It is dry and it doesn't rain often, but not to the point of being a desert. They live in a sandy hollow. They don't have powers, it's going to be a normal Clan. Their fur colors are also generally yellow, orange, and white. Alright, that sounds good. Now, what will set your clan apart from the others that'll make others want to join your clan? |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 13:54:59 GMT -5
It's called SunClan because the weather is mainly sunny. It is dry and it doesn't rain often, but not to the point of being a desert. They live in a sandy hollow. They don't have powers, it's going to be a normal Clan. Their fur colors are also generally yellow, orange, and white. Alright, that sounds good. Now, what will set your clan apart from the others that'll make others want to join your clan? Well, the members of SunClan are very loyal. They do not have any challenging Clans, so they have a wide area of territory. They live almost in the middle of nowhere, so they can keep to themselves and not have to worry about outsiders. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 14:17:46 GMT -5
I'm sorry, I'll be proofing everywhere! I'll try to respond as much as I can.
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 14:39:53 GMT -5
It's totally fine!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 16:46:39 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 16:47:56 GMT -5
Alright, that sounds good. Now, what will set your clan apart from the others that'll make others want to join your clan? Well, the members of SunClan are very loyal. They do not have any challenging Clans, so they have a wide area of territory. They live almost in the middle of nowhere, so they can keep to themselves and not have to worry about outsiders. Hm, are they very code driven, like for example Hollyleaf? |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 20:54:59 GMT -5
Well, the members of SunClan are very loyal. They do not have any challenging Clans, so they have a wide area of territory. They live almost in the middle of nowhere, so they can keep to themselves and not have to worry about outsiders. Hm, are they very code driven, like for example Hollyleaf? Not as much, but yes, they are a little strict. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 21:03:30 GMT -5
Hm, are they very code driven, like for example Hollyleaf? Not as much, but yes, they are a little strict. Alrighty then! I can see this clan working with lots of dedication and loyal members. Not all clans have to be flashy, or full of powers. I like how you generally stay to the series' roots. |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 21:04:38 GMT -5
Not as much, but yes, they are a little strict. Alrighty then! I can see this clan working with lots of dedication and loyal members. Not all clans have to be flashy, or full of powers. I like how you generally stay to the series' roots. Thank you! ^^ |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 21:09:39 GMT -5
Alrighty then! I can see this clan working with lots of dedication and loyal members. Not all clans have to be flashy, or full of powers. I like how you generally stay to the series' roots. Thank you! ^^ Now, what part of the clan would you like to come up with first, Pooly Feathers? I don't know how to deal with coding, pictures or banners, but you can request one in the Art Forum under Graphic Design I believe for your clan's page. |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 21:14:25 GMT -5
Now, what part of the clan would you like to come up with first, Pooly Feathers? I don't know how to deal with coding, pictures or banners, but you can request one in the Art Forum under Graphic Design I believe for your clan's page. Hmm..I guess we can start with the introduction! And that's okay, i'll look for someone taking requests! |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 21:19:30 GMT -5
Now, what part of the clan would you like to come up with first, Pooly Feathers? I don't know how to deal with coding, pictures or banners, but you can request one in the Art Forum under Graphic Design I believe for your clan's page. Hmm..I guess we can start with the introduction! And that's okay, i'll look for someone taking requests! I'm pretty sure someone would be open, and most results I've seen are beautiful! But go with an experieced coder that has examples of their work to be safe. Introduction...hmm...what kind of feeling do you you want the reader to experience after reading it? How they perceive it influences whether or not they join your clan since it's the first thing they read. Should it be eerie? Mysterious? Wonderous? Mischievous? The message you concert should go with the theme of your clan (Like how ThunderClan's main traits are described as courage and loyalty in the clan's tagline) |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 21:23:10 GMT -5
Hmm..I guess we can start with the introduction! And that's okay, i'll look for someone taking requests! I'm pretty sure someone would be open, and most results I've seen are beautiful! But go with an experieced coder that has examples of their work to be safe. Introduction...hmm...what kind of feeling do you you want the reader to experience after reading it? How they perceive it influences whether or not they join your clan since it's the first thing they read. Should it be eerie? Mysterious? Wonderous? Mischievous? The message you concert should go with the theme of your clan (Like how ThunderClan's main traits are described as courage and loyalty in the clan's tagline) I was thinking the tagline could be..the determined and loyal, possibly? |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2016 21:26:39 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure someone would be open, and most results I've seen are beautiful! But go with an experieced coder that has examples of their work to be safe. Introduction...hmm...what kind of feeling do you you want the reader to experience after reading it? How they perceive it influences whether or not they join your clan since it's the first thing they read. Should it be eerie? Mysterious? Wonderous? Mischievous? The message you concert should go with the theme of your clan (Like how ThunderClan's main traits are described as courage and loyalty in the clan's tagline) I was thinking the tagline could be..the determined and loyal, possibly? Yes, that works! So the theme of the introduction could covey a feeling of pride and ambition to achieve whatever they're doing. The reader should be able to feel the all around nature of the clan after reading. |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 1, 2016 21:40:03 GMT -5
I was thinking the tagline could be..the determined and loyal, possibly? Yes, that works! So the theme of the introduction could covey a feeling of pride and ambition to achieve whatever they're doing. The reader should be able to feel the all around nature of the clan after reading. Yeah! I'll try to come up with a few ideas. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2016 8:35:28 GMT -5
Yes, that works! So the theme of the introduction could covey a feeling of pride and ambition to achieve whatever they're doing. The reader should be able to feel the all around nature of the clan after reading. Yeah! I'll try to come up with a few ideas. Hm, what if the reader is walking across a large mass of rocks, their paws burning on the hot stones. They keep moving forwards, feeling a tug drawing them forwards in their heart. It has been two sunrises of travel an te feeling hasn't weaned. |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 2, 2016 8:49:31 GMT -5
Yeah! I'll try to come up with a few ideas. Hm, what if the reader is walking across a large mass of rocks, their paws burning on the hot stones. They keep moving forwards, feeling a tug drawing them forwards in their heart. It has been two sunrises of travel an te feeling hasn't weaned. Yeah! And they continue padding on, determined not to give up. They would feel the feeling of sand on their paws, and from a distance begin to see a wide, stretching sandy hollow. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2016 8:54:41 GMT -5
Hm, what if the reader is walking across a large mass of rocks, their paws burning on the hot stones. They keep moving forwards, feeling a tug drawing them forwards in their heart. It has been two sunrises of travel an te feeling hasn't weaned. Yeah! And they continue padding on, determined not to give up. They would feel the feeling of sand on their paws, and from a distance begin to see a wide, stretching sandy hollow. They tilt their head, slowly padding toward with their ears pricked in interest. Each step feels like the scorch of a flame, but the cat's determination and courage keep it moving forwards. Finally, as they approach the hollow... |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 2, 2016 8:58:54 GMT -5
Yeah! And they continue padding on, determined not to give up. They would feel the feeling of sand on their paws, and from a distance begin to see a wide, stretching sandy hollow. They tilt their head, slowly padding toward with their ears pricked in interest. Each step feels like the scorch of a flame, but the cat's determination and courage keep it moving forwards. Finally, as they approach the hollow... They notice small sand caves carved into the sides of the hollow. They step forward a bit, looking farther down. They can see cats, many of them their fur the color of the sun. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2016 9:13:20 GMT -5
They tilt their head, slowly padding toward with their ears pricked in interest. Each step feels like the scorch of a flame, but the cat's determination and courage keep it moving forwards. Finally, as they approach the hollow... They notice small sand caves carved into the sides of the hollow. They step forward a bit, looking farther down. They can see cats, many of them their fur the color of the sun. Most of them can scent the cat, lifting their muzzles to gaze at them. The cat states unwavering back at them as they then casually go about their business again, as if the cat isn't a problem to them. A few apprentices whisper, twitching their tails anxiously. A deep, husky voice startles the cat from behind, making glanced worriedly over their shoulder. |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 2, 2016 9:23:30 GMT -5
They notice small sand caves carved into the sides of the hollow. They step forward a bit, looking farther down. They can see cats, many of them their fur the color of the sun. Most of them can scent the cat, lifting their muzzles to gaze at them. The cat states unwavering back at them as they then casually go about their business again, as if the cat isn't a problem to them. A few apprentices whisper, twitching their tails anxiously. A deep, husky voice startles the cat from behind, making glanced worriedly over their shoulder. By the way the leader's name is Sandstar, a pale orange tabby tom with amber eyes. Would you like to be the deputy? |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2016 9:24:40 GMT -5
Most of them can scent the cat, lifting their muzzles to gaze at them. The cat states unwavering back at them as they then casually go about their business again, as if the cat isn't a problem to them. A few apprentices whisper, twitching their tails anxiously. A deep, husky voice startles the cat from behind, making glanced worriedly over their shoulder. By the way the leader's name is Sandstar, a pale orange tabby tom with amber eyes. Would you like to be the deputy? Sure, I'd be honored to be SunClan's deputy!  |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 2, 2016 9:27:33 GMT -5
They notice small sand caves carved into the sides of the hollow. They step forward a bit, looking farther down. They can see cats, many of them their fur the color of the sun. Most of them can scent the cat, lifting their muzzles to gaze at them. The cat states unwavering back at them as they then casually go about their business again, as if the cat isn't a problem to them. A few apprentices whisper, twitching their tails anxiously. A deep, husky voice startles the cat from behind, making glanced worriedly over their shoulder. When they turned their head, they saw a huge, pale orange tabby tom with glowing amber eyes. |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 2, 2016 9:29:16 GMT -5
The joining form will look like this:
Cat name||Age||Gender||Rank||Physical description||Personality||Other||(Screen name)
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Post by Deleted on Oct 3, 2016 14:00:47 GMT -5
The joining form will look like this: Cat name||Age||Gender||Rank||Physical description||Personality||Other||(Screen name) Looks perfect ^^ |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Oct 8, 2016 7:03:43 GMT -5
Banner by Soαrιɴɢ Bloѕѕoмѕ ✿!  |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 8, 2016 17:38:32 GMT -5
❈ -- *pops in*
i can draw you a map if you want!
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