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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2016 16:11:28 GMT -5
first of all we get a main character who is described as looking just like a model and he's also rly brave and an amazing leader and good at everything with a superpower
then comes along a very attractive girl who is on the hockey team (or some sport) with a superpower and who is also really brave and popular oh and she had a bad past too
like please give your characters flaws i like characters that i can relate to not perfect dolls
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Post by trickster ♥ on Sept 29, 2016 16:19:19 GMT -5
yikes. I'd stop reading it (unless the plot is good enough that you can somewhat endure the characters)
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2016 16:26:22 GMT -5
So, this story features Ken and Barbie? The two dolls? I'm pulling your leg. ...what series it t? yeah except it's not a romance, there's actually 5 characters, just these two were the most perfect ones the power of five by Anthony Horowitz usually he writes good but what are these characters dude
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2016 16:29:37 GMT -5
yikes. I'd stop reading it (unless the plot is good enough that you can somewhat endure the characters) the plot is good imo. somewhat confusing, though, but maybe that's just bc i keep going a week without reading and then coming back to it again
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Post by bite me on Sept 29, 2016 16:39:05 GMT -5
I feel you Sometimes characters can put off a whole story once me and my friends were watching a film and it was a romance heaven forbid And it was the most cliche love at first sight thing ever and honestly I hid behind the sofa 90% of the film
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2016 17:02:28 GMT -5
I feel you Sometimes characters can put off a whole story once me and my friends were watching a film and it was a romance heaven forbidAnd it was the most cliche love at first sight thing ever and honestly I hid behind the sofa 90% of the film that's true, they really can eeww cliche love at first sight things are the worst. like, i don't like films and books that are really romancey in general but when it's cliche it's even worse
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