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Post by Moon on Sept 27, 2016 20:12:53 GMT -5
The blue eyes could be ojoz azules genes, which could be found in a wild cat population if a kittypet got loose ages ago and the story is set in the future (2020?), or it's in an alt universe where the breed was discovered a few decades sooner. since it's a dominant gene that gives the ojoz azules blue eyes regardless of fur color Keep in mind that when two Ojos Azules cats are bred together, the kittens are stillborn/deformed in multiple ways. So if you're taking this theory seriously, it's probably not the case. |
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Post by ＵＢ₀₁: 𝚂𝚢𝚖𝚋𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚝． on Sept 27, 2016 20:15:33 GMT -5
The blue eyes could be ojoz azules genes, which could be found in a wild cat population if a kittypet got loose ages ago and the story is set in the future (2020?), or it's in an alt universe where the breed was discovered a few decades sooner. since it's a dominant gene that gives the ojoz azules blue eyes regardless of fur color Keep in mind that when two Ojos Azules cats are bred together, the kittens are stillborn/deformed in multiple ways. So if you're taking this theory seriously, it's probably not the case. Oh, I didn't know that! o^o;; In that case, I retract my theory. |
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Post by Amber on Sept 27, 2016 20:22:14 GMT -5
The blue eyes could be ojoz azules genes, which could be found in a wild cat population if a kittypet got loose ages ago and the story is set in the future (2020?), or it's in an alt universe where the breed was discovered a few decades sooner. since it's a dominant gene that gives the ojoz azules blue eyes regardless of fur color Keep in mind that when two Ojos Azules cats are bred together, the kittens are stillborn/deformed in multiple ways. So if you're taking this theory seriously, it's probably not the case. From what I've read about the Ojos Blue gene is the eye color is dominate. So if a cat expressing that gene is bred with one who doesn't, the kittens will get it, or at least some will. |
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Post by Moon on Sept 27, 2016 20:25:38 GMT -5
Keep in mind that when two Ojos Azules cats are bred together, the kittens are stillborn/deformed in multiple ways. So if you're taking this theory seriously, it's probably not the case. From what I've read about the Ojos Blue gene is the eye color is dominate. So if a cat expressing that gene is bred with one who doesn't, the kittens will get it, or at least some will. Regardless, eventually the cats would be breeding blue eyes/blue eyes and creating genetic mutant babies |
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Post by Pandean on Sept 27, 2016 21:44:01 GMT -5
I just read the entire Jessy fanfic. It was cringy (I'm pretty sure is called "The Better Choice" which is a very wrong name because it was not the better choice, unless you like r@pe, and dozens of cats being murdered just because Bramblestar doesn't want anyone to hurt his precious Gemmy-chan. Oh and everyone is horribly butchered. Brackenfur is one of those arrogant toms we hate so much, Thornclaw is the absolute worst of them all, getting his great-neices preggers just because the tried to kill Gemlight asks Jessy, Bramblestar is technically a Yandere, willing to hurt anyone who dares to lay a hand on Gemlight, Dovewing is literally the fandom interpretation of her, who hated Bumblestripe and thinks Tigerheart is better in every way, and Squirrelflight is a slightly better Ashfur, wanting revenge because Bramblestar liked Gemlight.) I want to burn the fan fiction with a match and some gasoline. Back on subject: When people ship their OCs with canon characters. When people try to butcher characters they don't like Fanfiction in general. Eughhh. gemlight omg |
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Post by Sootfeather on Sept 28, 2016 13:15:53 GMT -5
I just read the entire Jessy fanfic. It was cringy (I'm pretty sure is called "The Better Choice" which is a very wrong name because it was not the better choice, unless you like r@pe, and dozens of cats being murdered just because Bramblestar doesn't want anyone to hurt his precious Gemmy-chan. Oh and everyone is horribly butchered. Brackenfur is one of those arrogant toms we hate so much, Thornclaw is the absolute worst of them all, getting his great-neices preggers just because the tried to kill Gemlight asks Jessy, Bramblestar is technically a Yandere, willing to hurt anyone who dares to lay a hand on Gemlight, Dovewing is literally the fandom interpretation of her, who hated Bumblestripe and thinks Tigerheart is better in every way, and Squirrelflight is a slightly better Ashfur, wanting revenge because Bramblestar liked Gemlight.) I want to burn the fan fiction with a match and some gasoline. Back on subject: When people ship their OCs with canon characters. When people try to butcher characters they don't like Fanfiction in general. Eughhh. gemlight omg Well the creator of the fanfic is a Steven Universe fan. |
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Post by mEmE on Sept 28, 2016 13:24:10 GMT -5
I really dislike lemon stories when they are rushed, there is not enough buildup to the awaited scene
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Post by pastelpills on Sept 28, 2016 14:43:33 GMT -5
When a cat is named FireWing or Fire Wing instead of Firewing When people get far too descriptive like "Firestar was staring to Beautykit's cold blue orbs and calmly whispered in the forbidden moonlight as Beautykit turned her to meet the handsome beautiful tom. "What is it?" She said, questioning and puzzled. Firestar hesitated for a brief moment and his breath stopped "We can't go on like this" When cats have impossible pelts. "Edgykit-Small black tabby with bright red markings and a dark grey body, blue eyes" Honestly I don't get the hype behind fanmade Clans. There is a TINY amount of canon fics, as pointed out before me. Personally, I'd rather read about Onestar than Beautykit. Burn |
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Post by Pandean on Sept 28, 2016 15:07:45 GMT -5
I really dislike lemon stories when they are rushed, there is not enough buildup to the awaited scene what is lemons? |
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Post by Pandean on Sept 28, 2016 15:08:27 GMT -5
Well the creator of the fanfic is a Steven Universe fan. its still a rather...bad name. Do warriors know what gems even are? |
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Post by Sootfeather on Sept 28, 2016 15:18:30 GMT -5
I really dislike lemon stories when they are rushed, there is not enough buildup to the awaited scene what is lemons? Mating sessions just let good ol Lenny do the explaining ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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Now a BNHA addict. Mina Ashido is the best girl and I will fight you all on that.
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Post by Sootfeather on Sept 28, 2016 15:18:45 GMT -5
Well the creator of the fanfic is a Steven Universe fan. its still a rather...bad name. Do warriors know what gems even are? Nope. |
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Sept 28, 2016 15:27:00 GMT -5
I love this thread.
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Post by pastelpills on Sept 28, 2016 15:29:50 GMT -5
When someone like Silverstream or Crowfeather hurt Leafpool or Millie for "being taken away". I read a fanfic that Silverstream killed off Millie because she took Graystripe away from her. It is out of character and Silver approved of their relationship anyways. I think I read that one too. |
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Post by pastelpills on Sept 28, 2016 15:32:26 GMT -5
When a cat is able to kill a large animal in one shot. (It mostly happens with Foxes, which kills me.)
Impossible pelt/eye colors. (Black cat with blue eyes/Any "Yellow" cat.)
When a story only focuses on the main character plus important side characters, while background characters are only there to be killed off. lmao.
Um... I don't think warriors are supposed to be genetically possible. I don't see anything wrong with it. I hate green cats though. |
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Post by pastelpills on Sept 28, 2016 15:34:58 GMT -5
When people spell all the names like FireStar, GrayStripe, etc. When the main character has two different eye colors. When a cannon character is bent out of character just to fit the story. Like Firestar suddenly becoming evil or Hawkfrost being a really nice guy. Heterochromia is plssible though. |
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Post by pastelpills on Sept 28, 2016 15:39:37 GMT -5
• Lemons, oh my god
• green cats
• ThornXBlossom oneshots
• When the main character is abused for no reason. Out of like 20 stories I made in 5 last months 2 of them include abused kits - but one was abused because its mother was never a nice cat and saw a dream where she saw her kit turn evil, and second, more understandable, was because she was part of a prophecy blah blah blah had to become a leader blah blah blah and her father was the deputy and he wanted to take over the clan and he knew his daughter would ruin it for him
• Random shippings like HawkfrostXSandstorm (I once made a LionblazeXHoneyfern fanfic though)
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Post by Wicked Witch on Sept 28, 2016 17:23:20 GMT -5
When people spell all the names like FireStar, GrayStripe, etc. When the main character has two different eye colors. When a cannon character is bent out of character just to fit the story. Like Firestar suddenly becoming evil or Hawkfrost being a really nice guy. Heterochromia is plssible though. that's probably why it's his pet peeve whether it's possible or not. or maybe its just the overuse of heterochromic cats. |
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Post by mEmE on Sept 28, 2016 17:24:01 GMT -5
• Lemons, oh my god • green cats • ThornXBlossom oneshots • When the main character is abused for no reason. Out of like 20 stories I made in 5 last months 2 of them include abused kits - but one was abused because its mother was never a nice cat and saw a dream where she saw her kit turn evil, and second, more understandable, was because she was part of a prophecy blah blah blah had to become a leader blah blah blah and her father was the deputy and he wanted to take over the clan and he knew his daughter would ruin it for him • Random shippings like HawkfrostXSandstorm (I once made a LionblazeXHoneyfern fanfic though) Come on lemons are the best. Btw, there is a pretty good Thornclaw fanfiction of fanfiction.com It's pretty bullshit logic with the whole story purpose tho, but the story is pretty long and the writing is decent. Also my favourite fanfiction is Warriors Couple Counselling. |
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Post by Uмвяᴀ on Sept 28, 2016 18:16:45 GMT -5
When people spell all the names like FireStar, GrayStripe, etc. When the main character has two different eye colors. When a cannon character is bent out of character just to fit the story. Like Firestar suddenly becoming evil or Hawkfrost being a really nice guy. Heterochromia is plssible though. I am aware of that. And I don't mind if a supporting character has heterochromia. It just can get annoying when this is used on the main character because it feels like the writer is trying the make the character have a special or unique design just so they look cool to the audience. It is also a sign that the character has sue-ish qualities. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2016 21:16:25 GMT -5
i just read a few chapters of the better choice ...
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2016 2:07:31 GMT -5
When the author searches desperately for unique words and ends up using something like "orbs". I especially hate it when "orbs" is used in the place of "eyes". It's different when the word "eyes" is used to clear everything up ("his eyes were like glowing amber orbs"), albeit just as bad, but when the word "orbs" is used ALONE, it's confusing. "Orbs" could refer to ANYTHING circular.
When non-canon Clans are called "BijouClan" or something for the sake of "originality".
When there is a disturbing amount of mating shown.
When there is a sudden rush of chaotic/heartbreaking events, albeit pathetic, before you can even get to know the character, and you're expected to empathize with them.
When the characters shown end up taking some extensive journey, which serves as a lengthy, boring filler.
When glorified or important characters get quick and petty deaths, like a leader falling from a tree.
When names like "Almightyspirit" and "Fragrantaura" are used. I'd sooner prefer to read about a Fartpaw, TBH.
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Post by Winterstorm on Sept 29, 2016 11:19:57 GMT -5
I just read the entire Jessy fanfic. It was cringy (I'm pretty sure is called "The Better Choice" which is a very wrong name because it was not the better choice, unless you like r@pe, and dozens of cats being murdered just because Bramblestar doesn't want anyone to hurt his precious Gemmy-chan. Oh and everyone is horribly butchered. Brackenfur is one of those arrogant toms we hate so much, Thornclaw is the absolute worst of them all, getting his great-neices preggers just because the tried to kill Gemlight aka Jessy, Bramblestar is technically a Yandere, willing to hurt anyone who dares to lay a hand on Gemlight, Dovewing is literally the fandom interpretation of her, who hated Bumblestripe and thinks Tigerheart is better in every way, and Squirrelflight is a slightly better Ashfur, wanting revenge because Bramblestar liked Gemlight.) I want to burn the fan fiction with a match and some gasoline. Back on subject: When people ship their OCs with canon characters. When people try to butcher characters they don't like Fanfiction in general. Eughhh. I just read it. Bramblestar is a huge A-hole. He is a huge D to Squirrelflight, killed any cat some just a little negative about Gemlight. He killed Leafpool and Constantly call her out for taking a mate from WindClan. He also told Graystripe to mate with Millie just to get more kits. Jessy/Gemlight is just a huge mary-sue. Squirrelflight get really bad treatment. She pretty much Ashfur v2. She tried to posion Jessy. Thornclaw r@ped Snowpaw and Hollypaw. Starclan is worse then it is in the books. Hollyleaf apparently hate Squirrelflight and Leafpool even though she had forgiven them. And so much more wrong with this fanfic I found it worse than Starkit's prophecy. |
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