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𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵
Warrior Fanatic
All hail me, the flower-flushing queen of Prague
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Jul 30, 2016 19:57:39 GMT -5
Like you said, Ashfur going into the Dark Forest.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2016 20:01:00 GMT -5
No powers
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Post by Uмвяᴀ on Jul 30, 2016 20:12:13 GMT -5
That Yellowfang and the rest of StarClan actually realized that Ashfur belongs in the Dark Forest and tossed him there instead. So basically what you said.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2016 20:36:18 GMT -5
The battle from the last hope. Such a let down.
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Post by Deerspring on Jul 30, 2016 20:45:45 GMT -5
I would omit the entire ~Firestar is the fourth!~ arc and replace it with something that actually contributed to the plot.
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Post by evilzorua on Jul 30, 2016 23:22:07 GMT -5
Thistleclaw in starclan, he killed no cats, and was loyal to his clan. Him and snowfur deserve to be together.
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Asexual
Sootfeather
Now a BNHA addict. Mina Ashido is the best girl and I will fight you all on that.
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Post by Sootfeather on Jul 30, 2016 23:24:41 GMT -5
Thistleclaw in starclan, he killed no cats, and was loyal to his clan. Him and snowfur deserve to be together. He never had a kill count, but that doesn't mean he still isn't aggressive and wrathful. He literally encouraged his student to murder a child and almost murdered an innocent warrior for trespassing. But that's my silly opinion
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Post by evilzorua on Jul 30, 2016 23:31:38 GMT -5
Mudclaw starts a civil war with wind clan to become deputy, but he's still in star clan. Thistleclaw had a bad attitude and attempted to kill some cats, but i think if he was able to go to starclan along side snowfur, I feel like he would be a nicer character. ((honestly Mudclaw needs to be kicked into the darkforest))
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Post by mockingbird on Jul 31, 2016 0:20:30 GMT -5
Dovewing should just be a normal apprentice instead of having powers, being part of a prophecy to save the clans, and having two toms that are in love with her. I consider her more Mary Sue than Firestar. Like, she literally has barely any issues. Her sister, on the other hand (or paw) has several issues. I wish Hollyleaf had gotten powers instead of Dovewing ;(
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Post by leafwillow on Jul 31, 2016 0:36:20 GMT -5
I'd like if they made cats less over powered, like Jayfeather, or Lionblaze.
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Snowlight
One day I will rule the world......
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Post by Snowlight on Jul 31, 2016 0:37:33 GMT -5
I really don't like TigerxDove. Not really sure why..... But for some reason I wish they had never fallen in love.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2016 1:19:07 GMT -5
to have dovewing be a well developed, likeable and awesome character like ivypool
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Post by Winterstorm on Jul 31, 2016 4:28:15 GMT -5
Offscreen deaths. Like Rainwhisker and the greencough inbetween of Bramblestar's storm and the last hope. They should've been onscreen.
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Post by neb on Jul 31, 2016 4:37:27 GMT -5
Offscreen deaths. Like Rainwhisker and the greencough inbetween of Bramblestar's storm and the last hope. They should've been onscreen. ^^^^^^^ this this this this The whole "Firestar is the fourth" bugged me.
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Post by Twilight Sparkle on Jul 31, 2016 8:22:31 GMT -5
I would make Skystar kinder in MFV. He seemed to behave sort of like he did in TFB, only softer.
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Post by sonnensturm1 on Jul 31, 2016 9:36:53 GMT -5
Maybe one of the three getting killed in the battle or just the whole book. I didn't liked how jayfeather collected starclan.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2016 9:47:37 GMT -5
Cats actually died IN THE LAST HOPE no I ain't talking about the deaths in BRS, TLH defenders- I mean IN THE BOOK, where they belong.
Instead it was all like, "YAY BRAMBLESTAR'S LEADER WHOOOO" *massive party while Sorreltail and Foxleap are apparently dead or dying in the middle of camp*
Did the Erins actually expect us to really think that they can fool us? xD it was obvious Sorreltail and Foxleap's deaths were afterthoughts. Should have been in the book ._.
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Post by Cheyenne on Jul 31, 2016 16:23:13 GMT -5
I would change Siversteam's death because I don't like Millie or any of her kits. I know that's harsh but Silverstream is also my second favorite character.
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Post by 🌙Moonpower🌙 on Jul 31, 2016 16:56:33 GMT -5
I would get rid of the powers.
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Post by Fяøšтч Bøв¢αт❅ on Jul 31, 2016 19:04:37 GMT -5
Cats actually died IN THE LAST HOPE no I ain't talking about the deaths in BRS, TLH defenders- I mean IN THE BOOK, where they belong. Instead it was all like, "YAY BRAMBLESTAR'S LEADER WHOOOO" *massive party while Sorreltail and Foxleap are apparently dead or dying in the middle of camp* Did the Erins actually expect us to really think that they can fool us? xD it was obvious Sorreltail and Foxleap's deaths were afterthoughts. Should have been in the book ._. ^^^
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Post by Mistybreeze on Jul 31, 2016 20:19:02 GMT -5
Add more variation to the offscreen deaths. They do need to happen sometimes, but they are boring. Maybe have a cat get injured by a fox or an enemy patrol. Maybe have more cats dying in large battles.
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Post by frostshade123 on Jul 31, 2016 20:24:30 GMT -5
I would change things such as the background characters getting a lot more dialogue in the series.
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 1, 2016 4:07:38 GMT -5
Add more variation to the offscreen deaths. They do need to happen sometimes, but they are boring. Maybe have a cat get injured by a fox or an enemy patrol. Maybe have more cats dying in large battles. This. And maybe some pitiful but realistic way to die on screen like choking on a bone while sharing prey with the clan. Can you imagine how shocking that would be? Of course I think many people would hate this kind of death because it has no meaning but not every death needs to be elaborate and meaningful. Kind of the same with Honeyfern's death. I know many people on here don't like it because they think it was pointless but you know how surprised I was when it happened? It was sad but I had the same rush I had when reading the OS. Anything could happen.
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Post by Uмвяᴀ on Aug 1, 2016 4:11:08 GMT -5
Add more variation to the offscreen deaths. They do need to happen sometimes, but they are boring. Maybe have a cat get injured by a fox or an enemy patrol. Maybe have more cats dying in large battles. This. And maybe some pitiful but realistic way to die on screen like choking on a bone while sharing prey with the clan. Can you imagine how shocking that would be? Of course I think many people would hate this kind of death because it has no meaning but not every death needs to be elaborate and meaningful. Kind of the same with Honeyfern's death. I know many people on here don't like it because they think it was pointless but you know how surprised I was when it happened? It was sad but I had the same rush I had when reading the OS. Anything could happen. I'm not a big fan of characters just being killed off for pure shock value, but more characters do need to die during bigger threats. For example, why did no cat die of dehydration when the beavers blocked the lake?
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Post by Cloudshadow on Aug 1, 2016 4:20:02 GMT -5
Uмвяᴀ - That's something that always bothered me as well! I know, killing cats just for shock value isn't great but it is actually a good way of managing clan numbers alongside bigger things that cause deaths. Plus it makes the series a little more realistic in a way. Cats in the wild will die from little things such as a scratch that gets infected and doesn't heal, or choking on a bone, or more illnesses other than stupid greencough. But I see your point.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 1, 2016 5:01:59 GMT -5
no more love triangles
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Post by avocado-axews on Aug 1, 2016 9:50:05 GMT -5
cats being smart enough to not fall in love with a cat across the border
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Post by TheRealDarkstalker on Aug 1, 2016 10:02:56 GMT -5
I would have it so at the end of the arc on the last chapter the clans and Starclan would have been just a hallucination of Firestar He wakes up thinking he's rusty, but instead he's Bob the kittypet
Haha that's a joke, but imagine if it was real?
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Post by leopardfire on Aug 1, 2016 10:05:47 GMT -5
Ruby didn't tease Tiny about unwanted kits going into the river.
But then, Tigerstar would take over forest...maybe.
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