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Post by Sanders on Sept 22, 2016 0:14:23 GMT -5
everything seems normal as you enter. we go into the kitchen. you ask, "Can I have something to eat?" i reply, "Yeah see what's in the fridge." you open the fridge and look around. the fridge is loaded with all kinds of food. it all looks so tasty. you take out a whole chicken on a plate. it jiggles as you take it out. you poke it only to find it is made of jello. you put it back and reach for something else. it's a carton of eggs. the carton is real but you open it up and poke the eggs. they are all jello. you put that back and start touching everything. everything in the fridge is jello. everything. even the ketchup bottle. even the high class figi water. it is all jello. you close the fridge. "Hey, I'm not hungry anymore."
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2016 0:20:32 GMT -5
im .. slightly afraid
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Post by sea cat on Sept 22, 2016 0:22:06 GMT -5
are u ok
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Post by qυeeɴ oғ ɢнoѕтlιɴɢѕ on Sept 22, 2016 0:53:33 GMT -5
I am confused
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Post by Swiftshadow™ on Sept 22, 2016 1:57:10 GMT -5
you close the fridge. "Hey, I'm not hungry anymore."
I love the story but that last bit is where it starts getting unrealistic
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Post by Sanders on Sept 22, 2016 2:07:23 GMT -5
you close the fridge. "Hey, I'm not hungry anymore."I love the story story but that last bit is where it starts getting unrealistic thanks for the critique !!
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Post by Swiftshadow™ on Sept 22, 2016 2:21:39 GMT -5
you close the fridge. "Hey, I'm not hungry anymore."I love the story story but that last bit is where it starts getting unrealistic thanks for the critique !! You're welcome but for real is there any jello left
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Post by Sanders on Sept 22, 2016 2:22:31 GMT -5
thanks for the critique !! You're welcome but for real is there any jello left the whole house is edible
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Post by Swiftshadow™ on Sept 22, 2016 2:34:23 GMT -5
You're welcome but for real is there any jello left the whole house is edible 2016 is getting good
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2016 4:09:33 GMT -5
You're welcome but for real is there any jello left the whole house is edible I'm pretty sure that's not a very stable house
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Post by tiger beetle on Sept 22, 2016 6:37:52 GMT -5
the whole house is edible I'm pretty sure that's not a very stable house well, stables tend to be for horses
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