What was the point in using these characters?
Sept 19, 2016 22:02:25 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Sept 19, 2016 22:02:25 GMT -5
Ivypool and Dovewing served no purpose to the plot whatsoever. I think Hollysnow made a topic called "Ivyfool" a while ago, and she was a cliche, jealous character who didn't like her sister's popularity.
This is my own opinion, but for Dovewing, she's just a character who really had her life all concentrated about love. While Dovewing and Ivypool both developed amazingly, they were still useless to the plot. Ivypool spied, sure, but she never reported anything. She was scared of Jayfeather and Lionblaze doing something to the Dark Forest trainees and she didn't want them to know who the "traitors" were.
Dovewing was mostly focused on Tigerheart, and because of him I honestly think he's the reason why it took so slow for her to grow up. I don't mind Dovewing, but I know that she's a poorly written character, bland, and your cliche popular girl who's getting all of the attention and leaving your friend or sister in the shadows.
I can say that Dovewing served her purpose by proving that the Dark Forest warriors exists to the leaders, but most of the time it's kind of a shame how her character wasn't really focused on the plot. She didn't want to spy; she didn't want to leave Tigerheart, and so on.
Honestly these two characters are so poorly written that I just don't care for either of them now. I only defend Dovewing (and perhaps I am even a little overprotective) because people bash on her so much because they give her sister credit who's done absolutely nothing at all.
Omen of the Stars was just terrible in general. I liked the stories after Omen of the Stars. Dovewing and Ivypool both developed and they became more likable for the readers and myself. I like Dovewing, but she's so poorly written though, and I like Ivypool's development more, because I can relate to it and it's well-developed, but it's so overused that it was boring and predictable.
Nothing new or surprising came out of these characters. I've watched so many shows about a girl being popular and leaving your friend or sibling out of the shadows. This isn't really anything new, and these characters are poorly written, both Dovewing and Ivypool.
This is my own opinion, but for Dovewing, she's just a character who really had her life all concentrated about love. While Dovewing and Ivypool both developed amazingly, they were still useless to the plot. Ivypool spied, sure, but she never reported anything. She was scared of Jayfeather and Lionblaze doing something to the Dark Forest trainees and she didn't want them to know who the "traitors" were.
Dovewing was mostly focused on Tigerheart, and because of him I honestly think he's the reason why it took so slow for her to grow up. I don't mind Dovewing, but I know that she's a poorly written character, bland, and your cliche popular girl who's getting all of the attention and leaving your friend or sister in the shadows.
I can say that Dovewing served her purpose by proving that the Dark Forest warriors exists to the leaders, but most of the time it's kind of a shame how her character wasn't really focused on the plot. She didn't want to spy; she didn't want to leave Tigerheart, and so on.
Honestly these two characters are so poorly written that I just don't care for either of them now. I only defend Dovewing (and perhaps I am even a little overprotective) because people bash on her so much because they give her sister credit who's done absolutely nothing at all.
Omen of the Stars was just terrible in general. I liked the stories after Omen of the Stars. Dovewing and Ivypool both developed and they became more likable for the readers and myself. I like Dovewing, but she's so poorly written though, and I like Ivypool's development more, because I can relate to it and it's well-developed, but it's so overused that it was boring and predictable.
Nothing new or surprising came out of these characters. I've watched so many shows about a girl being popular and leaving your friend or sibling out of the shadows. This isn't really anything new, and these characters are poorly written, both Dovewing and Ivypool.
