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Post by Brownie on May 13, 2024 20:14:52 GMT -5
Twelve hours remain
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Post by Brownie on May 14, 2024 9:12:54 GMT -5
Poll locked, the results are in. Nightpaw tries to dodge the question by asking for more information about the war
Poll 2 available in ~1.5hrs. rejoice
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Post by Brownie on May 14, 2024 16:52:14 GMT -5
=o starting strong with a three way tie
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Post by Katanaheart on May 14, 2024 19:03:31 GMT -5
No one is interested in Smokestep.
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Post by Katanaheart on May 14, 2024 19:04:02 GMT -5
Smokestem, autocorrect
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Post by Brownie on May 14, 2024 19:29:53 GMT -5
lmao last I checked there were 2 votes now there's 10 nice!! And I'm super surprised that Winterfur has so many votes =o Yall wanna see your mentor over your adoptive mom or friends? xp very responsible of yall
(also I set the poll so you can't see the votes until you vote to avoid spoiling anyone before they get to read the part but in order to see it I also have to vote. I'll move my vote to whatever is hard losing tho so it doesn't interfere mk)
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Post by lazzylake on May 14, 2024 22:09:07 GMT -5
Heheh yes yes Windpoppy supremacy. All hail the nursery queen!
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Post by Katanaheart on May 15, 2024 8:15:59 GMT -5
I feel going to Windpoppy or the other apprentices wouldn’t really help with the status of gaining information. Unless one of the traitors that ran off was a former queen which I doubt that, so she likely can’t be too helpful.
(Which Ravenstar should have mentioned who ran off, poor and likely intentional phrasing on her part to make our life harder.)
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Post by Katanaheart on May 15, 2024 9:36:30 GMT -5
Also this may not be answered in the narrative but how does the Clan function with two deputies? If Ravenstar kicks the bucket, do the siblings just fight and whoever wins becomes leader? Or is it decided by StarClan/Smokestem?
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Post by Brownie on May 15, 2024 10:30:23 GMT -5
Also this may not be answered in the narrative but how does the Clan function with two deputies? If Ravenstar kicks the bucket, do the siblings just fight and whoever wins becomes leader? Or is it decided by StarClan/Smokestem? Short answer: there were no contingencies for Ravenstar's death. Everyone, including herself, assumed that if she died, FireClan was also destroyed and they could figure out the future when they got there.. also for the history lesson: yall will get most of that at the end of the day in Ravenstar's first lesson. I want to double and triple check my timeline first xp Nightpaw knows some things, but a lot of this happened when she was still in the nursery and since there was a greencough outbreak for nearly half of that time, she wouldn't have had the opportunity to really get to know any cats except the younger apprentices and the elders that were in quarantine with her. and give yall time to meet some of the other cast and make big choices about Nightpaw's relationships~
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Post by Katanaheart on May 15, 2024 11:10:30 GMT -5
Also this may not be answered in the narrative but how does the Clan function with two deputies? If Ravenstar kicks the bucket, do the siblings just fight and whoever wins becomes leader? Or is it decided by StarClan/Smokestem? Short answer: there were no contingencies for Ravenstar's death. Everyone, including herself, assumed that if she died, FireClan was also destroyed and they could figure out the future when they got there.. also for the history lesson: yall will get most of that at the end of the day in Ravenstar's first lesson. I want to double and triple check my timeline first xp Nightpaw knows some things, but a lot of this happened when she was still in the nursery and since there was a greencough outbreak for nearly half of that time, she wouldn't have had the opportunity to really get to know any cats except the younger apprentices and the elders that were in quarantine with her. and give yall time to meet some of the other cast and make big choices about Nightpaw's relationships~ Huh! Ravenstar’s really out here looking for the fountain of youth then if her Clan’s that fragile, it’ll self destruct with her death.
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Post by Brownie on May 15, 2024 12:01:22 GMT -5
Huh! Ravenstar’s really out here looking for the fountain of youth then if her Clan’s that fragile, it’ll self destruct with her death. :lol: It was a rough six months :(
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Post by Brownie on May 16, 2024 9:23:10 GMT -5
24hrs left~
I am soooooo tempted to make this story every other day ;-; All votes had come in the first 24hrs and we haven't gotten any since... I think I could keep up with updates every other day, but I don't want the parts to overwhelm yall xp
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Post by Brownie on May 16, 2024 21:54:04 GMT -5
12hrs left to vote! the poll automatically locks so get your final say in
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Post by Brownie on May 17, 2024 9:54:38 GMT -5
yall are locked in. Looks like someone changed their vote last minute, so we're going to see Windpoppy!
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Post by Brownie on May 17, 2024 14:22:45 GMT -5
Poll #3: Nightpaw makes a plan to save the world. Or at least an outline? stormshade1 Katanaheart Ivyfalcon leafbush! Whispering Willow New characters unlocked: Olivepaw, Larkpaw, Flintpaw, Beepaw, Flickerpaw, Redpaw Moonspark, Sageshade, Thistlestorm Webthroat and Bramblespark Also I PROMISE I'm trying not to make these too long ;-; MAN it's hard when the scenes want to write themselves. (I also had Winterfur's prepped, because he was winning for a while) (if there's any tense errors please yell at me about it so I can fix them)
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Post by Brownie on May 17, 2024 20:24:10 GMT -5
smh I bet yall would be the types of people to keep grinding a game for 100% achievements (said with a little bit of exasperation but a lot of endearment)
I will give yall the Lore. yall asked for it
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Post by Katanaheart on May 18, 2024 8:13:40 GMT -5
smh I bet yall would be the types of people to keep grinding a game for 100% achievements (said with a little bit of exasperation but a lot of endearment) I will give yall the Lore. yall asked for it *Gestures to completed Pokémon Dex in Legends Arceus and a 100% on trophies in one of the Persona 5 games.* Trying to 100% Wo Long has been a pain and may not get done.
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Post by Katanaheart on May 18, 2024 8:14:28 GMT -5
Bramblespark: I’m about to win my trophy for worst mother of the year! *Runs off with her brother.*
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Post by leafbush! on May 20, 2024 4:39:07 GMT -5
smh I bet yall would be the types of people to keep grinding a game for 100% achievements (said with a little bit of exasperation but a lot of endearment) I will give yall the Lore. yall asked for it I tried to complete all jsab songs in no-hit I almost did it
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Post by leafbush! on May 20, 2024 4:40:23 GMT -5
hashira training arc
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Post by Brownie on May 20, 2024 17:47:04 GMT -5
Bramblespark: I’m about to win my trophy for worst mother of the year! *Runs off with her brother.* In her defense, she had her reasons, but it was still very selfish of her. If Nightpaw ever gets to talk with her (which isn't impossible in some branches) then yall might get to make your own opinions if her reasons were valid or not. If yall want to keep digging into side characters' history, I'm gonna need a bigger spreadsheet for this project xp (by all means, you can keep doing that. I just need to work further and further ahead to make sure I don't tangle the delicate threads of future branches. Which is a fun challenge I wasn't expecting to have to undertake this early, but here we are.)
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Post by Katanaheart on May 21, 2024 11:32:39 GMT -5
Bramblespark: I’m about to win my trophy for worst mother of the year! *Runs off with her brother.* In her defense, she had her reasons, but it was still very selfish of her. If Nightpaw ever gets to talk with her (which isn't impossible in some branches) then yall might get to make your own opinions if her reasons were valid or not. If yall want to keep digging into side characters' history, I'm gonna need a bigger spreadsheet for this project xp (by all means, you can keep doing that. I just need to work further and further ahead to make sure I don't tangle the delicate threads of future branches. Which is a fun challenge I wasn't expecting to have to undertake this early, but here we are.) I’m sure she did. But she still did abandon her two kits and knows she’ll eventually have to fight and potentially kill her children in battle. (Or her brother will have to kill his kin, either one. I doubt ShadowClan will be pleased in relation to any hesitation.) Sorry about all of the intense complication on our end, Brownie!
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Post by Brownie on May 21, 2024 13:30:42 GMT -5
ayo update is going to be after dinner today, I won't have time to sit and write it until then (;
Also small update: polls will now be closing at 6PM (EST) the night BEFORE an update. I'd like to have the night before and the morning of the update to write these, so that delays like this one won't happen in the future. For the most part, the polls have been quite decisive, but I want to ensure that even close polls are FINALIZED before I start doing my writing for the part. Hopefully this change increases the quality of the writing and the choices~ (unlike part 3, which I feel is both too info-dumpy and too rushed at the same time)
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Post by Brownie on May 21, 2024 18:29:18 GMT -5
stormshade1 Katanaheart Ivyfalcon leafbush! Whispering WillowPoll #4 out now!! Reminder that the next poll is closing THURSDAY NIGHT instead of friday morning, so get your last votes in by then~ CHARACTERS ADDED Crystalflight and Cricketfall
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Post by leafbush! on May 21, 2024 19:30:09 GMT -5
yay!!
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Post by Brownie on May 22, 2024 0:12:30 GMT -5
A variety of votes this time! Who will win out?
All three have super interesting choices yall get to make once you're there hehe After this, yall are officially out of the "tutorial" phase and some options will open up that can permanently impact relationships with other characters. Time to start building and burning bridges (;
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Post by Brownie on May 22, 2024 22:15:11 GMT -5
just under 24hrs left to vote
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Post by Brownie on May 23, 2024 20:24:19 GMT -5
=o that was closer than expected! I'm also surprised apprentices came second after Winterfur nearly won the first round.
This is so much nicer, though, I can have time to draft tonight and finalize tomorrow, which should give yall a lot higher quality polls (;
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