Post by {Azure} on May 13, 2023 9:33:33 GMT -5
this is not good at all but i'm posting it anyway because... idk
Narrator: as ravenpaw approached the barn, he felt a twist in his stomach, wondering if barley would take him in
Ravenpaw: h-hello?
Barley: Hey there!
Ravenpaw: ahh!
Barley: oops, sorry i didn’t mean to scare ya
Ravenpaw: i-it’s ok
Barley: So what are you doing here? Does bluestar need anything?
Ravenpaw: no actually i k-kinda saw something i wasn’t suppose t-to a-a-and i-
Barley: woah woah woah slow down, stop crying; look, you don’t have to tell me if you don’t feel like it ok?
Ravenpaw: o-ok
Barley: so, don’t tell me why you’re here, tell me what you need
Ravenpaw: sh-shelter, i had to leave thunderclan because i saw too much and if i go back, tigerclaw will kill me.
Barley: what?!
Ravenpaw: yeah, but if you’re not ok with it then i can find somewhere el-
Barley: nonsense! Stay as long as ya want!
Ravenpaw: r-really?
Barley: yes, admittedly it gets a little lonely here, not having anyone to share the barn with.
Ravenpaw: o-ok
Barley: hey, just rest for the rest of today, i can see you’re tired
Ravenpaw: ok, thanks barley
Barley: No problem, I'll make your nest.
Ravenpaw: you don’t need to do that
Barley: nonsense, i can see you’ve been through a lot, just take it easy
Ravenpaw: ok, thank you
Barley: Like I said, no problem.
Ravenpaw’s mind: did my heart just skip a beat?!
-a few minutes later-
Barley: there you go
Ravenpaw: thanks, looks comfortable
Barley: you’re welcome
Ravenpaw: Why are you being so nice to me?
Barley’s mind: because i’m in love with you
Barley: just want to be nice for a friend
Ravenpaw:ok well good night then
Barley: good night
-the next morning
Ravenpaw: good morning
Barley: good morning
Ravenpaw: so, where are the best places to hunt?
Barley: oh, by the barrels over that way
Ravenpaw: thanks
Barley: So what's going on, and you don’t need to tell me more than you want ok?
Ravenpaw:I-I saw tigerclaw killing redtail.
Barley: Well I can see why he wants you dead then. So you need shelter until tigerclaw's dead i’m assuming?
Ravenpaw: that was the plan
Barley: like i said, stay as long as ya want
Ravenpaw: ok thank you
Barley: any time
-A few moons later-
Narrator: as the moons passed, they developed a close friendship, and then one day fireheart, now firestar came with news
Ravenpaw: So he's dead?
Barley: for good?
Firestar: yep
Ravenpaw: that’s a relief
Barley: you said it
Firestar: you can come back now ravenpaw, i see no reason i can’t make you a warrior when you come back.
Ravenpaw: oh i umm
Barley: oh right, well i guess i’ll miss the company
Ravenpaw: actually, with all due respect firestar, i think i’d rather stay here if barley’s ok with it
Barley: w- well of course
Firestar: *sigh* I figured you’d say that. You do seem rather.. close
Ravenpaw: ?
Barley: ?
Narrator: It was then they realized their tails were intertwined as they started to blush and pull away from each other
Ravenpaw: oh umm no, i just… got used to this place. it’s nice, quiet, i don’t need to worry about attacks, etc
Firestar: *smirks* ok then; remember, you’re always welcome in thunderclan
Ravenpaw: thank you firestar
Firestar: you’re very welcome.
-that night-
Barley: umm th-thanks for not leaving
Ravenpaw: of course, you’re my best friend, i’d never leave you
Narrator: barley’s as well as ravenpaw’s heart twisted at the word “friend”
Ravenpaw: and it’s getting late, lets go to sleep
Barley: all right
Ravenpaw: *yawns* good night
Barley: *yawns* good night
Narrator: he cuddled up close to barley barely hearing him whisper:
Barley: i love you
Narrator: but ravenpaw was too sleepy to interpret the words
-the next morning-
Ravenpaw: good morning, barley
Barley: good morning, ravenpaw
Ravenpaw: *gulp* umm barley
Barley: yea?
Ravenpaw: well about last night,
Barley’s mind: oh no, i’m screwed
Barley: i- um i…
Ravenpaw: so you did say it?
Barley: well i mean i-
Ravenpaw: well i um i thought i heard you say i love you last night and i wanted to say i love you too
Barley: what?
Ravenpaw: i said i love you
Barley: i-
Ravenpaw: i’ve had it bottled up for too long, i needed to tell you
Barley: ravenpaw-
Ravenpaw: but i get it if you want me gone now, i’ll leave as soon as you wa-
Barley: ravenpaw!
Ravenpaw: wh-
Barley: shut up and kiss me you big goof!
Ravenpaw: wel-
Narrator: he was interrupted by barley giving him a long kiss
Barley: i loved you since the moment i laid eyes on you, and you’ve waited SO LONG TO TELL ME
Ravenpaw: WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME?
Barley: BECAUSE… because i was scared to lose you
Ravenpaw: there’s your answer to why I didn’t tell you
Barley: Well then, ravenpaw?
Narrator: his heart was racing
Ravenpaw: yes?
Barley: Will you be my mate until the day we die?
Ravenpaw: Of course I will.
fyi i lost a bet, i love this ship but hate the story
please feel free to share your opinion
Narrator: as ravenpaw approached the barn, he felt a twist in his stomach, wondering if barley would take him in
Ravenpaw: h-hello?
Barley: Hey there!
Ravenpaw: ahh!
Barley: oops, sorry i didn’t mean to scare ya
Ravenpaw: i-it’s ok
Barley: So what are you doing here? Does bluestar need anything?
Ravenpaw: no actually i k-kinda saw something i wasn’t suppose t-to a-a-and i-
Barley: woah woah woah slow down, stop crying; look, you don’t have to tell me if you don’t feel like it ok?
Ravenpaw: o-ok
Barley: so, don’t tell me why you’re here, tell me what you need
Ravenpaw: sh-shelter, i had to leave thunderclan because i saw too much and if i go back, tigerclaw will kill me.
Barley: what?!
Ravenpaw: yeah, but if you’re not ok with it then i can find somewhere el-
Barley: nonsense! Stay as long as ya want!
Ravenpaw: r-really?
Barley: yes, admittedly it gets a little lonely here, not having anyone to share the barn with.
Ravenpaw: o-ok
Barley: hey, just rest for the rest of today, i can see you’re tired
Ravenpaw: ok, thanks barley
Barley: No problem, I'll make your nest.
Ravenpaw: you don’t need to do that
Barley: nonsense, i can see you’ve been through a lot, just take it easy
Ravenpaw: ok, thank you
Barley: Like I said, no problem.
Ravenpaw’s mind: did my heart just skip a beat?!
-a few minutes later-
Barley: there you go
Ravenpaw: thanks, looks comfortable
Barley: you’re welcome
Ravenpaw: Why are you being so nice to me?
Barley’s mind: because i’m in love with you
Barley: just want to be nice for a friend
Ravenpaw:ok well good night then
Barley: good night
-the next morning
Ravenpaw: good morning
Barley: good morning
Ravenpaw: so, where are the best places to hunt?
Barley: oh, by the barrels over that way
Ravenpaw: thanks
Barley: So what's going on, and you don’t need to tell me more than you want ok?
Ravenpaw:I-I saw tigerclaw killing redtail.
Barley: Well I can see why he wants you dead then. So you need shelter until tigerclaw's dead i’m assuming?
Ravenpaw: that was the plan
Barley: like i said, stay as long as ya want
Ravenpaw: ok thank you
Barley: any time
-A few moons later-
Narrator: as the moons passed, they developed a close friendship, and then one day fireheart, now firestar came with news
Ravenpaw: So he's dead?
Barley: for good?
Firestar: yep
Ravenpaw: that’s a relief
Barley: you said it
Firestar: you can come back now ravenpaw, i see no reason i can’t make you a warrior when you come back.
Ravenpaw: oh i umm
Barley: oh right, well i guess i’ll miss the company
Ravenpaw: actually, with all due respect firestar, i think i’d rather stay here if barley’s ok with it
Barley: w- well of course
Firestar: *sigh* I figured you’d say that. You do seem rather.. close
Ravenpaw: ?
Barley: ?
Narrator: It was then they realized their tails were intertwined as they started to blush and pull away from each other
Ravenpaw: oh umm no, i just… got used to this place. it’s nice, quiet, i don’t need to worry about attacks, etc
Firestar: *smirks* ok then; remember, you’re always welcome in thunderclan
Ravenpaw: thank you firestar
Firestar: you’re very welcome.
-that night-
Barley: umm th-thanks for not leaving
Ravenpaw: of course, you’re my best friend, i’d never leave you
Narrator: barley’s as well as ravenpaw’s heart twisted at the word “friend”
Ravenpaw: and it’s getting late, lets go to sleep
Barley: all right
Ravenpaw: *yawns* good night
Barley: *yawns* good night
Narrator: he cuddled up close to barley barely hearing him whisper:
Barley: i love you
Narrator: but ravenpaw was too sleepy to interpret the words
-the next morning-
Ravenpaw: good morning, barley
Barley: good morning, ravenpaw
Ravenpaw: *gulp* umm barley
Barley: yea?
Ravenpaw: well about last night,
Barley’s mind: oh no, i’m screwed
Barley: i- um i…
Ravenpaw: so you did say it?
Barley: well i mean i-
Ravenpaw: well i um i thought i heard you say i love you last night and i wanted to say i love you too
Barley: what?
Ravenpaw: i said i love you
Barley: i-
Ravenpaw: i’ve had it bottled up for too long, i needed to tell you
Barley: ravenpaw-
Ravenpaw: but i get it if you want me gone now, i’ll leave as soon as you wa-
Barley: ravenpaw!
Ravenpaw: wh-
Barley: shut up and kiss me you big goof!
Ravenpaw: wel-
Narrator: he was interrupted by barley giving him a long kiss
Barley: i loved you since the moment i laid eyes on you, and you’ve waited SO LONG TO TELL ME
Ravenpaw: WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME?
Barley: BECAUSE… because i was scared to lose you
Ravenpaw: there’s your answer to why I didn’t tell you
Barley: Well then, ravenpaw?
Narrator: his heart was racing
Ravenpaw: yes?
Barley: Will you be my mate until the day we die?
Ravenpaw: Of course I will.
fyi i lost a bet, i love this ship but hate the story
please feel free to share your opinion