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Post by angyfrog on Oct 23, 2022 13:51:04 GMT -5
Nightheart are you seriously waiting for Sunbeam to take a DUMP? THAT'S literally the equivalent of standing in the bathroom, in the dark, waiting for someone to walk in and turn on the light, WHAT Edit: Bathroom is generous, that's the equivalent of standing in a public stall
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 13:51:56 GMT -5
Nightheart are you seriously waiting for Sunbeam to take a DUMP? THAT'S literally the equivalent of standing in the bathroom, in the dark, waiting for someone to walk in and turn on the light, WHAT Edit: Bathroom is generous, that's the equivalent of standing in a public stall mhmm
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Post by Hollyfall on Oct 23, 2022 13:54:20 GMT -5
romance is in the air and it's peaking with nightheart x sunbeam
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Post by angyfrog on Oct 23, 2022 13:55:43 GMT -5
romance is in the air and it's peaking with nightheart x sunbeam Nightheart over here with freak goblin energy
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Post by 𝓣𝓲𝓷𝓾𝓿𝓲𝓮𝓵 on Oct 23, 2022 13:58:32 GMT -5
Nightheart are you seriously waiting for Sunbeam to take a DUMP? THAT'S literally the equivalent of standing in the bathroom, in the dark, waiting for someone to walk in and turn on the light, WHAT Edit: Bathroom is generous, that's the equivalent of standing in a public stall I already didn't like Nightheart, but this is just disturbing! There's so much wrong with this, but also, what if some other cat had discovered him other than Sunbeam? But hey, nothing says peak romance than waiting in a bathroom stall for someone, I guess!
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Post by Hollyfall on Oct 23, 2022 14:00:41 GMT -5
Nightheart are you seriously waiting for Sunbeam to take a DUMP? THAT'S literally the equivalent of standing in the bathroom, in the dark, waiting for someone to walk in and turn on the light, WHAT Edit: Bathroom is generous, that's the equivalent of standing in a public stall I already didn't like Nightheart, but this is just disturbing! There's so much wrong with this, but also, what if some other cat had discovered him other than Sunbeam? But hey, nothing says peak romance than waiting in a bathroom stall for someone, I guess! Now I'm imagining some cat with a short temper like Scorchfur, Snowbird, or Tawnypelt finding him instead.
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Post by angyfrog on Oct 23, 2022 14:07:36 GMT -5
I already didn't like Nightheart, but this is just disturbing! There's so much wrong with this, but also, what if some other cat had discovered him other than Sunbeam? But hey, nothing says peak romance than waiting in a bathroom stall for someone, I guess! Now I'm imagining some cat with a short temper like Scorchfur, Snowbird, or Tawnypelt finding him instead. Berryheart goes to the bathroom Nightheart awkwardly waits, quietly, wondering where Sunbeam's at, hoping Berryheart doesn't see him
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 14:16:41 GMT -5
At a scene where Sunbeam and Nightheart are discussing the crisis in RiverClan, and Sunbeam asks Nightheart if he could imagine how scary it would be if his Clan lost their leader and deputy so close together. Nightheart tries to imagine and recalls how they almost lost both Bramblestar and Squirrelflight to the Dark Forest, and wonders who would have replaced them. Lionblaze and Birchfall cross his mind.
But...why Birchfall? Sure he's a senior warrior, but he's never even had an apprentice...
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Post by angyfrog on Oct 23, 2022 14:18:15 GMT -5
At a scene where Sunbeam and Nightheart are discussing the crisis in RiverClan, and Sunbeam asks Nightheart if he could imagine how scary it would be if his Clan lost their leader and deputy so close together. Nightheart tries to imagine and recalls how they almost lost both Bramblestar and Squirrelflight to the Dark Forest, and wonders who would have replaced them. Lionblaze and Birchfall cross his mind. But...why Birchfall? Sure he's a senior warrior, but he's never even had an apprentice... Not only that but wasn't there a point where the clan straight up went "Lionblaze sucks as a leader" No idea if Nightheart was around at the time, but odd take regardless, plus..Birchfall? Not Ivypool? That's such an odd choice
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Post by Hollyfall on Oct 23, 2022 14:24:00 GMT -5
At a scene where Sunbeam and Nightheart are discussing the crisis in RiverClan, and Sunbeam asks Nightheart if he could imagine how scary it would be if his Clan lost their leader and deputy so close together. Nightheart tries to imagine and recalls how they almost lost both Bramblestar and Squirrelflight to the Dark Forest, and wonders who would have replaced them. Lionblaze and Birchfall cross his mind. But...why Birchfall? Sure he's a senior warrior, but he's never even had an apprentice... Not only that but wasn't there a point where the clan straight up went "Lionblaze sucks as a leader" No idea if Nightheart was around at the time, but odd take regardless, plus..Birchfall? Not Ivypool? That's such an odd choice Nightheart was an apprentice at the time and the Clan collectively sort of agreed Lionblaze wasn't the best leader given the circumstances. He is mentioned to be a competent and reasonable deputy under Squirrelflight. His hatred of Ashfur was what made him act the way he did. Granted, I'm a fan of Lionblaze so I'm biased, but he's still mentioned as competent in a position of authority. Birchfall...possibly because he's one of their oldest warriors? Experience and all.
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 14:28:38 GMT -5
Not only that but wasn't there a point where the clan straight up went "Lionblaze sucks as a leader" No idea if Nightheart was around at the time, but odd take regardless, plus..Birchfall? Not Ivypool? That's such an odd choice Nightheart was an apprentice at the time and the Clan collectively sort of agreed Lionblaze wasn't the best leader given the circumstances. He is mentioned to be a competent and reasonable deputy under Squirrelflight. His hatred of Ashfur was what made him act the way he did. Granted, I'm a fan of Lionblaze so I'm biased, but he's still mentioned as competent in a position of authority. Birchfall...possibly because he's one of their oldest warriors? Experience and all. I also like Lionblaze, but I think you like him more than I do. I think that's fair. Yeah Birchfall has experience, but he's also never really had an apprentice and I think the authors just forgot the fact. Anyway, I'm on chapter 18 and I'm going to take a break.
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 15:14:42 GMT -5
I hope y'all are enjoying my commentary on the book, even if it's not as exciting as Hollyfall' spoilers. I'm still taking a break, but I was thinking about this earlier: I hope that Splashtail isn't really in love with Frostpaw and is just using her to be able to control the Clan through her. Would be more interesting.
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Post by Snowfire on Oct 23, 2022 16:02:12 GMT -5
romance is in the air and it's peaking with nightheart x sunbeam Nightheart over here with freak goblin energy I could just imagine Nightheart standing there looking like this.
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 16:54:43 GMT -5
Back to it.
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 17:20:09 GMT -5
I hate Berryheart, but...they kind of are her business, man. What happens in ShadowClan affects her directly.
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Post by angyfrog on Oct 23, 2022 20:46:47 GMT -5
I hate Berryheart, but...they kind of are her business, man. What happens in ShadowClan affects her directly. Bro who she gonna tell? Gonna waltz up to TC and tell them your plans directly? She literally dislikes the other clans as is, why would she be helpful in anyway to them
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 21:01:31 GMT -5
I hate Berryheart, but...they kind of are her business, man. What happens in ShadowClan affects her directly. Bro who she gonna tell? Gonna waltz up to TC and tell them your plans directly? She literally dislikes the other clans as is, why would she be helpful in anyway to them Lmao
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Post by Jaysnow on Oct 23, 2022 21:15:39 GMT -5
I finished it. I'll have to sleep on if it was better than River or not, I honestly liked both a lot. The RiverClan plot is really engaging. There are some things I didn't like but it was an enjoyable read overall.
I'm willing to answer any questions anyone has.
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