Transgender
Closeface
Day drinking over twigbranch
|
Post by Closeface on Mar 26, 2022 16:18:23 GMT -5
Hey what if Lionblaze au where he killed Ashfur instead? I feel like the fact that he was in the dark forest and how ashfur was his mentor was so underutilized and he was the most aggressive of the three during the firescene. I don’t really have much past this but I really like this.
|
|
|
Post by rookheart on Mar 28, 2022 15:17:22 GMT -5
I really wish they used this! The tension between Ashfur and Lionblaze was really good, and with how Ashfur would demean Lionblaze one second, and then praise him the next, they really were cold and slightly less cold.
I wish Ashfur somehow found the secret out sooner, and tried to manipulate Lionblaze against his moms. It would be a much more compelling "is he actually evil" arc than the Dark Forest training thing which we had already just seen with Brambleclaw, who also had very little reason to join them. I still think Jaypaw should have trained in the Dark Forest, as he had every reason to.
Also, the way Heathertail was treated by Lionblaze? And how he tried to kill her brutally but got Crowfeather instead? If you combined that with Ashfur's influence instead, with Ashfur encouraging him to be angry and violent... That's really fun, especially with the fact Crowfeather would turn out to be his dad.
|
|