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Post by *•.¸♡𝘥𝘢𝘸𝘯𝘳𝘰𝘴𝘦♡¸.•* on Jan 18, 2022 15:03:31 GMT -5
I've warmed up to the idea of Onestar getting a SE because it could actually be interesting if they actually go with "Onestar's not that nice of a guy" thing and not try to make all his actions seem completely justified, give explanation, but not justification. Here's a little list:
- Onestar's transition in personalities from Onewhisker to Onestar actually being explained - Smoke and Darktail - OneWhite content - Maybe some moments with Heathertail where he's being her father? - No poorly done "Onestar did these bad things for a good reason" please - Maybe his POV from his death scene either as the prologue or as the ending
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Post by ❅Maplefrost❅ on Jan 18, 2022 15:08:25 GMT -5
Honestly can't wait to see him abandoning Smoke, yeesh. Honestly, the way he treats her and his son never sat well with me, especially when he mocked Darktail before the two of them iced each other. I just hope they don't try to victimize and justify his gross actions.
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Bisexual
#FF00EC
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BҽɾɾყႦʅσσɱ
Villain Enjoyer
Finally reading Wind!
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Post by BҽɾɾყႦʅσσɱ on Jan 18, 2022 15:11:03 GMT -5
- Smoke and Darktail getting shown and his complete reaction to his son returning to take revenge - his fight with Tallstar as an actual scene over the choice of making him leader instead of Mudclaw - OneWhite and their supposed kits Heathertail, Kestrelflight and Harespring being confirmed - the Eclipse battle and explaining how he got Leopardstar to join him in attacking ThunderClan - what he thought about Firestar during the long period of time where their friendship was over - no excuses for his behaviour just some explanations besides "his loyalty to WindClan"
BONUS: SHOW HIS REACTION TO FIRESTAR'S DEATH (Onestar was only ever implied to have some hangup over it when he insulted Bramblestar in Crowfeather's Trial)
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Post by 𝐛𝐥𝟒𝐜𝐤𝐬𝐨𝐥 on Jan 18, 2022 15:56:34 GMT -5
MAKE. HIM. A. BAD. PERSON.
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Post by 𝐛𝐥𝟒𝐜𝐤𝐬𝐨𝐥 on Jan 18, 2022 15:56:59 GMT -5
with a morally good heart but still bad as in actions
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Post by ᏞᎪᎠᎽ Ꮎf fᎪᏁᎠᎾms ミ☆ on Jan 18, 2022 16:04:16 GMT -5
POV during tallstar's death. i want concrete proof that firestar peer pressured onewhisker into accepting. that onewhisker NEVER wanted to do it, but he felt so pressured by his "friend" firestar, that he ended up going along with it, and then quickly regretting it. he only fought mudclaw in the end because he was in too deep now and was too cowardly to admit it was all wrong for him to be leader over mudclaw.
just give me all the validation lmao
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Post by Saint Ambrosef on Jan 18, 2022 16:15:03 GMT -5
i'd love to see if onestar acted so aggressively toward Thunderclan because he felt intimidated by Firestar's reputation as a great and formidable leader and felt like he had to act tougher to seem "on par" to him. basically, an inferiority complex. that'd be really interesting to explore.
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Post by Moonblazer on Jan 18, 2022 16:27:18 GMT -5
Literally anything because this cat is a fantastically useful morally grey character with complexity and importance to massive parts of the plot. I want him to be the very flawed and jumpy cat we know he is. I want him to make bad decisions but also ones that show how badly he wanted to prove himself and his leadership to Windclan and Windclan alone. I want to see how Mudclaw’s murderous attempt at an overthrow really messed up his mind and set him up for his inevitable infamous leadership. I want to show the contrast of how other clans disliked him but Windclan genuinely seemed to respect and follow his leadership for a majority of it.
Show me OneWhite pleaseeeeee and make Heathertail their canon daughter, and maybe Hare and Kestrel his sons. I want to see his pain of losing Gorsepaw as well, and I want to see his friendship with Firestar rise, fall and then hopefully be regained in Starclan with some kind of truce/slow makeup.
I’m so genuinely excited for this book. I’ve been fascinated with Onestar’s character for years and I want to see it all from his POV.
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Asexual
#07B04C
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Ṣanɗypaw™
The Shiny User
🎵Guess that's just the way it goes, easy come, easy go🎵
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Post by Ṣanɗypaw™ on Jan 18, 2022 18:27:08 GMT -5
Onestar's transition from liking to hating Firestar please please please
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#04F9B3
StarClan leader
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Featherstar
She could now see that destiny alone could not save RiverClan. - Frostpaw, Wind
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Post by Featherstar on Jan 19, 2022 0:16:26 GMT -5
Yes! What Ṣanɗypaw™ said above!
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Post by Twilight Sparkle on Jan 19, 2022 5:58:01 GMT -5
OneWhite and their kit/kits!
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Post by *Faith* on Jan 19, 2022 15:44:20 GMT -5
New family relations confirmed, more of Stagleap and Wrenflight and warrior names for Wrenflight's littermates. Don't forget, Wrenflight is Onestar's mother. So, depending on whether her littermates are alive, they would be warriors. I also want to meet Onestar's mentor and get both a warrior ceremony and nine live ceremony for him. And seeing how Onestar himself is like as a mentor would also be nice.
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Post by Rainsplash on Jan 20, 2022 5:23:46 GMT -5
I really hope they won't give a sorry excuse for what Onestar did, and I'd love to get some of Onestar's "family moments".
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Post by Chicken on Jan 20, 2022 17:10:21 GMT -5
I agree with Faith about family tree conformations. I'd also like to see more characterization of characters outside of Crowfeather and his family.
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Post by 🔥Firestar🔥 on Jan 21, 2022 7:34:00 GMT -5
Can't wait to see more scenes prove that Mudclaw wasn't going to be a good leader, and that he was too reckless, hotheaded, and agressive. Lol. Jokes aside, i'm hoping we can see his relationship with Whitetail and Heathertail.
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Post by fire on Jan 22, 2022 17:52:19 GMT -5
What everyone said. So excited for this book. Really want to see his relationship with Firestar as it turns sour and he goes from being one of his best friends to an unlikely rival. Really want to see his mindset as he goes from being what we thought was a good cat to someone who made wrong choices and was a general a-hole. Hopefully he and Firestar are friends again in StarClan.
Been wanting this book for years, so glad it's finally happening!
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Official Queen of Fan Clans
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ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁
Official ThunderClan & ElmClan Leader
Easing back in
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Post by ʀᴀɪɴʟᴇᴀғ 🍁 on Jan 23, 2022 5:09:54 GMT -5
I want them to make a parallel with Crowfeather and Nighcloud. That maybe Onewhisker was being suspected of not being completely loyal, so he dumps Smoke and gets with Whitetail because she likes him and to prove him loyalty. I also want him to fall for Whitetail while feeling constant guilt for his initial intentions. Maybe he planned to break up with her after a while and then it didn't happen.
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