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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 24, 2020 11:25:24 GMT -5
Nice chapter! Gravelpaw continues to be a complete cinnamon roll - I'd definitely enjoy it if he stayed in the spotlight. And Spidertail's been an okay patrol leader so far, if not very imaginative. But I suppose we'll find out how good he really is in the next chapters. Ooh, I keep meaning to watch ATLA, a lot of people are saying good things. Um... Mostly I've been playing Night In The Woods a lot.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 24, 2020 12:13:12 GMT -5
Gravelpaw is a freaking delight and treasure. He's so fun to write for! What do you mean about Spidertail being imaginative? Could you explain a little bit? I'm curious now. That's a good game! I watched Jacksepticeye play it before, and it's definitely really interesting. How far are you in the story?
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 24, 2020 12:59:07 GMT -5
Well, he seems to be following the patrol leader rulebook pretty rigidly (assuming that the rogues couldn't be reasoned with, for example, and consistently taking the path of least risk). So it'll be interesting to see what happens if he's in a situation he's not familiar with. I dunno, I might be misreading but that's the impression I got? I definitely agree! I'm on part 3 at the moment, but it's my second playthrough. I'm enjoying discovering everything I missed the first time through.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 24, 2020 13:57:46 GMT -5
Sounds about right to me. On missions, it tends to be best to follow the path of least risk, but there will be situations where one simply cannot prepare for them. Things are gonna happen that nobody int he clans have experienced before. Awesome! Who's your favorite character in it? I have to do the obvious and go with Mae, but I also really like Bea a lot, too.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 24, 2020 17:24:33 GMT -5
True! And these are already risk y times, I suppose. Mae and Bea are amazing, especially the development their friendship gets, but honestly my favourite character is the old guy with the telescope. I don't know. He's cool.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 24, 2020 22:39:06 GMT -5
Fair enough! He does play his own specially little part in things, so that is pretty nice. The friendship dynamic is also really cool and well executed throughout the game.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jun 25, 2020 14:09:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the tag. When my eyes recover from their current eyestrain I will read! Don't want to get too far behind!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 26, 2020 17:14:28 GMT -5
Fair enough! He does play his own specially little part in things, so that is pretty nice. The friendship dynamic is also really cool and well executed throughout the game. And how their conversations are... funny but meaningful. Honestly all the characters and relationships in the game are so well thought out.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 28, 2020 11:39:12 GMT -5
Absolutely!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jun 30, 2020 1:57:51 GMT -5
How y'all doing?
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 30, 2020 20:40:07 GMT -5
Pretty decent, I shall say. Not looking forward to working during the fourth because it'll be hectic, but oh well. How about you?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 3, 2020 2:35:45 GMT -5
Here and there. Had a bad week. Getting through it.
Got a new computer!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 5, 2020 12:19:43 GMT -5
A new computer is good! How's it running?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 5, 2020 12:56:19 GMT -5
Now I have to brave my fickle eyesight and sit and read! getting too far behind!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 6, 2020 2:42:11 GMT -5
It is running super nice!
Also, I found a really cool feature on Word. It will read out anything pasted into it. >:3 The power!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 7, 2020 17:08:47 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Do it whenever you have time and feel like it. There's no rush. I did try to make the font bigger in this story to help out like that, so I hope it does make it a bit easier for you mintedstar/fur🦇 Cool! I never knew that was ever a thing you could do on Word, and I've been using it for years!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 8, 2020 6:18:13 GMT -5
Oh no! Poor Hollowpaw! I love how you show her disorientation and fear after she was captured, I really felt for her...
I think she's going to escape tbh. Maybe a New Prophecy style breakout? Or will certain dead cats try and interfere?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 8, 2020 13:02:29 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Do it whenever you have time and feel like it. There's no rush. I did try to make the font bigger in this story to help out like that, so I hope it does make it a bit easier for you mintedstar/fur🦇 Cool! I never knew that was ever a thing you could do on Word, and I've been using it for years! Thanks so much. My eyes are really giving me trouble I see one of my 3 eye docs in a week or so to check the specs. I think it may mostly be that but it may also be a slow reaction to one of my glaucoma drops. I will try and read later today or this eve. Its really driving me nuts not being able to read or write for long periods of time like I love.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 9, 2020 0:12:09 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Emotion is always what I go for! The more I can make the reader the feel, the better. I'm sure she'll get out of it somehow. I mean, not much story left if she doesn't. Maybe it takes a while and other things happen first, or maybe not. Either way, she can never escape her spirit guides. phantomstar57 I'm so sorry! I hope things go well at your eye doctor and nothing bad is happening really. I'm sorry you can't read or write as well, either Hopefully, that situation gets better soon so you can enjoy those things well again!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 10, 2020 0:12:03 GMT -5
Here here what Sea said, Phantom! <3
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 10, 2020 14:50:37 GMT -5
Thanks Mint and Sea. Well I knew I had cataracts but it seems most of my issues are because of those. I could get surgery which I want to do to improve my sight to something it never has been before, but our Affordable care Act insurance SUCKS. And BIG time. We pay so much a month that with only 4 months of that payment would pay for the surgery! But our deductible is crazy high too. So the plan is, if I can deal with it until I turn 65 then I can go on medicare which is far better coverage that what we have. Its just insane. I'd get the operation tomorrow if I could.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 11, 2020 6:48:04 GMT -5
I mean, true. Well, I'm excited to see how she deals with whatever happens next c: Phantom, that sounds really tough. Take care!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 11, 2020 12:25:41 GMT -5
I mean, true. Well, I'm excited to see how she deals with whatever happens next c: Phantom, that sounds really tough. Take care! Thanks. It does bite the big one, but all I can do now is wait and hope a new pair of specs will get me thru until I can have the surgery..
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 14, 2020 23:28:48 GMT -5
I hope so! <3 Hang in there!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 22, 2020 2:28:14 GMT -5
Got to read again! You write a very interesting apprentice.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 23, 2020 4:23:10 GMT -5
Whoo whoo. Really making progress. Another chapter read.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 24, 2020 15:55:50 GMT -5
I'm managing a chapter a day by the looks of it.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 25, 2020 9:19:07 GMT -5
Nice chapter! Poor Hollowpaw, though! As for the poll, I would've answered "give him a chance" until I noticed a certain resemblance to your banner. So I'm guessing she shouldn't trust him.
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