Luckless -- a warriors comic -- updated 11/6
Apr 21, 2019 20:35:21 GMT -5
The Noble Dragon, tiger beetle, and 43 more like this
Post by 𝚜𝚙𝚊𝚛𝚔𝚜𝚌𝚊𝚝𝚝𝚎𝚛 on Apr 21, 2019 20:35:21 GMT -5
Hello everyone! I'm hoping to update this comic... enough to finish it eventually alkdjfal;dkjfakdjfad This is my first comic, so please feel free to give me tips and advice!
Art gets progressively better, and then worse cause i'm tired lkadjalkdjf
About
Cloverclan has recently had a series of mysterious deaths and Starclan isn’t easy to reach. Their words are jumbled and the only prophecy that has been spoken was broken and incomplete. As cats continue to get killed, they can only hope that Starclan will send them a cat that will be able to save them and figure out the mystery behind the deaths plaguing their clan.
(Blood Warning)
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Next we'll finally be getting into the main story! I said it before, but I should mention that Starclan is unable to speak to the clan cats for unknown reasons. Because of this the warning they are trying to give is incomplete.
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And the journey (officially) begins! I'm going to be testing a few things for coloring, line work, and style so expect some minor differences until I settle on something that fits. Thanks!
Ch 1 Pg 2
Breakdown in 3...2...1
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They finally got to the camp!
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There was a bit of a style change for this page, so it might look a bit different!
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Please note that cats don't actually wear glasses or use useful slides to explain things haha. This page made me want to commit I had so many issues with it. I apologize it looks off. But I had to get it up. It makes things hard to move the story forwards without Asher understanding the basics of the clans, so just take this as a somewhat lazy work around ^^;
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Everything finally hit him, poor boi
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Owlpaw you're the one who dropped him lol
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Winterpaw is an angel. He's the nicest one of the squad obviously haha
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Basically, Cardinalstar has been bringing in all non-clan cats she can find in hopes that one of them would do something to help, even if they were not a calico. Most of them left after hearing about all the death in the clan. Only Cardinalstar and Amberleaf know the details of the prophecy, so the apprentices had no idea who they were dragging along lol And look forwards to seeing what happened to Asher! His memory won't be gone forever.
Ch 1 Pg 15
Goldenstripes first official appearance! She's their deputy and Honeypaws mother. Also welcome Smallpaw, she's Winterpaws twin sister.
Ch 1 Pg 16
Frostfall has finally appeared! I really like her, and can't wait to do more with her. Chapter 1 is almost over, and we'll be getting more into the story soon. A bunch of new cats are introduced this page, but you'll see more of them later ^^
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Chapter 2 Cover
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Frostfall: Don't run away :) Asher: WAIT, what the f*ck does that mean? Don't walk away from me.
As the story goes on, we'll see more dens. But they're not super important so don't worry about not seeing them now.
Ch 2 Pg 2
ohoho, I wonder what Rabbitfoot has to do with Honeypaw reacting like that???
Ch 2 Pg 3
Sorry for the wait! Here's the next page. Poor Asher, not only is he now a cat, he also has to deal with children.
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Damn, this comic has been going for a year and we JUST got through the first day. I apologize for being terrible with time management lol
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Honeypaw doesn't currently have a mentor since Rabbitfoot died. He's a third wheel with other mentors usually lol. Also I was originally gonna have Asher have a dream (a classic event) but since in the story Starclan can't interact with the clan I figured it wouldn't make sense.
Ch 2 Pg 7
Backgrounds are hardddddd
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Sneak peak of the two other clans leaders! Ivyclan is led by Spiderstar and Rippleclan by Icestar.
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Seeing things in the fog? Maybe you should get checked out. That doesn't seem normal to me.
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And we're done with Ch 2! It'll probably be the shortest chapter.
Ch 3 Cover
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When you stop being dramatic and do something only to find out it's not that bad.
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RIP Asher, murdered by words. Though, she ain't wrong.
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Honeypaw found murdered in Miami
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This boi gay, good for him good for him. Well, time for Asher to get his tail handed to him.
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Asher that's not a very noble way to fight lmao
Ch 3 Pg 10
To no ones surprise, Smallpaw has far more skill than Asher here.
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Asher and Owl: if I do not tease Winterpaw I will die
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Things just got dangerous :0
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he wouldn't be the main character if he didn't jump head first into danger lol
BLOOD WARNING
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*gets tossed around like a rag doll* this is fine....
Ch 3 Pg 23
Protagonist eye color changes? Protagonist eye color changes.
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If it wasn't clear, the fox tore through the thick undergrowth and den so it was pretty beat up before even interacting with the apprentices lol
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And chapter 3 is over!
Chapter 4 Cover
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The kitties on the top left are the deputies for Ivy and Rippleclan! Beartuft on the left, and Stormwatcher on the right. The yellow kitty talking to Amberleaf is the Ripple meddie, her name is Duckpuddle.
Ch 4 Pg 2
Finally get to see more of the two other leaders lol
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Icestar is the oldest of the leaders and definitely took losing Starclan harder than the rest.
Ch 4 Pg 4
uh oh
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two lives with one swipe :0
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that bear is gonna kick everyones ass lol
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oh good, they're not just gonna leave her dsksdkjfsjk
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lots of people losing eyes lol
Ch 4 Pg 9 (also Page 69 overall lol)
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what she gonna do :0
Ch 4 Pg 11
war time babey
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and that's a wrap for Ch 4! Two more chapters left :0 edit: actually, three maybe lakjdlakjdf
Ch 5 Cover
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sun is just rising and they already managed to get themselves into trouble lol
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who's this old dude?
Ch 5 Pg 4
the town only recently expanded into clan territory (by human standards), but that still makes him old as hell lkajdlkajdfkj
Ch 5 Pg 5
Asher and Owlpaw voted most likely to be catnapped
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Winterpaw is the only owner of a braincell in their group lol Honeypaw is just as dumb as Asher and Owl, but he's cautious.
Ch 5 Pg 7
The house I used to live in had a mullberry tree and our cat would always hang out under it lol
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Professional worrywart Winterpaw. Wonder what Alder is gonna say when it's just him and Asher :0
Ch 5 Pg 10
Main character privileges of being told important info lol
Ch 5 Pg 11
Old man with connections (in Starclan)
Ch 5 Pg 12
Oh damn he knows O-O
Ch 5 Pg 13
Way to give it away so easily Asher XD Good thing Alder already knew.
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Page 100! I'm surprised I even got to this point with how bad I am at updating XD
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Chapter end! Two more to go!
Ch 6 Cover
Ooo new characters :0
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the secret come out, does asher is human?
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Starclan, as per usual, isn't much help XD A constant in every WC story
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I have some lore for Lilacs summoning, but it's all sad and everyone that matters dies in the end so I won't go into it XD
Ch 7 Cover
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from this page on expect blood and violence