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Post by embertuft on Feb 8, 2019 7:21:34 GMT -5
So basically this is a PMV which I actually have motivation to do for once Its basically Embertuft’s story which it’s about. ...
(Note:it’s not completed but almost is I guess) Plotline: It’s Embetuft and her siblings. Embertuft is the one with the curl, Smokepelt is the one with dots around her and the three small spikes and sorta curved ears. Blazefern is the one with nothing on his head and spikes on the side of his face.
At the start of the video (0:13 as I haven’t got an intro done yet) Embertuft And Blazefern are looking over Smokepelt’s dead body, who has been murdered by another Clan cat. Embertuft is sad at her death and Blazefern struggles, lashing out at his sister. He isolated himself. “From the perfect start” is from where they were kits, to Embertuft standing in her sisters blood.
Later, Embertuft is sat by the river, looking up at the sky and wondering if her sister is in StarClan. Smokepelt appears beside her, although Embertuft can’t see her. Afterwards, Blazefern is alone in his den, and Smokepelt appears to comfort him. He can see her and the two reunite.
Then, Ripplesplash, a SandClan cat, bursts through the undergrowth hunting a mouse, unknown to himself he has tresspassed onto DustClan territory. Embertuft is angry at him, but soon finds herself falling for him. Then there’s a small montage of the two meeting for a bit, and at the end Embertuft ends up having his kits... to be continued
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Feb 15, 2019 2:18:33 GMT -5
I like it! Good start! My biggest suggestion would be considering removing the shadow behind the text, since it makes it stand out too much, if that makes sense? It takes away from the art.
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 2:34:28 GMT -5
I like it! Good start! My biggest suggestion would be considering removing the shadow behind the text, since it makes it stand out too much, if that makes sense? It takes away from the art. Thank you ^^ I’m going to remove it once I get the art done- the shadow is a little annoying but I hadn’t realised that it was like that until I’d finished it.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Feb 15, 2019 2:43:10 GMT -5
I'd love to see the finished project!
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 2:46:10 GMT -5
I'd love to see the finished project! I started it when I was off school for a full week. Presumably I can finish the rest of the WiP/ change font by next week. Then I have to draw out frames/ add colour to cats and then the backgrounds. Might take a month this is the only project I’ve ever been dedicated too for once.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Feb 15, 2019 2:56:18 GMT -5
Yeah, makes sense! I'm trying to make one of these as well and it's taking about that long as well - probably longer - considering the fact there's life on general getting in the way. ^^ But it looks like you've gotten a really fair amount through! I hope that you get it all done to your satisfaction.
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Post by embertuft on Feb 15, 2019 3:00:08 GMT -5
Yeah, makes sense! I'm trying to make one of these as well and it's taking about that long as well - probably longer - considering the fact there's life on general getting in the way. ^^ But it looks like you've gotten a really fair amount through! I hope that you get it all done to your satisfaction. I mean I might look back at it and think”wtf is that shading doing there?” But I’ll be satisfied with it when it’s finished. It will be my first finished PMV.
Good luck with your project ^^
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Feb 15, 2019 3:04:52 GMT -5
Agreed! That's possible. I looked back at my first animation that way. XD But it's still your first, so you muster on and get better things done.
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