Post by UnsightlyHeretic831 on Feb 5, 2019 22:11:37 GMT -5
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Stormclan
Leader: Pollenstar - Golden Tom with icy blue eyes.
Deputy: Swanfeather - White she-cat with green eyes and a short tail.
Medicine Cat: Sunswirl - Brown tabby tom with glowing amber eyes.
Apprentice, Lilypaw
Warriors:
Mooneyes - Silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes and one blind eye.
Seastripe - Blue-gray she-cat with yellow eyes and white paws.
Apprentice, Hawkpaw
Snowfur - Light gray tom with copper eyes and darker stripes.
Maplestream - Calico she-cat with green eyes.
Apprentice, Hollowpaw
Pinefall - Orange tom with blue eyes and a white muzzle.
Mintfern - Black tom with golden eyes and white spots.
Apprentice, Dawnpaw
Hollytree - Black-and-white she-cat with greenish blue eyes.
Wrenpool - Dilute tortoiseshell tom with blue eyes and creamy flecks.
Apprentices
Hollowpaw - Dark gray tom with amber eyes and white spots over his eyes.
Lilypaw - White she-cat with holly green eyes with darker green flecks in them.
Dawnpaw - Creamy colored tom with yellow eyes and a long tail.
Hawkpaw - Brown tom with green eyes and a white underbelly.
Queens
Rosestride - Sand colored she-cat with blue eyes and white accents. Kits: Tigerkit, black tom with blue eyes and white accents, Birdkit, sand colored she-cat with green eyes and white accents.
Elders
Sorrelbelly - Ginger tabby tom with yellow eyes and a scar over one ear.
Snakeberry - Ticked brown she-cat with small green eyes and a white tail-tip.
Other clans in development
About
Lilypaw is going against Sunswirl, a traitor who want to destroy Stormclan. She does not know of this, and meets a cat who has accused him of betrayal. Lilypaw soon finds out the truth. He wants to rid of her and take reign of the clan. What will she do now?
Epilogue
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Stormclan
Leader: Pollenstar - Golden Tom with icy blue eyes.
Deputy: Swanfeather - White she-cat with green eyes and a short tail.
Medicine Cat: Sunswirl - Brown tabby tom with glowing amber eyes.
Apprentice, Lilypaw
Warriors:
Mooneyes - Silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes and one blind eye.
Seastripe - Blue-gray she-cat with yellow eyes and white paws.
Apprentice, Hawkpaw
Snowfur - Light gray tom with copper eyes and darker stripes.
Maplestream - Calico she-cat with green eyes.
Apprentice, Hollowpaw
Pinefall - Orange tom with blue eyes and a white muzzle.
Mintfern - Black tom with golden eyes and white spots.
Apprentice, Dawnpaw
Hollytree - Black-and-white she-cat with greenish blue eyes.
Wrenpool - Dilute tortoiseshell tom with blue eyes and creamy flecks.
Apprentices
Hollowpaw - Dark gray tom with amber eyes and white spots over his eyes.
Lilypaw - White she-cat with holly green eyes with darker green flecks in them.
Dawnpaw - Creamy colored tom with yellow eyes and a long tail.
Hawkpaw - Brown tom with green eyes and a white underbelly.
Queens
Rosestride - Sand colored she-cat with blue eyes and white accents. Kits: Tigerkit, black tom with blue eyes and white accents, Birdkit, sand colored she-cat with green eyes and white accents.
Elders
Sorrelbelly - Ginger tabby tom with yellow eyes and a scar over one ear.
Snakeberry - Ticked brown she-cat with small green eyes and a white tail-tip.
Other clans in development
About
Lilypaw is going against Sunswirl, a traitor who want to destroy Stormclan. She does not know of this, and meets a cat who has accused him of betrayal. Lilypaw soon finds out the truth. He wants to rid of her and take reign of the clan. What will she do now?
Epilogue
"It WASN'T MY CHOICE!" A brown tabby stood before Ashheart, a well-known deceased killer of the Dark Forest. His eyes glowed with fury as Asheart's tail lashed in annoyance. "Pollenstar made Lilypaw my apprentice. I didn't ask for it, you know!" He hissed, narrowing his eyes.
"Frame her!" Ashheart snarled back. "Kick her out of the medicine den. Sunswirl, you know other ways to get rid of her!" Her mouth twitched, as if she was going to say more. But she obviously thought better of it.
"You WILL find a way to get rid of Lilypaw," She snarled in Sunswirl's face. "Or deal's OFF!"
"I will, calm down and stop being dramatic!" Sunswirl spat, arching his back. "Stop nagging me, ashheart, or I will be the one to take the deal off." She stood up straighter, her fur fluffed up.
"Don't argue with me, peasant, ever AGAIN!" Her ears laid back, and Sunswirl bristled. "There will be consequences if you do that again, mousebrain!" She began to fade. "Be bright, Sunswirl, and get rid of that apprentice. Bonus: Try to get Hawkpaw as your apprentice instead, he is more ambitious and can join us in the destruction of Stormclan." Ashheart's body disappeared, but her blue eyes remained, staring at Sunswirl, as if they were looking at his soul. "REMEMBER!" I Will remember, Sunswirl vowed as the dream faded. I will. He opened his eyes and blinked sleep from them. There he was, in the unsuspecting world, where no one knew of his cruelness. He smirked evilly. "Lilypaw will be gone by the next two moons," He whispered to himself as he stood up, put on an innocent face, and padded out of his warm mossy nest to sort the herbs that Lilypaw was supposed to sort.
"Frame her!" Ashheart snarled back. "Kick her out of the medicine den. Sunswirl, you know other ways to get rid of her!" Her mouth twitched, as if she was going to say more. But she obviously thought better of it.
"You WILL find a way to get rid of Lilypaw," She snarled in Sunswirl's face. "Or deal's OFF!"
"I will, calm down and stop being dramatic!" Sunswirl spat, arching his back. "Stop nagging me, ashheart, or I will be the one to take the deal off." She stood up straighter, her fur fluffed up.
"Don't argue with me, peasant, ever AGAIN!" Her ears laid back, and Sunswirl bristled. "There will be consequences if you do that again, mousebrain!" She began to fade. "Be bright, Sunswirl, and get rid of that apprentice. Bonus: Try to get Hawkpaw as your apprentice instead, he is more ambitious and can join us in the destruction of Stormclan." Ashheart's body disappeared, but her blue eyes remained, staring at Sunswirl, as if they were looking at his soul. "REMEMBER!" I Will remember, Sunswirl vowed as the dream faded. I will. He opened his eyes and blinked sleep from them. There he was, in the unsuspecting world, where no one knew of his cruelness. He smirked evilly. "Lilypaw will be gone by the next two moons," He whispered to himself as he stood up, put on an innocent face, and padded out of his warm mossy nest to sort the herbs that Lilypaw was supposed to sort.