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Post by phantomstar57 on Nov 8, 2019 16:51:49 GMT -5
Finally got a chance to read this. I gave you five stars. Very good read with twists and turns.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Nov 8, 2019 21:08:54 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 No matter what, you are a gem and I love you. Keep doing all the good reads and being the awesome person that you are! phantomstar57 Thank you! Very glad you enjoyed! And thank you for being one of my most loyal readers and for the writing advice throughout the years.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Nov 8, 2019 22:24:46 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 No matter what, you are a gem and I love you. Keep doing all the good reads and being the awesome person that you are! phantomstar57 Thank you! Very glad you enjoyed! And thank you for being one of my most loyal readers and for the writing advice throughout the years. Most welcome :-)
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 9, 2019 14:50:54 GMT -5
Awwww! Thank you so much Sea. <333 Off to go read more of this now, since I would really like to have this lovey thing under my reading belt.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Nov 9, 2019 19:37:45 GMT -5
You're very welcome! And tell me what you think, please!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 11, 2019 4:27:48 GMT -5
Congrats, you did it!! That was a bittersweet but very good ending! Tide's "this Clan has been my paradise line" was almost heartbreaking and it brings home how much he's grown over the course of the story. Feather was a perfect villain to finish with, too - he's an excellent foil to Tide, being in a similar situation but unable to accept that he's to blame, and it was very nice to have him return. The epilogue is very sweet too, hopefully all their afterlives are a bit less complicated than their time in the living world! Anyway, congrats again and I guess I'd better go catch up on That Which Plagues Us...
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Nov 11, 2019 13:19:25 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Thank you so much! And thank you for being a loyal reader! I really appreciate it. Oh yeah, that line alone really got me, too, and I was the one writing it! Nearly made me want to cry a bit. I'm glad Feather was a good villain, too. Villains are by far the hardest for me to write for and not make them look like copies of previous ones. So, to have him turn out like he did is pretty good. Epilogue was the best part to write, I think. Very sweet and happy. Having Tide with Cloudstar and Storm forever is the perfect ending in my book.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Nov 15, 2019 17:27:14 GMT -5
Thank you for the excellent story! Death Wish has good variety in its villains, I think. They all have their own distinct motivations which makes them definitely not copies of each other. It's a perfect ending in mine too!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Nov 15, 2019 18:55:55 GMT -5
~Sapphire~It's not just the villains in this story that I worry about. it's all of them collectively in every story I write. Like, I don't want one villain to be a copy of another one from a previous story. It's probably not as noticeable then, but it'll always worry me, I think. Still, having the reassurance helps a lot. Do you ever find it hard to write villain personalities?
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Nov 22, 2019 22:37:44 GMT -5
Read a chapter here, but being called for eating/movie night! Might be back for more reading soon. ^^
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Dec 12, 2019 15:04:23 GMT -5
Boop
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Dec 12, 2019 15:56:34 GMT -5
Beep.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Dec 15, 2019 13:42:41 GMT -5
~Sapphire~It's not just the villains in this story that I worry about. it's all of them collectively in every story I write. Like, I don't want one villain to be a copy of another one from a previous story. It's probably not as noticeable then, but it'll always worry me, I think. Still, having the reassurance helps a lot. Do you ever find it hard to write villain personalities? Yeah, I can understand that, although again I don't think it's something you need to worry about! If it helps, though, some advice I've seen is to make the villains fit the protagonist of each story (like Feather being in a very similar situation to Tide). Tbh I'm mostly playing with canon villains right now so I dodge all of that entirely.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Dec 15, 2019 18:45:44 GMT -5
That makes sense, yeah. Thanks!
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Mar 15, 2020 18:11:20 GMT -5
This is a bump, so it's not lost.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jan 9, 2021 4:48:26 GMT -5
Boop!
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