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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 22, 2019 13:22:56 GMT -5
Ooh, a very interesting chapter indeed! I love how Tide's confrontation with Feather shows how much Tide's grown in terms of how he views his past. Not 100% sure if Tide and Storm are making the right decision killing Feather though - I have a feeling there might be consequences further down the line. And speaking of consequences, I'm very interested to find out more about Tide's mum... And Cloud's secret... Of course I want to see more of Feather! But only if you want him back, obviously
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 22, 2019 18:25:54 GMT -5
~Sapphire~Glad you enjoyed the chapter! feather may just make a reappearance, in a way. And Tide has definitely done a lot of growing and still will. After all, life is about growth, and he's had plenty of life and more left to go! Now, Tide's mother is a whole different topic to discuss, especially since there has only been one mention of her up until now. Cloudleap's never going to get a chance to tell his secret at this rate, though, lol. Thanks for the feedback, as always!
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Post by Pyropelt on Jun 25, 2019 11:32:08 GMT -5
Hey! Chapter 13 was good! I liked how Tide, Cloudleap, Algaemoss, and Flamingleaf all started talking about their ideas going forward. Interesting how they also talked about Sevenstar and Hollystar possibly teaming up more too.
Ooh that's neat how you have Feather show up! I had thought he died after fleeing when Storm fall over the side of the cliff. I think you did a good job, having him show up like you did! And awesome how you had Storm be so shocked in the beginning yet still have her tell Tide to kill him in self defense.
Thr fight scenes were nice and bloody.
I'm so glad Cloudleap didn't die right then. And I hope he can get his secret off his chest by telling Tide.
Woah Tide's mother showed up? Man, you're just full of surprises! Funny, I never really thought of how Tide talked of his father more than his mother. Even though he wasn't a good cat, he still got more screen time so far in the story up until now. But it's good that she showed up. Maybe she can offer some guidance about the living Clans' dilemma.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jun 25, 2019 14:05:09 GMT -5
OMG make me cry why don't you? LOL LOVED the end of that chapter. . . .
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jun 26, 2019 9:45:31 GMT -5
~Sapphire~Glad you enjoyed the chapter! feather may just make a reappearance, in a way. And Tide has definitely done a lot of growing and still will. After all, life is about growth, and he's had plenty of life and more left to go! Now, Tide's mother is a whole different topic to discuss, especially since there has only been one mention of her up until now. Cloudleap's never going to get a chance to tell his secret at this rate, though, lol. Thanks for the feedback, as always! Awesome, I can't wait! This might be completely off the mark, but was Tide's mother Feather's guardian, like Storm for Tide? And if so, what an interesting choice... Poor Cloud, he's spent the past two chapters hoping that there'll still be a Tide to tell his secret to xp
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jun 30, 2019 10:48:09 GMT -5
Pyropelt Thanks for the feedback! And, yes, I am full of many surprises :3 More are yet to come as the cats both unite and tear each other apart. phantomstar57 Not my intention, lol, but I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much! Favorite part? ~Sapphire~ It was going to be in the next chapter, but I eluded to it heavily enough. So, I can confirm that Tide's mother was, indeed, Feather's Guardian.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Jul 4, 2019 13:20:41 GMT -5
How are you doing, Sea?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 10, 2019 20:15:39 GMT -5
Caught up. Great chapter as usual, and looking forward to the next installment.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 11, 2019 18:07:44 GMT -5
phantomstar57 Thank you! Favorite part in spoilers?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 11, 2019 20:49:37 GMT -5
Ahh fav part.Tide meeting his Mom, and feeling her love. . .
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 13, 2019 9:35:24 GMT -5
@phantomstar57that always makes for a good time, huh?
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Post by phantomstar57 on Jul 13, 2019 11:43:30 GMT -5
@phantomstar57that always makes for a good time, huh? It sure does,
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 16, 2019 17:05:07 GMT -5
Called it And this was a really sweet chapter! A great breathing space after all that tension, and we finally found out what Cloud's secret was. Seems like I'm jumping ship... And Breeze seems really nice too, although I did feel sorry for Tide only getting such a short time with her.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 16, 2019 17:38:54 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Yep, you called it, for sure. Had that planned since the very beginning. Always good to have a breathing chapter, too, especially when more tension and excitement are to come... Many things have to be addressed yet: the situation with WaterClan and MossClan living together during a harsh winter, RockClan possibly invading all the territories, Feather (maybe) coming back at some point, and Tide's overall issue of the curse. We're gonna have some fun times ahead.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 19, 2019 14:57:29 GMT -5
Thinking back, I can see the hints. Like when Tide is a little too invested in whether Cloud's sexuality is accepted. And Cloud's demeanour in general. So yes, excellent planning! Ouch yes, definitely plenty to look forward to c:
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Jul 19, 2019 17:55:04 GMT -5
~Sapphire~ Thank you very much! Always fun to have people ship a pair and then have it actually be so, too.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Jul 20, 2019 16:38:59 GMT -5
Wish I could have that feeling more often. Most of the shipping conversations on my stuff focus on characters who I ship out of story but are very far from getting together in-story...
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Post by Pyropelt on Aug 1, 2019 3:28:07 GMT -5
Hey! Awww! You know something? I’ve been rooting for Tide and Cloudleap ever since they were new friends, hoping that it would develop into romance along the way. I’m happy for them! And it’s not like a big freak out moment either, after the battle with Feather. Tide just realizes his feelings and just accepts them, you know. I really like that! And I love how Breeze and Storm witnessed it! Oh cool! Tide finally got to know his mother’s name. Aww she was cute all bouncing around in joy for her son. Love the ending too. Great work as always!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 1, 2019 13:14:25 GMT -5
*flops in* Heeeeey! @.@
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 4, 2019 14:21:10 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 phantomstar57 ~Sapphire~Wolfyy- Pyropelt Maplestone360 scint Sorry for the hiatus there, guys! Things are really picking up, as I'm int he home stretch for college, but I managed to write this MEGA chapter to make up for it! Thanks for the feedback, as always, and please enjoy! The story is not over yet!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 5, 2019 15:20:10 GMT -5
Keep it up in college, Sea! You got this!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 7, 2019 17:14:00 GMT -5
Now that's what I call a mega chapter o.o You won't let RockClan win this, will you...
I'm a bit suspicious of the "okay to kill" strategy - seems like there's cats in MossClan and WaterClan who want war as much as Howlstar. But it does give Tide an interesting dilemma so I like it! Has Tide developed enough that he'll sacrifice his chance at paradise to save someone else?
Also his exchange with Cloud was so good and bittersweet, I really hope things work out for them... Good luck with college! You can do it
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 9, 2019 14:33:32 GMT -5
mintedstar/fur🦇 ~Sapphire~ Thanks for the well wishes for college! I'm sooo close! ~Sapphire~ With me, you never really know what will happen, muhahahah!
There are always some who will be willing and wanting to battle, if it seems to mean they are right or get the benefits of victory. In this case, victory would mean a lot of territory and prey in a harsh winter, which is quite the reward. The price just isn't very heavy for some.
Cloudleap is a good cat, so I'd say there is hope there. I cannot say for sure they will work out, but I will at least tell you that Cloud will not end up hating Tide. I can ease your mind that much, at least.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 10, 2019 10:26:11 GMT -5
Now that's certainly true xP And I'm glad Cloud won't hate Tide. Although I'm very scared that Tide will sacrifice himself to save Cloud
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 10, 2019 11:33:12 GMT -5
Oh, he might, but he might not. Cloud and Tide still have some conflicts coming their way, whether it's between them or something they have work it out together. There's still much excitement and drama to be had!
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Aug 13, 2019 2:05:34 GMT -5
I seem to be free for the time being, so I think I really need to get back to reading this. *insert excited staring here*
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 26, 2019 16:46:48 GMT -5
Never thought I'd say this, but yay Barkfur! I really like his arc - he's a fanatic to the end and he doesn't become nice exactly, but you show that there's still some humanity (felinity?) in him. Also, even though she's only in one scene so far, Cricketsong is amazing! That 'I was saving us'/'You were saving your greed' exchange gave me chills...
Good riddance to Howlstar! I think RockClan will have to merge with another Clan at least for a while - they're going to be in chaos what with losing their leader and trying to root out his influence, but seems like there's enough good cats among them to try.
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Post by 🍁Searipple101🍁 on Aug 28, 2019 9:35:56 GMT -5
I was hoping to give Barkfur some redemption and show he still had some good left in him, if even just a little bit. And I do enjoy Cricketsong already, too. She's pretty spunky. I also don't think I ever gave anybody chills with my writing before, so this is a very pleasant first :3
As for RockClan, they definitely have some work to do. That's all I can say about that. That, and that their work won't exactly be easy. None of the clans' work will be.
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