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Post by Dingoleap on Jan 7, 2019 0:02:33 GMT -5
Well, I'm glad you like the entirety of the story!
Gonna have to do some character sketches at some point.
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Post by Dingoleap on Jan 24, 2019 1:10:53 GMT -5
I promise I havenโt forgotten this! Iโll get the next part done when Iโm back from my adventure!
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Post by Dingoleap on Feb 2, 2019 15:25:53 GMT -5
Bump~
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Post by Dingoleap on Feb 28, 2019 16:50:56 GMT -5
Up
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Post by Dingoleap on Mar 29, 2019 17:01:13 GMT -5
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Post by darkfeather88 on Mar 30, 2019 8:45:15 GMT -5
(Wow... Smokepaw is very selfish... What right does she have to think that she is in charge... Makes me wonder what oath did she break...
Sunpaw, stay safe you sweet little cat. You are at least braver than mousebrained Smokepaw.)
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Post by Dingoleap on Mar 30, 2019 18:34:41 GMT -5
(Wow... Smokepaw is very selfish... What right does she have to think that she is in charge... Makes me wonder what oath did she break... Sunpaw, stay safe you sweet little cat. You are at least braver than mousebrained Smokepaw.) Smokepaw is selfish, indeed. She had a bit of a god complex, I suppose. When you spend your whole life believing that you're better than everyone else, its difficult to come down from that high. But yes, she is quite awful. And you shall see... eventually
And Sunpaw is such a sweetheart. I love her so much. She's even braver in most ways, really. Sunpaw has genuine cause to be afraid, but she's forging ahead regardless.
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Post by Maplestone360 on Apr 1, 2019 18:10:10 GMT -5
tHe SuSpEnSe
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 5, 2019 18:58:52 GMT -5
Still awesome. .. good suspense!
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