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Post by phantomstar57 on Nov 4, 2018 15:41:41 GMT -5
Loved Chapter three as Icepaw and his mentor spend bonding time together. We alos learned more about Reed Clan. Hope your depression gets better.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Jan 29, 2019 19:13:05 GMT -5
Bumping this up so I can post a new chapter later~
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Post by » ѕнαdσω ⚔️ on Mar 5, 2019 22:28:25 GMT -5
YES NEW MATERIAL FOR ME TO READ <3
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Mar 6, 2019 20:39:08 GMT -5
Chapter Four is now up! <3
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Post by darkfeather88 on Mar 6, 2019 21:47:43 GMT -5
(Curious... Though if Icepaw ever loses Snowblossom, there will be trouble. You cannot keep treating some like Stormfang does and not make them to break at some point.
...Why does Stormfang even hate him in the first place? It seems like he knows the prophecy...)
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Mar 6, 2019 22:57:31 GMT -5
(Curious... Though if Icepaw ever loses Snowblossom, there will be trouble. You cannot keep treating some like Stormfang does and not make them to break at some point. ...Why does Stormfang even hate him in the first place? It seems like he knows the prophecy...) The thing with Stormfang is that he never wanted kits. His relationship with Snowblossom was more on a one-night kinda thing. To make it worse (in his eyes anyways) his kit has freaky red eyes and it creeps him out. Plus, he's just a jerk lol
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Post by darkfeather88 on Mar 7, 2019 0:27:38 GMT -5
(Curious... Though if Icepaw ever loses Snowblossom, there will be trouble. You cannot keep treating some like Stormfang does and not make them to break at some point. ...Why does Stormfang even hate him in the first place? It seems like he knows the prophecy...) The thing with Stormfang is that he never wanted kits. His relationship with Snowblossom was more on a one-night kinda thing. To make it worse (in his eyes anyways) his kit has freaky red eyes and it creeps him out. Plus, he's just a jerk lol Then why in the world did he do the do? He could have, you know, talked about that fact that he didn't want kits, like a adult? Then again, he is a jerk. I'm glad that he got a good mentor at least. One that doesn't seem to judge him for his eye color.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Mar 7, 2019 2:30:26 GMT -5
The thing with Stormfang is that he never wanted kits. His relationship with Snowblossom was more on a one-night kinda thing. To make it worse (in his eyes anyways) his kit has freaky red eyes and it creeps him out. Plus, he's just a jerk lol Then why in the world did he do the do? He could have, you know, talked about that fact that he didn't want kits, like a adult? Then again, he is a jerk. I'm glad that he got a good mentor at least. One that doesn't seem to judge him for his eye color. I ask that about a lot of people too xP lol Jerks will be jerks, ya know? And yeah! Swanfeather is a kind cat. Icepaw will learn a lot from her
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Post by phantomstar57 on Mar 7, 2019 20:56:52 GMT -5
Good chapter, and description and wonder of the Falls. Good tension leading to the next chapter.
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Post by Pyropelt on Mar 13, 2019 0:33:46 GMT -5
I like Icepaw. He's cute and bold! I also think that Snowblossom and Swanfeather are great! Aw man I hope Stormfang won't do anything to Icepaw. I don't trust him. I love how you connected this a little to your other story!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Mar 13, 2019 8:38:17 GMT -5
Completely forgot to comment during your week, sorry, but I love chapter four! Your description of the glacier is just beautiful, it honestly took my breath away. And that cliffhanger - poor Icepaw, what a dramatic first day!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 13, 2019 12:31:34 GMT -5
Waits for Chapt Five. . .bumpity bump
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Apr 13, 2019 17:47:13 GMT -5
Waits for Chapt Five. . .bumpity bump Thanks for the bump! I plan to update this soon xP I just have been prioritizing the main series since it's almost done ^^
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Post by phantomstar57 on Apr 14, 2019 14:19:39 GMT -5
Waits for Chapt Five. . .bumpity bump Thanks for the bump! I plan to update this soon xP I just have been prioritizing the main series since it's almost done ^^ Totally understand-been working more on my own work lately-want to get Book III of my scifi trilogy out before I die LOL.
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Aug 25, 2019 20:29:32 GMT -5
Bump <3
Plan to update this soon!
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Post by ✲ριкαƒυєу✲ on Oct 26, 2019 0:11:59 GMT -5
Bump <3 Plan to update this soon!
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