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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 19, 2018 11:20:08 GMT -5
once you meet him in the story, it'll be real obvious where he came before XD Cool! :-)
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Post by Novi on Sept 22, 2018 22:02:49 GMT -5
mkay, so maybe you can help me. i have no idea how to describe the sound of a horn the way a cat would X'D not like a car horn or anything. like, a war horn type sound. it's not a honk or a beep or anything like that which is what my friend used to describe the noise of a horn. and later on i'll need to describe a gong o-o like, i'm already mixing and matching the realm (Chinese caste system, Roman houses, various ecosystems probably closer than they actually would be in real life), but i dont know if i'd toss a bear or something that would come close to the noise into the rain district. and i think it'd be a bit of a stretch for a tiger to be similar to the sound of the war horn.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 23, 2018 12:01:54 GMT -5
mkay, so maybe you can help me. i have no idea how to describe the sound of a horn the way a cat would X'D not like a car horn or anything. like, a war horn type sound. it's not a honk or a beep or anything like that which is what my friend used to describe the noise of a horn. and later on i'll need to describe a gong o-o like, i'm already mixing and matching the realm (Chinese caste system, Roman houses, various ecosystems probably closer than they actually would be in real life), but i dont know if i'd toss a bear or something that would come close to the noise into the rain district. and i think it'd be a bit of a stretch for a tiger to be similar to the sound of the war horn. Hmm it would mimic the call of a moose or elk, or an elephant, if they know what an elephant is.. They might describe it as a similar sound, but that its clearer and more steady. Like so-let me see .
The strange call reverberated over the land, a clear loud hoot, similar to the rutting bellow of a bull moose(or elk), but stronger with more carrying power. The warrior glanced at his companions.
"What can make that kind of sound?" he asked. . .
Or something similar depending on the characters. Hope that helps a bit.
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Post by Novi on Sept 23, 2018 12:10:49 GMT -5
i could maybe work with that? i'll try. lmao. thanks :3
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Sept 23, 2018 13:38:54 GMT -5
Post by phantomstar57 on Sept 23, 2018 13:38:54 GMT -5
i could maybe work with that? i'll try. lmao. thanks :3 Cool. IF you need further help wit it let me see the passage. If there is one thing I am good at is seeing and hearing things from the nonhuman pov.
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Post by Novi on Oct 6, 2018 3:08:11 GMT -5
alrighty. after ages, i've finally got the third part up. the layout has been updated and allegiances now include Zircon's friends.
i also changed the poll. i've already decided that i'll be writing Shywind's route as well, but for any extra chapters/side story-type deals, who's P.O.V would you also like to see out of the other houses? now, i know not much has been said about them yet, but i'd like to know based off what can be looked up about the house names and what role(s) you believe each house will play which one(s) you want to delve a bit deeper into.
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Post by mintedstar/fur🦇 on Oct 8, 2018 16:15:18 GMT -5
That is a GREAT avatar. XD
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Post by Novi on Oct 8, 2018 16:53:47 GMT -5
Thanks xD suits my October name
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