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Post by Fuzzymask on Aug 20, 2018 11:37:25 GMT -5
Soo, i want to soo what you guys think of my art!
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Post by Paws on Aug 24, 2018 8:05:41 GMT -5
I think the ink one is just too amazing for words...I never thought of turning a quill into a creature...I love the tail and the little beak <33
The feathers are just done so well! And the legs...god I could never pull off anything like that... The only thing in that piece is the leg anatomy could look a little more...smooth? idk... Maybe a wheel that it could rotate off of...
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Post by Fuzzymask on Aug 24, 2018 9:42:44 GMT -5
They're all really nice. I think practice and improving your proportions should be your next priorities. Even so, it's very detailed and centered around interesting subjects. Thank you! proportions have always been my enemy.
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Post by Fuzzymask on Aug 24, 2018 9:45:04 GMT -5
I think the ink one is just too amazing for words...I never thought of turning a quill into a creature...I love the tail and the little beak <33 The feathers are just done so well! And the legs...god I could never pull off anything like that... The only thing in that piece is the leg anatomy could look a little more...smooth? idk... Maybe a wheel that it could rotate off of... Thank you! I think if you try hard enough you can do something like this! Thank you for the suggestion! i had a very tough time with those legs, and I'm still not 100% pleased with them.
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Post by Fuzzymask on Aug 25, 2018 17:39:08 GMT -5
I think the first and last ones are beautifully imaginative and have that almost medieval kind of feel and style (that's what I see anyway lol) I love them! how each part id sectioned so boldly, they look like they could be made into stained glass windows. The only thing I really have any right to critique on is the cat cos that's the only area here I'm any good at. What could help bring out the fur texture a little more is making your pencil strokes match the direction the hair would go on the cat if you get what I mean. If you're going for a more realistic look, try not using such a dark outline for each part of the anatomy and try and blend a little shading into the lines to make it a little more dimension if you baguette me. The anatomy of that cat's face is pretty good if you ask me though so keep that up! Hope that's the sort of thing you wanted when you asked for critique, I don't want to come across as douchy know-it-all :'c Thank you so much! I don't see you as douchy! i asked for people to Critique my art and that's what you did! i have been having a bit of a hard time with colored pencils and getting my shading to look half decent! Your Critique will help me greatly!
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Post by Nephrite on Aug 26, 2018 19:36:30 GMT -5
I think your art is all really nice actually! The detail with your pencil sketches is very nice, omg. I'm not sure that I have anything to point out as far as critiquing goes?? It all looks very wonderful. You should definitely try digital art if you haven't already! Exploring different traditional mediums would be good as well, like paint or such.
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