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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2019 21:52:24 GMT -5
( OH NOOO D:
Yep. I think it had to do more of how they made the CGI lions talk. and a few other reasons. well the big part of it i didn't like was how Can You Feel The Love Tonight was done all during the day. Zazu was so cute though. cub simba and nala not so much )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2019 22:06:01 GMT -5
( And the whole can you feel the love tonight song was "eh". I mean it wasn't great but whatever. It was more like pop or whatever than slow and cute.
OH and there is NO TIMON IN A HULA SKIRT )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2019 22:13:16 GMT -5
( wait who did we say was finally going to put the pieces together that Crow was murdered by Ember?? )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2019 22:29:13 GMT -5
( they ruined a good movie. I can’t even remember if they showed Rafiki beating up the heyenas with his staff. but he looked creepy tbh and he’s one of my fav charries next to zazu from the lion king. and dont even get me started on the little mermaid i mean do they even know how ugly flounders are in real life???
oooh! i looove that idea! i also kind of want in some way let Crow help them as well idk how tho )
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inky
I'm a free woman again! At least until the semester starts up :D
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Post by inky on Jul 30, 2019 22:39:11 GMT -5
Crowleaf's eyes widens at the younger tom's hostility as his ears slightly lower, actually making him take a hesitant step back. "W-well.. I- I.." the tom stutters haunting memories of Talonstar being so hostile towards him to where it almost got physical crashing onto him like an unsuspected wave. The poor tom hated looking so weak in front of his family. He was an adult and this young cat was being rude to him yet all he could do in response was stutter. How pathetic was that. "... You're probably right... I wouldn't be much of help. Forget I offered..." the tom finally manages to utter out. Of course, he, in the end always talks himself down. Let's the other feline feel superior.
"You started it!" Nettlekit retorts to his younger sister's comment, annoyance in his voice as he also tried to get the leaf from his mother. Only for him to get side tackled by Ebonykit who no longer was interested in the leaf but more interested in playing with her brother. The two kits play fought while the younger of the three was still interested in the leaf.
( poor boy crow. so much mental abuse from his fake dad also I couldn't remember who was the oldest kit lol ) Sagegaze sighed as two of her kits started to play fight and she set the leaf down. "Do not touch it. Mama has something she needs to do." She said turned to face Embershade and Crowleaf who were behind her. Embershade lashed his tail, standing up a little straighter seeing that Crowleaf had backed down and didn't bother fighting for himself. "You wouldn't be." He growled turning his attention to Sagegaze who's face was enough to make his eyes go wide and for him to shrink down a little. "You are going to let him help you. And how DARE you treat him like that! Crowleaf has been nothing but nice to you since the one time I had to yell at him. Now you have the nerve to talk to him like you are high and mighty. He was helping his medicine cat in the den before you were even born!" The she-cat lashed her tail "Why would you want his help because I said so. Starclan help you if I heard you speak to ANYONE like that again." There had been two time Sagegaze had looked like this, the time her mate had snapped at Embershade when he was young and now. Boy was there a stark difference. Her ears were folded back and she moved toward the young medicine cat like she was ready to tear his ears off. As she moved forward the multi-colored tom shrunk lower and backed up obviously not used to being on the receiving end of this level of anger from his former mentor. "Respect those who are older than you and accept the help when you ask!" Her fiery gaze turned to Crowleaf. "And you. Stop selling yourself short, you know your way around herbs and you know it. Both of you go get along and if I hear any complaining who ever did it is going to find out just how much of my battle training I remember." Her green gaze darted between the two of them as her tail lashed in anger. "Now go and sort the herbs peacefully." She hissed at the two toms, more so focused on Embershade than her mate who hadn't really done anything wrong she just wanted him to know she knew his worth. Even Jadekit who had started to reach out for the leaf and had stopped middreach to look at her mother whom she'd never seen get so upset before. It was kind of scary actually, she though only warriors got like that. The small green eyed kit turned to her siblings bring her paw down and looking at them in shock.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2019 22:44:25 GMT -5
( after reading this all i can say is SH-T. GO SAGE! But I’ll have my reply up in the morning at some point. it’s 11:44 pm here sooo niiight! )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2019 22:47:13 GMT -5
( id much rather have a new black princess tbh.
it’s set in denmark.
awww yess i like that idea. )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 9:40:54 GMT -5
Crowleaf's eyes widens at the younger tom's hostility as his ears slightly lower, actually making him take a hesitant step back. "W-well.. I- I.." the tom stutters haunting memories of Talonstar being so hostile towards him to where it almost got physical crashing onto him like an unsuspected wave. The poor tom hated looking so weak in front of his family. He was an adult and this young cat was being rude to him yet all he could do in response was stutter. How pathetic was that. "... You're probably right... I wouldn't be much of help. Forget I offered..." the tom finally manages to utter out. Of course, he, in the end always talks himself down. Let's the other feline feel superior.
"You started it!" Nettlekit retorts to his younger sister's comment, annoyance in his voice as he also tried to get the leaf from his mother. Only for him to get side tackled by Ebonykit who no longer was interested in the leaf but more interested in playing with her brother. The two kits play fought while the younger of the three was still interested in the leaf.
( poor boy crow. so much mental abuse from his fake dad also I couldn't remember who was the oldest kit lol ) Sagegaze sighed as two of her kits started to play fight and she set the leaf down. "Do not touch it. Mama has something she needs to do." She said turned to face Embershade and Crowleaf who were behind her. Embershade lashed his tail, standing up a little straighter seeing that Crowleaf had backed down and didn't bother fighting for himself. "You wouldn't be." He growled turning his attention to Sagegaze who's face was enough to make his eyes go wide and for him to shrink down a little. "You are going to let him help you. And how DARE you treat him like that! Crowleaf has been nothing but nice to you since the one time I had to yell at him. Now you have the nerve to talk to him like you are high and mighty. He was helping his medicine cat in the den before you were even born!" The she-cat lashed her tail "Why would you want his help because I said so. Starclan help you if I heard you speak to ANYONE like that again." There had been two time Sagegaze had looked like this, the time her mate had snapped at Embershade when he was young and now. Boy was there a stark difference. Her ears were folded back and she moved toward the young medicine cat like she was ready to tear his ears off. As she moved forward the multi-colored tom shrunk lower and backed up obviously not used to being on the receiving end of this level of anger from his former mentor. "Respect those who are older than you and accept the help when you ask!" Her fiery gaze turned to Crowleaf. "And you. Stop selling yourself short, you know your way around herbs and you know it. Both of you go get along and if I hear any complaining who ever did it is going to find out just how much of my battle training I remember." Her green gaze darted between the two of them as her tail lashed in anger. "Now go and sort the herbs peacefully." She hissed at the two toms, more so focused on Embershade than her mate who hadn't really done anything wrong she just wanted him to know she knew his worth. Even Jadekit who had started to reach out for the leaf and had stopped middreach to look at her mother whom she'd never seen get so upset before. It was kind of scary actually, she though only warriors got like that. The small green eyed kit turned to her siblings bring her paw down and looking at them in shock. Crowleaf's blue eyes widen at his mate's angrilly filled tone of voice. He's only ever heard her this angry when he anapped at Embershade when young tom was just an apprentice. The black feline swallows thickly after he was scolded, he knew she was right. He sadly just had a load of self-doubt on account of his kithood. He glances at Sagegaze once more before slowly following after the multi colored ginger tom. Ebonykit and Nettlekit upon hearing their mother's harsh voice immediately froze not used to hearing it like at all. Both are wide eyed as they look at their younger sibling in shock. (blegh reply sorry )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 20:15:26 GMT -5
( "The sun loved the moon and the moon loved the sun but the sun can't shine unless the moon falls." What if like this is an omen or whatever??? )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 20:31:15 GMT -5
( I think it's from a poem But yeah i saw it and thought of Sage and Crow )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 20:36:16 GMT -5
( ooh what if this little thing that Ember and Crow have to do together slightly makes Ember like Crow but then something happens during it or sometime after that even further progresses Ember's hate for the black tomcat? )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 21:20:58 GMT -5
( oh yes perfect.
daaang Crow just has a bad case of luck. - bad fake dad - awful kit hood - falls for a med cat - med cat apprentice hates him to the point of killing him )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 21:30:43 GMT -5
( ying and yang or whatever
I mean someone had to get all the bad. why not it be him?
He doesn't want her to be in pain. He never does. If he could tale all of it and store it within him, even if he should die, he wants to do it - if it meant she would be okay.
I'm such a sap and a hopeless romantic. )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 21:44:29 GMT -5
( probably sage at some point during her pregnancy days: Nearly 2 moon together and you still look at me like I fell from Starclan Crow (smiles at her with a smirk on his face): Didn’t you? (I just made up a moon whoops)
this is all just stuff that pops into my head but this is something i came up with maybe like the morning before Crow dies? : "I don't even remember ever being home in the first place, ever. Except here, with you. Here feels like home." )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 21:52:11 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 22:19:48 GMT -5
( yes <3 && that's fine.
I actually have more quote things about Sage and Crow I'm working on anyway lol )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 22:46:46 GMT -5
( A few days after Crow dies.
I feel Nettlekit is the one to actually witness his mother's breakdown from Crow's death.
He would slowly make his way to her, and be all like, "Daddy says you need someone to remind you, that you're not weak. I’ll be daddy for you.” And Sage will look at her kit still sad but bewildered. “Are you not sad?” Sage watches his face, Nettle's sigh as his blue and green eyes close, his little lips struggle to find the words. “I’m you and daddy.” His eyes open, looking at her. “Ebonykit and JAdekit and you need daddy, I’m part daddy. You can be sad first, I’ll wait.” He nods, rubbing his little head against her shoulder. I see tears pricking Sage's eyes looking at him, he was everything good about Crow, he was all his wholesomeness, pureness, strength, and love. It was breaking her heart seeing everything he is, was, in this tiny kit he helped create. idk something like this.
I couldn't really think of something that Crow would say to make Nettle remind Sage of )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 23:04:34 GMT -5
( or even like "Daddy said you needed someone to remind you that you are the embodiment of the sun." idk.
But aahhhh my heartttt </3
DDDDDD:
but the thing in my writing that really got me was, "You can be sad first, I'll wait." )
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 23:20:38 GMT -5
(I love Nettle. Little clone of mommy and daddy.
He'll soon be the tom of the family.
Ya know like "You're the top man of the family now' type of thing. )
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