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Post by 🌿 Loѕтмoon 🌿 on Jul 8, 2018 14:23:18 GMT -5
(Im still trying to figure out what caln you said acougarstripe might be in lol)
Yeah, ive just been hanging around on the forums but havent really posted much. Ive gone through a load of practice exams which im glad for and summer break is pretty close too. But ive still got two speaking exams to go: my german and my english. My german just a practice but im still terrified. Though i'm mostly scared about my english since i HATE public speaking and am absolutely terrified of talking infront of loads of people. Im trying to be more confident and stuff but im still scared XD help me lol
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Jul 8, 2018 14:34:00 GMT -5
Ooh I'm so excited! Clover is my favorite)
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Post by Turtleshell on Jul 8, 2018 14:34:05 GMT -5
( ^.^
Oh gosh you’re still in school?! Golly my sisters been out for like two months now lol. Good luck with those practice exams!)
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Post by Turtleshell on Jul 8, 2018 16:05:45 GMT -5
Chapter 5 is up! Finally a better look into Mouseear!
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Post by Turtleshell on Jul 9, 2018 12:35:52 GMT -5
Chapter 6 is up!
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Post by Turtleshell on Jul 13, 2018 8:00:00 GMT -5
Change of series title...will fix the banner later...
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Post by Turtleshell on Jul 17, 2018 18:58:04 GMT -5
New banners up!
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Post by Turtleshell on Jul 20, 2018 6:09:55 GMT -5
It’s my birthday Yey!
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Post by 🌿 Loѕтмoon 🌿 on Jul 20, 2018 12:52:24 GMT -5
EEEEEK *tackles* HAPPY BRITHDAY TURTLE!!! <3
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Post by Turtleshell on Jul 20, 2018 17:44:47 GMT -5
EEEEEK *tackles* HAPPY BRITHDAY TURTLE!!! <3 Thank you Lost!!!! It’s been a great one my boyfriend took me shopping and to lunch at nordstrom’s Cafe. It was great! So much fun.
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 11, 2018 7:21:29 GMT -5
Chapter seven coming this weekend guys I promise! Sorry it has taken so long I started my new job and I’ve also kind of had writers block!
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 11, 2018 17:55:18 GMT -5
This is interesting. I read Chap one and will read more but my old eyes are tired. So will come back to this. Do fan me if you are keeping a fan page. and tag me when new chapters go up!
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 11, 2018 18:03:03 GMT -5
This is interesting. I read Chap one and will read more but my old eyes are tired. So will come back to this. Do fan me if you are keeping a fan page. and tag me when new chapters go up! Thank you. I needed to hear that. I’ve been having a really bad day and that helped make it a little better. I will update you for sure, thanks.
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Post by phantomstar57 on Aug 11, 2018 22:14:47 GMT -5
Glad to help . You put a lot of work into this. As you may not know I am probably the oldest here at 61. So don't fret if it takes me a while to catch up. I eventually do with tales I like!
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 19, 2018 12:45:33 GMT -5
Chapter 7 & 8 up, to make up for the long wait time! I cried while writing 8. Hope it is enjoyed.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 19, 2018 12:46:26 GMT -5
I'm about to finally start reading! I've been waiting to finish this book I'm working on
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 19, 2018 12:55:00 GMT -5
Oh cool! What have you been reading? I want to read something but I haven't had any time at all, lol. I'll probably just end up reading another couple of fics on here when I have time. They're free at least
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 19, 2018 12:57:01 GMT -5
I'm actually going to start on chapter 9 too, I've decided, once I go to the store and clean the house some more. That way I can just post it later in the week so you all don't have to wait over two weeks again, lol.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 19, 2018 13:20:27 GMT -5
It's called Woman of Courage and it was interesting until halfway through and I stopped reading)
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 19, 2018 13:29:55 GMT -5
Lol really? How come? It was just bad after halfway? Usually I run into the opposite problem where it's awful in the beginning but I hold out and it gets better.
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 19, 2018 13:31:17 GMT -5
Yea it was pretty bad. It was weird from the start anyway so I was hoping it'd get better but..it didn't. It's also really super religious and while I have beliefs, I'm not enough to read super religious books and stuff)
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 19, 2018 13:38:11 GMT -5
Oh yeah me neither, I definitely couldn't read that! Too bad tho Well, at least you tried lol
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Post by *MorningGlory* on Aug 19, 2018 13:39:11 GMT -5
Lol yea I tried)
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 21, 2018 13:28:24 GMT -5
Hey, if anyone has any critique or criticism please also share! I’m really looking to make this fic even better! If anything pops to mind guys let me know!
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 30, 2018 7:00:47 GMT -5
Turtleshell - Here are your reviews! They're pretty much the same, I just edited the criticism out of the second for your front page c: Any questions, please ask me! Vanishing Spirits is a lively read with plenty of twists and turns. The pacing is spot on, escalating the action without rushing, while the plot is never predictable and left me wanting to know more. I liked the use of point of view characters of different ages, showing the action from very different perspectives, and the strong voice of each narrator, which clearly establishes their personalities and relative maturity. Another plus is the villains, who are undoubtedly ill-meaning without being one-dimensional. However, I feel that more description of settings, characters and action would be beneficial, and some of the secondary characters could do with being fleshed out. I would recommend Vanishing Spirits to anyone who likes stories with young narrators, action and adventure. Vanishing Spirits is a lively read with plenty of twists and turns. The pacing is spot on, escalating the action without rushing, while the plot is never predictable and left me wanting to know more. I liked the use of point of view characters of different ages, showing the action from very different perspectives, and the strong voice of each narrator, which clearly establishes their personalities and relative maturity. Another plus is the villains, who are undoubtedly ill-meaning without being one-dimensional. I would recommend Vanishing Spirits to anyone who likes stories with young narrators, action and adventure.
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 30, 2018 8:25:11 GMT -5
Sapphire thank you so much! Your review is so wonderfully woven and articulated it’s perfect! The first provides me the criticism and critique I need to really make my fic better, and your second review is perfect for a front page spotlight! Thank you thank you thank you! As soon as I’m on my computer this week I’m going to give you some forum money as a thanks! It just doesn’t work on my phone, lol.
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Post by ~Sapphire~ on Aug 30, 2018 11:11:13 GMT -5
I'm really happy you like it! Your comment made me smile, first time I've got such an enthusiastic review of my review xD And that's so kind of you to offer me forum money, I was not expecting that
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Post by Turtleshell on Aug 30, 2018 11:49:49 GMT -5
It won’t be until the weekend unfortunately I don’t get on my computer much these days, but once I do expect that to pop up. I think I have some I’ve only ever given any once before.
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Post by Turtleshell on Sept 4, 2018 17:53:49 GMT -5
Sorry I didn’t get any chapters up this weekend! Boyfriend got hurt at work and was laid up all weekend, I was busy taking care of/spending time with him. Lol but promise to have them up soon.
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Post by Turtleshell on Sept 19, 2018 6:18:28 GMT -5
Sorry it’s been so long...got a promotion at work and been doing overtime since my boyfriend still can’t work with his injury and he just now got his first workers comp check yesterday finally. I’ll try to write more soon.
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