Post by Mother Dark on Jul 29, 2016 11:00:46 GMT -5
So this is the idea I've been working on. The part I have written doesn't have any real action and is basically just a character talking about events that have happened. I just wrote this so it's super rough and will need changed and I need to get more of an idea of will happen as there is not problem to resolve in what I have written.
Book 1
Allegiances
Skyclan
Leader Shadestar- Medium gray shorthair Tom with green eyes.
. Credit to xxfantasy
Deputy Lightningsong- Ginger tabby Tom with one green eye the other milky white from when he was sick years ago. credit to xxfantasy
Medicine Cat Meadowberry- Dark brown and tan tabby she-cat with green eyes and different shades of brown spots around her eyes and nose.
Warriors Dawnlight- Calico she-cat with silver speckles, a solid black paw, and black ears. credit to xxfantasy
Apprentice,
Darkriver- Dark gray she-cat with blue eyes. credit to xxfantasy
Apprentice,
Snowdapple- White she-cat with gray spots ringed with black like a snow leopard.
Apprentice,
Frostfeather- Dark gray dappled she-cat with white tipped fur in some spots and silver eyes.
Apprentice, Vinepaw
Rosebriar- Calico she-cat with ginger patches and bright green eyes.
Apprentice,
Fernfeather- Ginger tabby she-cat with white patches on her paws, legs, torso, and face.
Apprentice,
Barktooth- Dusty brown Tom with light brown eyes.
Apprentice, Foxpaw
Gorsefang- Black and tan tabby Tom with green eyes.
Apprentice, Volepaw
Apprentices Foxpaw- Dark ginger Tom with white chest and muzzle and bright green eyes.
Vinepaw- Brown and white Tom with gray-blue eyes.
Volepaw- Dark brown Tom with white speckles on his muzzle and paws.
Queens Willowtuft- Calico she-cat muddied with gray patches and green eyes.
Kits, Basilkit, Mintkit, Thymekit, and Sagekit
Bushtail- Medium gray longhair she-cat with green eyes.
Ivyheart- Brown and white she-cat with hazel eyes.
Ivyfoot- Black she-cat with green eyes.
Brackenheart- Gray tabby with yellow eyes.
Kits Basilkit- Black Tom with varying shades of gray dapples and bright blue eyes.
Mintkit- Calico she-cat with bright blue-green eyes.
Thymekit- Dull gray Tom with green eyes.
Sagekit- Greenish gray she-cat with dark green eyes.
Elders
Cats outside the clan
Constrictor- Light brown tom with dark brown splotches and eyes a light shade of amber. Brought to the territory by twolegs from a tropical place and abandoned with Mango and Dolphin.
Mango- Creamy yellow orange she-cat with spots almost red and green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Dolphin.
Dolphin- Light gray Tom with darker gray waves along his flanks like a river and dark green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Mango.
Prologue
A brown and cream tabby lay still as a rock. The stillness of the cat was broken only by coughs that wracked her skeletal body. The air was rank with the sour scent of death. She struggled upward wheezing and shaking at the effort.
“Shadebriar. Please. Get Meadowberry, it is time.” She rasped trying to catch her breath. Her life had been a cursed one since the disease had come she watched as each of her clanmates went to Starclan, everyone of them that she had watched grow as they formed their clan.
"What am I going to do without you? I may be your deputy but how am I to make the right deci Simons?" Shadebriar gasped pain glazing his trembling eyes. He couldn't think of life without her, she had just made him deputy a quarter moon ago.
"You are young, you will figure it out. You know what needs to be done and there are so many cats who will help you. Get Rosebriar to help Meadowberry with her duties. Now go. You know the decision you must make. You will be the leader of this clan now, Shadebriar, I trust you will lead them through this and any other troubles for many moons to come." The skeletal she-cat's words were broken up by heavy breathing and coughing similar to the sound of a helping dog.
"No please don't leave. I don't do it. Please at least give me an idea of what to do." The cat in front of Shadebriar once was a strong, awe inspiring leader who got her clan through many troubles but now she was reduced to a pile of bones, loose skin, and dull patchy fur. Her sides rose and fell getting shallower with each passing moment.
"It is up to you now, Shadebriar. You make the decisions and you will help the clan to safety." Her last words echoed in the deputy's ears as she took one final shuddering breath.
A small tan and brown she-cat came running up to Shadebriar only to find it was too late.
"I'm sorry, I was too late. We will begin preparations."
"Not as sorry as I am, Meadowberry. I just hope I will make the right decision." He murmured as he ambled away, he had some hard choices to make.
Book 2
Allegiances
Skyclan
Leader Shadestar- Medium gray shorthair Tom with green eyes.
Deputy Lightningsong- Ginger tabby Tom with one green eye the other milky white from when he was sick years ago.
Medicine Cat Meadowberry- Dark brown and tan tabby she-cat with green eyes and different shades of brown spots around her eyes and nose.
Warriors Dawnlight- Calico she-cat with silver speckles, a solid black paw, and black ears.
Apprentice,
Darkriver- Dark gray she-cat with blue eyes.
Apprentice,
Snowdapple- White she-cat with gray spots ringed with black like a snow leopard.
Apprentice,
Frostfeather- Dark gray dappled she-cat with white tipped fur in some spots and silver eyes.
Apprentice,
Rosebriar- Calico she-cat with ginger patches and bright green eyes.
Apprentice,
Fernfeather- Ginger tabby she-cat with white patches on her paws, legs, torso, and face.
Apprentice,
Barktooth- Dusty brown Tom with light brown eyes.
Apprentice,
Gorsefang- Black and tan tabby Tom with green eyes.
Apprentice,
Foxclaw- Dark ginger Tom with white chest and muzzle and bright green eyes.
Apprentice,
Vinetail- Brown and white Tom with gray-blue eyes.
Apprentice,
Volefang- Dark brown Tom with white speckles on his muzzle and paws.
Apprentice,
Apprentices
Queens Bushtail- Medium gray longhair she-cat with green eyes.
Ivyheart- Brown and white she-cat with hazel eyes.
Ivyfoot- Black she-cat with green eyes.
Brackenheart- Gray tabby with yellow eyes.
Kits Basilkit- Black Tom with varying shades of gray dapples and bright blue eyes.
Mintkit- Calico she-cat with bright blue-green eyes.
Thymekit- Dull gray Tom with green eyes.
Sagekit- Greenish gray she-cat with dark green eyes.
Elders
Cats outside the clan
Constrictor- Light brown tom with dark brown splotches and eyes a light shade of amber. Brought to the territory by twolegs from a tropical place and abandoned with Mango and Dolphin.
Mango- Creamy yellow orange she-cat with spots almost red and green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Dolphin.
Dolphin- Light gray Tom with darker gray waves along his flanks like a river and dark green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Mango.
Thymekit wriggled in his mossy nest in the nursery. It was too crowded now with Brackenheart, Ivyfoot, Bushtail and Ivyheart's kits on the way. Why did he have to wait two more moons before becoming an apprentice. Skyclan needed him and his littermates to be apprenticed more than ever; they were weak still after the horrible, mysterious disease killed so many cats. It took out everyone of he cats who had brought the clan back to life, and his mother too. He missed Willowtuft so bad, he had been so scared when she had gotten sick. Then the whispers started whether or not he, Basilkit, Mintkit, and Sagekit would survive without her with no other Queens nursing.
But even after all the trouble Skyclan had been through in the past few moons since he had been kitted, Thymekit knew that they were lucky. Skyclan had many brave young warriors that risked their lives to care for those who were ill and to search beyond their territory for a cure.
Rosebriar had risked her life to help her clan mates who had fallen ill. Undaunted by the fact that she was not a medicine cat or by her lack of knowledge of all but the basic herbs, she soothed the cats though she was unable to save them. The cats who journied beyond Skyclan territory were Thymekit's kin. Dawnlight and Darkriver were Willowtuft's first litter and as brave and courageous as Lionclan. The tale of their harrowing voyage was one of suffering and defeat as well as triumph and healing. They had faced the great unknown for the good of the clan without blinking an eye at the danger they faced or the chance that one of them might not return. On the journey they met a wizened, withered old cat that gave the two young she-cats not only the herbs they needed but also a foreboding prophecy:...
Thymekit shivered as the dark words echoed through his mind as though the were yowled deep in the gorge.
Well that's all I've got for now and I want to change at least half of it. Hoping to write enough so Thymekit will become Thymestar and Basilkit, Basilwhisker, the medicine cat.
I started writing this but it isn't finished and needs work.
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Book 1
Allegiances
Skyclan
Leader Shadestar- Medium gray shorthair Tom with green eyes.
. Credit to xxfantasy
Deputy Lightningsong- Ginger tabby Tom with one green eye the other milky white from when he was sick years ago. credit to xxfantasy
Medicine Cat Meadowberry- Dark brown and tan tabby she-cat with green eyes and different shades of brown spots around her eyes and nose.
Warriors Dawnlight- Calico she-cat with silver speckles, a solid black paw, and black ears. credit to xxfantasy
Apprentice,
Darkriver- Dark gray she-cat with blue eyes. credit to xxfantasy
Apprentice,
Snowdapple- White she-cat with gray spots ringed with black like a snow leopard.
Apprentice,
Frostfeather- Dark gray dappled she-cat with white tipped fur in some spots and silver eyes.
Apprentice, Vinepaw
Rosebriar- Calico she-cat with ginger patches and bright green eyes.
Apprentice,
Fernfeather- Ginger tabby she-cat with white patches on her paws, legs, torso, and face.
Apprentice,
Barktooth- Dusty brown Tom with light brown eyes.
Apprentice, Foxpaw
Gorsefang- Black and tan tabby Tom with green eyes.
Apprentice, Volepaw
Apprentices Foxpaw- Dark ginger Tom with white chest and muzzle and bright green eyes.
Vinepaw- Brown and white Tom with gray-blue eyes.
Volepaw- Dark brown Tom with white speckles on his muzzle and paws.
Queens Willowtuft- Calico she-cat muddied with gray patches and green eyes.
Kits, Basilkit, Mintkit, Thymekit, and Sagekit
Bushtail- Medium gray longhair she-cat with green eyes.
Ivyheart- Brown and white she-cat with hazel eyes.
Ivyfoot- Black she-cat with green eyes.
Brackenheart- Gray tabby with yellow eyes.
Kits Basilkit- Black Tom with varying shades of gray dapples and bright blue eyes.
Mintkit- Calico she-cat with bright blue-green eyes.
Thymekit- Dull gray Tom with green eyes.
Sagekit- Greenish gray she-cat with dark green eyes.
Elders
Cats outside the clan
Constrictor- Light brown tom with dark brown splotches and eyes a light shade of amber. Brought to the territory by twolegs from a tropical place and abandoned with Mango and Dolphin.
Mango- Creamy yellow orange she-cat with spots almost red and green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Dolphin.
Dolphin- Light gray Tom with darker gray waves along his flanks like a river and dark green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Mango.
Prologue
A brown and cream tabby lay still as a rock. The stillness of the cat was broken only by coughs that wracked her skeletal body. The air was rank with the sour scent of death. She struggled upward wheezing and shaking at the effort.
“Shadebriar. Please. Get Meadowberry, it is time.” She rasped trying to catch her breath. Her life had been a cursed one since the disease had come she watched as each of her clanmates went to Starclan, everyone of them that she had watched grow as they formed their clan.
"What am I going to do without you? I may be your deputy but how am I to make the right deci Simons?" Shadebriar gasped pain glazing his trembling eyes. He couldn't think of life without her, she had just made him deputy a quarter moon ago.
"You are young, you will figure it out. You know what needs to be done and there are so many cats who will help you. Get Rosebriar to help Meadowberry with her duties. Now go. You know the decision you must make. You will be the leader of this clan now, Shadebriar, I trust you will lead them through this and any other troubles for many moons to come." The skeletal she-cat's words were broken up by heavy breathing and coughing similar to the sound of a helping dog.
"No please don't leave. I don't do it. Please at least give me an idea of what to do." The cat in front of Shadebriar once was a strong, awe inspiring leader who got her clan through many troubles but now she was reduced to a pile of bones, loose skin, and dull patchy fur. Her sides rose and fell getting shallower with each passing moment.
"It is up to you now, Shadebriar. You make the decisions and you will help the clan to safety." Her last words echoed in the deputy's ears as she took one final shuddering breath.
A small tan and brown she-cat came running up to Shadebriar only to find it was too late.
"I'm sorry, I was too late. We will begin preparations."
"Not as sorry as I am, Meadowberry. I just hope I will make the right decision." He murmured as he ambled away, he had some hard choices to make.
Book 2
Allegiances
Skyclan
Leader Shadestar- Medium gray shorthair Tom with green eyes.
Deputy Lightningsong- Ginger tabby Tom with one green eye the other milky white from when he was sick years ago.
Medicine Cat Meadowberry- Dark brown and tan tabby she-cat with green eyes and different shades of brown spots around her eyes and nose.
Warriors Dawnlight- Calico she-cat with silver speckles, a solid black paw, and black ears.
Apprentice,
Darkriver- Dark gray she-cat with blue eyes.
Apprentice,
Snowdapple- White she-cat with gray spots ringed with black like a snow leopard.
Apprentice,
Frostfeather- Dark gray dappled she-cat with white tipped fur in some spots and silver eyes.
Apprentice,
Rosebriar- Calico she-cat with ginger patches and bright green eyes.
Apprentice,
Fernfeather- Ginger tabby she-cat with white patches on her paws, legs, torso, and face.
Apprentice,
Barktooth- Dusty brown Tom with light brown eyes.
Apprentice,
Gorsefang- Black and tan tabby Tom with green eyes.
Apprentice,
Foxclaw- Dark ginger Tom with white chest and muzzle and bright green eyes.
Apprentice,
Vinetail- Brown and white Tom with gray-blue eyes.
Apprentice,
Volefang- Dark brown Tom with white speckles on his muzzle and paws.
Apprentice,
Apprentices
Queens Bushtail- Medium gray longhair she-cat with green eyes.
Ivyheart- Brown and white she-cat with hazel eyes.
Ivyfoot- Black she-cat with green eyes.
Brackenheart- Gray tabby with yellow eyes.
Kits Basilkit- Black Tom with varying shades of gray dapples and bright blue eyes.
Mintkit- Calico she-cat with bright blue-green eyes.
Thymekit- Dull gray Tom with green eyes.
Sagekit- Greenish gray she-cat with dark green eyes.
Elders
Cats outside the clan
Constrictor- Light brown tom with dark brown splotches and eyes a light shade of amber. Brought to the territory by twolegs from a tropical place and abandoned with Mango and Dolphin.
Mango- Creamy yellow orange she-cat with spots almost red and green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Dolphin.
Dolphin- Light gray Tom with darker gray waves along his flanks like a river and dark green eyes. Abandoned with Constrictor and Mango.
Thymekit wriggled in his mossy nest in the nursery. It was too crowded now with Brackenheart, Ivyfoot, Bushtail and Ivyheart's kits on the way. Why did he have to wait two more moons before becoming an apprentice. Skyclan needed him and his littermates to be apprenticed more than ever; they were weak still after the horrible, mysterious disease killed so many cats. It took out everyone of he cats who had brought the clan back to life, and his mother too. He missed Willowtuft so bad, he had been so scared when she had gotten sick. Then the whispers started whether or not he, Basilkit, Mintkit, and Sagekit would survive without her with no other Queens nursing.
But even after all the trouble Skyclan had been through in the past few moons since he had been kitted, Thymekit knew that they were lucky. Skyclan had many brave young warriors that risked their lives to care for those who were ill and to search beyond their territory for a cure.
Rosebriar had risked her life to help her clan mates who had fallen ill. Undaunted by the fact that she was not a medicine cat or by her lack of knowledge of all but the basic herbs, she soothed the cats though she was unable to save them. The cats who journied beyond Skyclan territory were Thymekit's kin. Dawnlight and Darkriver were Willowtuft's first litter and as brave and courageous as Lionclan. The tale of their harrowing voyage was one of suffering and defeat as well as triumph and healing. They had faced the great unknown for the good of the clan without blinking an eye at the danger they faced or the chance that one of them might not return. On the journey they met a wizened, withered old cat that gave the two young she-cats not only the herbs they needed but also a foreboding prophecy:...
Thymekit shivered as the dark words echoed through his mind as though the were yowled deep in the gorge.
Well that's all I've got for now and I want to change at least half of it. Hoping to write enough so Thymekit will become Thymestar and Basilkit, Basilwhisker, the medicine cat.
I started writing this but it isn't finished and needs work.
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